The Songbird's Love Comments

nfau4714

Miss Jenny whyyyyyyy????!?!!!!?!?! Why did you go and leave me hanging like that??!!

Wcha

she admitted she's a hacker

Elisa Scalabrini

I am in love with this book

Marie hollend

love this

Gee Higgins

pan has to be her dad unread msg for 20 years...be from her dad..pan

I'm definitely team hot shower. I haven't taken a cold shower since I was a teenager and I doubt I ever will.

no way he is dead :-)

Beatriz Astorga Morales

LOVE THIS STORY!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH, DEAR JENNY! 🙏☺️👌

another great one

shanaaz shaz

💔💔💔💔💔

linda

she sold her legs even. 😭

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I really think A. is Eden’s brother... Perhaps he didn’t remember her... But if his body was taken and Dante could live with a kind of shotgun as he received it would be a possibility!!! 🤔🤔🤔

Christina Nevarez

what? Pan? what!? everyone knows who Eden os!? what!? ... makes sense she own the Edge since her dad died. I kept trhing to scroll down hoping to read more 😅. Sorry but I was not missing this type of cliffhangers. so ready for next update

Nancy

chapter 59: Poor Eden 😢 at least she doesn’t have a huge debt hanging over her head any more but still.. this is so sad.

Taina Iosefo

OMG... finally caught up on all the chapters... Jenny I swear you always amaze me with your storylines. Things are about to go down. hahaha

Tabitha Groves

Poor Loir.... 😞 I love his craziness.

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

Too many quick but risky decisions to take. I hope Eden's gut feelings are right! Though it's typical of Pan to show unannounced

Péntekné Horváth Andrea

wow!

Lei Kela

omg omg cliffhanger!!!!! i need to know what happens next. so excited! 💕💕💕

Pey Phang

chapter 85… * * * * * * * I hope Jackie was able to get him out if he was in the building ..

Alicia Flores

I knew Dante was not going to like to have Eden exposed like that he really loves her and he will protect her with his life... I hope they have a happy ending with baby's and all 😍

Kat M

Dante and Eden are perfect!

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

You got to be kidding me

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Oh! please, somebody would explain that to me? So, Adam is Dante now? Then, Dante and Eden are not really related... How is that Eden said Adam was her brother, but then again, not her blood’s brother? I’m sorry, I’m confused! 😔🤔🙄

SvS 🐝

You can do it Eden 💪🏻

Psylocke

finally! my suspicions were right!

Trisha R

Take them down!

Mina

Love Dante’s reaction to Ghost ❤️

Wendy Pisani Hertel

Just discovered this story. AMAZING READ!!! What an imagination Jenny Fox must have. WOW!!!

Marie hollend

🤣🤣🤣 love this chapter

Katie Greco Cole

awesome chapter! go Eden!

Satrupa Mohapatra

it's the illusion core is trying to form for her

Gemma5421

oh my gosh!! I didn't see that coming

Taina Iosefo

OMG OMG... I can’t believe there’s a hologram of PAN and then the Dragon asks Ghost while looking at Eden to join them. This is so so so so interesting.. I’m so excited for the next updates!! 😁

I love this book so much! thank you for this book!!! I cannot wait until it’s published physically!!! I’m thinking PAN is some sort of AI that her Father created to help Eden. maybe he can’t go past the core itself but virtually he can.

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

it can't be

Alicia Flores

I don't think they want to harm her but I don't like that they don't want Dante by her side 🤔🤔🤔

Edina Owens

omg.... i got chills😖😖😖😖

Penny A Foxie

84 Oh they are playing dirty! Its got to be a total fake. They are disgusting. 😡

rosie

let him know tiger! no peeking loir 🤣

Karine Provencher

great story so far

I knew she loved him!!!!!

lmao I can’t with Loir 😂💀💀 poor guy is just curious after all🤣 but I thought it was so cute of Dante to basically propose to her like that. you can really see just how much he loves her!! theory: what if they had met a long time ago? and now that Dante has met her again, he’s not willing to let her disappear so easily again. hence he put a tracker inside of her..

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

mind games to buy time! Dante please do something to bring her out

Andreea Melinda Mirza

I wonder who her contact is

Edie Gyorki

thank you for the updates!!

Reader-299919

love it Jenny!

Shana Sanregret

OMGosh! I am loving this story as much as Lady Dhampir!!! you are an amazing writer and I can’t wait for the next chapter.

Taina Iosefo

76 It’s time for reality. I hope everything works out for these guys. I know Dante will do anything to keep Eden safe and vice versa. They love each other too much to not worry about the other. Thanks for another amazing book Jenny!!

Francheska Johnson

I love Eden and Dante’s relationship- how he adjust to meet her needs and is happy to push just enough to get what he wants but only because she wants it too. I feel like they have a previous relationship she’s unaware of... waiting the next update!!! 🤗🥰

side note: I really think everyone should give Lior a thank you once in a while!

Ludmila Bacova

Loir still tuning in 🤣

lol. silly loir likes to tease his kitties 😂🤪

Stephanie

This is my favorite story and wish people would give Jenny a chance. I hope it comes back soon.

Reader-875591

holy moly!! this is so good!!!

Raluca Iolanda Dragoi

Eden will lead the army the new Edge! Dante will go crazy but both will fight against the Core! I realy hope you will give them a happy ending!

Satrupa Mohapatra

woww what a turn of events.. I think there might be a possibility that Eden's mother is alive and in subburg

how long between updates or is it random?

jen

LOIR!!!!!😱😫😭

Lauren Rendero

noooooo....!

Penny A Foxie

76 Here comes the action! I just hope they all make it out alive! So worried for them, Dante will do anything to keep her alive. I just hope he doesn’t sacrifice himself or something :/

I Love this story. It just makes me smile.

why !!!?? why would you do this to us on a Friday night Jenny 😭😭

Drawkser

Dante’s reaction 😍😍😍

Jennifer L. Giambrone

excitedly ready to read all over again!! ❤️

I love this story!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

So sad!!! 🥺🥺🥺 But I love Dante supporting her like that... Hope Eden wasn’t feeling so angry to him, Dante is just trying to help her 😔😔😔

SvS 🐝

oh yeah, Eden finally gets the recognition she deserves 💪🏻

Roseam

Hahaha Mario Kart 12. Love when Loir is having fun. I want to know what's in the files.

SuperWhoFly

So sad to see her mom circle like that. Great writing.

Ahlie

❣❣❣

PoisonedPix

Loir is the best lol

Tablur Spel

brilliant, awesome cliffhanger 👍

Pan and Ghost reunited, , can't wait for next chapter

Anita Mara

ahhhhhh!!! i want more!!! need more chapters!!!

Taina Iosefo

she’s getting closer to knowing who her father was… yay!! hahaha

Reader-397104

Wow ! 😍💙💖❤️💜

Trisha R

Eden! Ahhhhh!!

xian

omg I can’t wait for next chapter

Ieva Igaune

I hope she won't beleve it, or Dante will pull her through this.. They are a team..

Ludmila Bacova

so heartbreaking 💔😢

linda

Do they have a past together? Minds wiped, still feeling the attraction without remembering? ❤❤

Reader-299919

nooo Jennyyy don’t leave us hanging like that! 😱

Kat M

Dante and Eden are couple goals

Maria Patricia

🎶🕊️♥️💕💕💕💕💕

Beatriz Astorga Morales

wonderful chapter! 🙏👍🤗

Deimena Veikšienė

This is so exciting, just when I think it can't get any better you do this. 🤭Jenny you are a queen of cliffhangers keep it coming! 🤩

Ludmila Bacova

taking in the fake perfection before continuing in battle

Natural Mystic

Keep going Jenny, I have enthusiastically read all your books on Deame and have followed you to AS. No one is perfect and even though others have opinions about TSL only you know what your truth is. Fully supporting your writing journey from Aotearoa.

Katie Factor

Ahhh.... I love Eden and Dante!! 😍😍😍 I just hope they end up together at the end!

not all over again!!! but Jenny I love you and I love your commitment to the reeders and controversial topics. it takes a lot to start back over on your story. I’m here and I’ll be reading it all over again with you.

Michelle Hill

idk how Dante gets everything ready so fast

Jessica

can’t wait for the next chapter I’m hoping for more Eden and Dante moments ❤️😍

Reader-986715

🥰🥰🥰 i love you too Dante!!

Roseam

I had a feeling her mother wasn't real. That phone conversation has always bugged me.

Web Bookworm

YES! she finally gave into her feelings ❤️ love love this story. I reread it a couple times to fully grasp everything since you hide such good details!

M NC

you are an amazing writer good job

minime_29

Ugh.. All these troubles just for one specific zodiac animal, which I found not even racist.. 😩 I hope they can solve the issues. I miss our kitties and Loir. Best of luck Jenny ❤️

SvS 🐝

How can anyone not love Loir? 😍

Emelie Ejderhall

Wonderful re-read! Thank you Jenny!