The Songbird's Love Comments

Penny A Foxie

91 The governor is a monster and her father isn’t much better… I had a feeling Pan was just a consciousness in the machine. Hopefully this means they can bring it down together.

Jennifer L. Giambrone

that was awesome ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Maria Patricia

it was too emotional! loved it 🥰

Web Bookworm

maybe the governor is Adam! I feel like we are going to know him from somewhere previous in the story...

I’m having anxiety about Dante 🥺🥺🥺💔 how he said she will be ok and not they as in them 😔 I really really love Dante! I hope he and Eden don’t die! or Prometheus 😭 thank you for another update Jenny! I love it!!

SvS 🐝

pan is already my hero ♥️

Wow, Pan, This is so incredibly sad.

Kat M

that's so sad!

Maria Patricia

i really liked the end! thank you for this amazing , brilliant, emotional, adventurous, romantic story! i really enjoyed this journey 😌❤️💖 Jenny Fox 🦊 you're awesome!

Reader-397104

love the update! what’s going to be next?

Every chapter is one cliffhanger after the other! It’s so good!

Auras Laura

i am sad that is finnished😔 congratulations Jenny, you're great🥰

Auras Laura

my god sad but good🥰

Beatriz Astorga Morales

So sad! So terrible way to know about his older brother… 🥺🥺🥺

Alicia Flores

I feel so bad for Pan 😢 I really hate the Govenor 😡 I hope Eden finds a way to end these madness but maybe Pan wil be no more 😰😰😰

Soph Hugh

oh my heart!

Maria Patricia

and yes... Loir.... missed him ❤️

Sky Queen

It took a lot in me not to cry

Soph Hugh

heavy chapter! poor Eden doesn’t catch a break

Ieva Igaune

The last sentence is epic 🤣🤣

Silky Gupta

Loirrrrrr❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

SvS 🐝

I’m so excited to read the next chapter but also terrified thinking of possible outcomes 🙈

SvS 🐝

what a great epilogue! thank you Jenny for giving us such a greae story 🥰

shanaaz shaz

❤❤❤

Beth Wiles

I cried…so heartbreaking. Great writing,thank you so much Jenny

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Poor Eden if she needs to choose between destroy the Core or kill his older brother 😭😭😭

Web Bookworm

Still crying ❤️❤️❤️

Beatriz Astorga Morales

My god!!! what a sad story about Pan… 😭😭😭 But I like the way he has taken care of Eden… 🙏🙏🙏

Nancy

Something tells me that Pan’s brain is in one of those tanks and his consciousness is trapped in the core 😢

oh my heart!!!! please, don’t let anymore die Jenny 😭💔💔💔 she can’t lose Dante, not the only last person she truly loves and needs the most 😭😭

OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.

Meredith Boswell

how perfect but wretched of an ending. I love it

Mia

#92 First of HAPPY BIRTHDAY JENNY 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 🥰🤗😘♥️🎁🎈🌈🍀🍾🧸🛍🪄 🎂🎊🎊🎊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊 Hoping your day will be amazing, filled with lots and lots of lovely surprises 🥰🤗🎊🎊🎊

Mia

#92 First of HAPPY BIRTHDAY JENNY 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 🥰🤗😘♥️🎁🎈🌈🍀🍾🧸🛍🪄 🎂🎊🎊🎊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊 Hoping your day will be amazing, filled with lots and lots of lovely surprises 🥰🤗🎊🎊🎊 Second Holy…..🤯🤯🤯🤯 This chapter was intense and soooo much mooore… Loved every bit! Felt like really I was in there next to Eden🔥🔥🔥 Thank you for this amazing story! xoxo

Mia

Really good update Jenny xx Thank you!!

Andreea Melinda Mirza

Oh no! 🙀

Christina Nevarez

#85 Crazy I just decided... Loir has to be alive, Jenny wouldn't let those puppies die, if Loir died, who saved the puppies!?

Bonib2

Darn, cannot wait for the next update Jenny. I hope they make that governor eat his words.

who is here seeing the correlation with what's going on in the real world and this? it's like 1984. imagine 100 year and they read this like OMG.

Alicia Flores

I wonder where is Pan 🤔 is he the one who does the experiments? is he a prisoner there? did the Core colect only his brain or something ceepy like that?😲😵 I need an update 😬

Iani328

worst cliffhanger ever!!! I don’t think I can’t wait anymore! I need resolution Jenny! great chapter though. :)

Reader-397104

wow very action packed update and the cliffhanger. How is he and Pan on the same floor?

Omg… I just found the translation of the French song Loir was singing. It’s a bit sad, given the situation. Look up “Non, Je ne regrette rien” by Edith Piaf. It means “No, I don’t regret anything” 😭😭😭

Each chapter gets better and better!

SvS 🐝

noooooooo not Loir!!

hpearce15

Wowzers Jenny that last bit I was holding my breath! I hope it’s not as it seems in this case!

for me, the best cliff hanger of all your stories yet!

Anne Embery

this is so exciting, I almost feel like I'm there lol.

Mina

Loir, you brilliant crazy cat 💔❤️💔

nemone van Der bliake

it's getting so tense and exciting

Maria Patricia

well dear Jenny Fox 🦊 thank you once again for another amazingly perfect story! too emotional, adventurous, romantic fantasy! i really loved it 🥰❤️ you are a brilliant Author! please, please never stop writing! i hope we readers make your hard work worth it ❤️ Good bye songbirds love!

SuperWhoFly

Maybe his mind is going to be with them in the computers?

Reader-671139

Such a great ending :-).

oh Dante 😂🖤🖤 he’s definitely my type and my favorite 😏🖤🖤🖤

awesome chapter.

xian

so good!!

Hehhe love Dante's personality

shanaaz shaz

amazing

nfau4714

I know wexre all hoping for a lil plot twist for Loir, but honestly..... Miss Jenny don't let everyone live. She pulls the heartstrings forreal forreal. ❤RIP Loir❤

Kayla.southerland88

I LOVE this book!!!!

Okay and where has he been hiding this whole time like sir???? There's a whole war going on outside

I knew it! I really hope they can destroy the core without killing Pan!

Auras Laura

he can not be dead😔

Nikki

Wow... It's heartbreaking, yet amazing at the same time

A bittersweet chapter

Gee Higgins

oh I didn't want Dante to die perhaps there's a way to save him he seems part machine with his brain???

this book is soooo 360 from TWKF and TWGF!!! I absolutely love those two books! and I’m really liking this one! Loir just cracks me up! I’m not that far into the book yet, but it’s really good so far!! 🥰

Soph Hugh

I am on a roller coaster of emotions

😭😭😭😭😭😭 poor eden and pan.

Mia

Ummm

PramG

I hope what the Governor saying is not true! Please don’t let Dante died. My heart can’t take it. Hope Eden will find a way to stop it all.

m.espva

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Floryna AO

this story is beautiful but so heartbreaking 💔 😢

I didn’t think that would bring me to tears like it did 😭

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

My deepest respect, Loir. Still hoping he made it though

Robin

@jennyfox I can’t believe you killed Dante 😭💔

Reader-397104

great update! love learning more about the past nice break from the action but hard choice coming for Eden. love your writing Jenny 💙❤️💜!

No this is heartbreaking

Alison Johnson

oh no! I hope Loir managed to pull off something crazy and get out! :-(

Ludmila Bacova

a great chapter! so looking forward to the next one. ❤

omggg I can’t stop this feeling of nervousness!!! I’m soooo worried about Dante! I swear if he dies, I’m dying too 😭💀 I swear if Eden loses him, it will be a heart break like no other 😭💔💔

Meg Roberts

oh.....

Roseam

I don't usually cry, no matter how bad things are going. Jenny you have tears in my eyes and my heart is hurting. Brilliant writing. 💔

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

I knew Loir was special. I miss him

Kathryn Ngatuakana

bro i cant believe dante dead, why is it most of the times the main character has to be hurt by losing love ones and close friends😫😫😫is she going to get a new version dante, yea nah i would rather the old version he was prefect too imprefect for eden.. lol you know how to twist our hearts jenny😂😂

Psylocke

the whole time Eden has been with Pan I’m wondering how Dante is doing. I mean hadn’t he lost a lot of blood?

Nikki

That was great!

OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.

OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I’m still waiting for Pan to save Dante… You know, something like Eden going home (wherever it be) and she suddenly smells a tasty pasta, that delicious pasta Dante used to cook for her 🙏😭😭😭😭

PramG

Wow! What a chapter? Please don’t tell me that Pan is the Governor???

Web Bookworm

I really hope Loir isn’t dead. But if he knew his ending was coming, I hope he snuck Jack and the pups out for Eden ❤️

Mina

my heart is heavy 💔 truly amazing writing Jenny 🌟

Mina

Another great chapter, Jenny! ❤️ hope Eden doesn’t fall for their tricks 😐 looking forward to the next chapter, love this story! ❤️❤️❤️

😢😢😢😢

Reader-555364

Wow. This is going to be one HELL of an ending! 😮😬

Adin Nahk

they are in the middle of it how can he just died

Kayla Elliott

ohh I love this book!! Jenny you are the BEST!! as always 😏

Karine Provencher

i think Loir is not dead…

. . . . omg!! I'm crying so bad right now!!