Unhinged Comments
Sherisa Weston
Hmm Osiris is doing the same things Titan did but to Kiya. The only difference is he is not trying to rape Kiya
01/14/2021 12:23Justmee
***sigh 🥴!! I'm so torn now 🤧! Everything in me wanted to hate Osiris 🤬! Now I just don't know. I do feel as if he's become the very people he's hated for over a century. He has allowed his hate to make him just as horrible. I get it though. I'm going to read these last two chapters again. My heart is just to heavy right now. How could I feel so bad for the monster Osiris? I'm starting to wonder who is the owl? Maybe it's Osiris first love? Sheesh 🤔! Thank you Marii for another fabulous update. As always you have my mind on one thousand 🤯😳! I love every bit of it 🥰
01/14/2021 11:53Kelly Rohrer
WOW!! I now have compassion for him! Neron is 100% correct they need to burn down the old Zircon Moon and rebuild that terror of a pack! Great job on these chapters 💜
01/14/2021 10:24Meryam Ahsan
I reread chapters 70-71, Kiya doesn’t love him completely, but she does love him. She may have said that it was because of the pain of the mate bond but I think despite the horrific situation there was in fact some bonding there before any of it happened. Has he done enough? I don’t know- but he was not the same person who rejected her, just as she isn’t the same child who committed suicide
01/14/2021 07:54Spectral Beauty
I do feel for Osiris. What a horrible way to grow up! Zircon moon has a terrible history (and Neron was worried about tarnishing his family legacy...) BUT, exacting revenge isn’t going to heal him, as Kiya is starting to figure out with herself
01/14/2021 07:07Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
Osiris doesn't realize what he is doing is no different from that Alpha Prince?
01/14/2021 06:45Lois Withers
okay now I dont know how to feel about osiris lol
01/14/2021 06:32Cata Deveza-Yap
Jonathan should be scared by now.
01/14/2021 06:29Brittney Allen
Neron is better than his predecessors because of his mom, onyx, and his friends especially Kwame. These people are the reasons he has redeemable qualities. I'm not tean Neron. I'm team Onyx! I love me some Onyx because he loved himself some Kiya and Artemis and he tried to protect them even in the first book. He hid that Halima was Neron's mate to protect her and tried to stop him from abusing her but he couldn't. I think a wolf can only do as much as a human will allow them. As many times as he has tried to take control Neron was. able to. push him back. Only when Neron was asleep was Onyx able to fully take control and protect Kiya and Artemis from Darien and Odessa. Osiris is guilty of the same sins as the Prince family. He treated his mate like crap. Kidnapped and forcibly marked Kiya. His actions are not justifiable. He should have used his "great avatar" powers to free Halima from her hell. Where was his all seeing smoke when she was being brutally raped, beaten, torture, and starved to within a inch of her life on a day to day basis.
01/14/2021 06:25Cata Deveza-Yap
"Never tell a woman to calm down!" 🤣 -Hell yeah! Okay, back to reading!
01/14/2021 06:10Alyssa
Oh my!!! So much to unpack here. The Prince family has a cursed bloodline. My goodness, those Prince Alphas are just horrible!!! That Jonathan also wanted Neron to mark Kiya by force. Power hungry, heartless men. However, that Osirius is no better than them!!! He also kidnapped Kiya and marked her by force!!!
01/14/2021 05:52Gwendolyn D. Pough
Okay so even though I can’t be Team Osiris because he crazy, I would still pick him before Neron. 😂😂😂😂😂 No seriously, with his backstory I feel his need for revenge. But I would have more respect for him and his need for revenge if he wasn’t forcing other people into it. if he is really so powerful take his own revenge and leave Kiya out of it. He would be perfect anti-hero/dark-hero potential if he was fighting his own battle.
01/14/2021 05:44Elsa Rodarte
that’s it?
01/14/2021 05:21Baby Angel
why can’t I read chapter 45??
01/14/2021 03:40Elizabeth S. Clark
when is the last two chapter on the unhinged comes out?
01/14/2021 01:00Teresa Calhoun
waiting on book 3
01/14/2021 00:23bumblebee90
I don’t normally stick books out to the end as they all become abit silly but I have just finished book 1 and am still enjoying it don’t think I have cried so much to book!! hope book 2 keeps up the good story
01/13/2021 08:03Lillian Okoro
when is the last chapter coming.?
01/13/2021 06:54Amarfis De Los Santos
Neron physically and emotionally abused this girl for 8 years. She was only 9 years old when he and his father deprived her of her freedom. Just a little girl when they started inflicting this type of abuse on her and allowing an entire community to do the same. Why does everyone think is ok for her to go back to her abuser, because they are mates? because he is sorry now? When you are abused and broken the way she was is ok to forgive those that inflict the abuse on you because it takes away their power over you and gives your soul the peace it needs to start healing, but it is not ok to just go back to your abuser. I will finish this book because it is a VERY good story line but I am bracing myself for dissapointment
01/13/2021 05:30Reader-229728
I’m sure this has been asked, but how often is this book updated with new chapters? is there an update schedule or just whenever it’s updated?
01/13/2021 03:11Reader-008277
In what chapter did Neron give Kiya the necklace?
01/13/2021 02:27Geraldine Ferraren
I hope Kiya will consent for Neron to mark her. Also with the hint of Jonathan's car missing, he is definalty involved in this.
01/12/2021 08:20Christine Londo
why do I have the feeling Osiris and Johnathon know each other. the ex alpha did something to Osiris for him to want to destroy that pack so bad too!!
01/12/2021 02:50Jael Brown
Am I the only one who goes back and reads the last few chapters to pass the time while waiting on the next chapter. There are no other books worth a decent read on this app that I have read so far
01/12/2021 02:06Elizabeth Edmondson
It takes serious talent to publish chapters while still writing a book, without leaving plot holes. I've read hundreds of books across a few apps and this is the best author I've read.
01/12/2021 01:34Ellouise Hitchcock
I need the next chapter to this book! omg these books are amazing and you are a very talented writer. you’ve had me laughing and crying with the characters since book 1, it’s like I can see the scenes in my head as memories. beautiful writing. I hope Kiya can find it to accept Neron. I know he was a knob back in the day, but he genuinely seems to have woke up and smelled the coffee, as it were, and feel genuine remorse and actually wants to take the time to earn her love and trust, I hope they have a happy ending even if not with each other (although I pray it’s together). Nikolai should’ve tore Johnathan a new one, literally, piece of shit he don’t deserve to live. him and Odessa and kiya’s spent and egg donors. idiots. but still I love these books. can’t wait for the next chapter xx
01/12/2021 01:11Sherisa Weston
Neron should not feel guilty for letting Kiya go. He couldn't have made her stay he wanted to. She wanted to leave and if he forced her to stay she would have hated him and so would her friends and family
01/12/2021 00:56Sherisa Weston
Osiris caused the car accident. Cerberus caused the dent in the car and caused the collision.
01/12/2021 00:54Sherisa Weston
Guys it is not his father Neron said he wanted to kill and thinks took his mate, he is talking about Osiris. How are you all missing this?
01/12/2021 00:46Sherisa Weston
I love Raina's reaction. Did you all realize Neron is going to disband the pack and probably start from scratch with the four members he can trust?
01/12/2021 00:37Sherisa Weston
Is this the final in installment or is there going to be another one? Would that be the last one?
01/12/2021 00:34Taina Iosefo
OMG... they need to get rid of Jonathan and Osiris. I hope Neron and Onyx can get to Kiya quickly. Hope Darian doesn’t do anything stupid. hehe
01/11/2021 21:22Roza Pestana
oh so maybe Jonathan is working with Osiris? Jonathan must have told Osiris that kiya and her family left so that bastard sent Cerberus and the rouges to attack them. The rouges were just a diversion to keep Kiya's family busy so Cerberus can abduct Kiya
01/11/2021 19:26Brittney Allen
Could Osiris be the son of Jonathan's brother? Going back to Untouchable Jonathan's brother killed the Luna and their daughter to get back at his brother but did they ever say why he did it....let me go back and read that part again...
01/11/2021 17:46Raven Dark-fhang
i love this series so much! i am on the edge of my seat begging for more. ❤️❤️❤️
01/11/2021 16:56Satui Maui'a Laufau
thank you for the update! I cannot wait until the next installment! let’s go Neron!
01/11/2021 15:16676lucy
this story line is just so good and it’s very real in real life too hence why I can’t stop reading this and not cry when reading it lol. Being abused, neglected or raped is still happening today and what she’s going through the constant battle with mental health because of her trauma is exactly how it is in real life especially when being confronted with it. I have to say the details are spot on and a job well done you deserve every positive feedback coming your way 😊
01/11/2021 14:25Ana Pizarro
I can’t wait for the next update❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
01/11/2021 13:10Jael Brown
If Raina and Neron forgave themselves and truly apologized to Kiya would she be able to find a place in her heart to forgive them. All three of them need to heal and they can't until they let go of somethings. Guilt is eating away at Neron and Raina and it's not good. Just like the anger is tearing away at Kiya.
01/11/2021 13:03Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
Go, Neron! Go and save Kiya!
01/11/2021 12:51Jael Brown
Now did Jonathan really sign his soul over to satan or did it already belong to him. I don't think this evil bastard caused the accident but he was definitely following Garnet Moon to wait for his opportunity to snatch Kiya up. And if he did cause the accident where is the coward now?. Osiris hates the Prince family with every fiber of his being so would he work with Jonathan, I don't know. Oynx is so cute and very intelligent he has always known or at least suspected that Kiya was his mate and yet Neron choose to ignore him when he earned him to stop hurting Kiya. I am glad Neron and Raina realized that their selfishness not only hurt but ruined Kiya's life. I can't wait to see what Neron has in store for Zircon Moon it seems many of the pack members are old dogs set in their ways. You can teach an old dog new tricks but it's hard to change the mind's of those who are older because many of them refuse to accept change. Even though Neron is the new alpha many of them are still easily dissuaded by Jonathan. Not only that many of them are weak willed and easily influenced. Neron definitely has his work cut out for him. I don't think Neron would be able to kill his father, Jonathan is an asshole but he is still his father. Something big is going to have to happen to get Jonathan to soften his heart, what we just have to see. I can't wait for the next chapter, or chapters I pray.
01/11/2021 12:24Justmee
***lawd 🙄! I knew Jonathan was somehow connected to this. I'm just not sure how? If Osiris has her how will that help Neron's pack? Or does Jonathans' hate for his son's mate out weigh everything else? I have so many questions 😅🤔! This book is so addictive. I'll be here checking every hour for the next update 😂🥳🤧🥴
01/11/2021 11:55Kelly Rohrer
Ommggg!!! Great chapter! Dying for the next one! I knew that asshole of an ex-Alpha had something to do with it!
01/11/2021 11:28Reader-113080
A must read, not much of a book worm but I definitely enjoyed this one, so many twist and turns and I love the little quotes. I do hope that Neron is given a second chance in love.
01/11/2021 08:31Cata Deveza-Yap
Who are you going to kill Neron? Jonathan or Osiris? Why do I feel that Jonathan was like Odessa. He sold himself to Osiris too. 🤔
01/11/2021 07:35Cata Deveza-Yap
"Dad's car is missing!" He is the one behind the car crash! 🤔 Of course, I am not sure. 😁 Okay, I'll continue reading now...
01/11/2021 07:03Brittney Allen
another awesome update! sounded like he was going to disband the pack? my love got onyx grows more and more with every chapter😍🥰 even as a puppy he loved Kiya and Artemis 😍🥰 poor onyx to love someone and then have to watch his human and others hurt her without being able to stop them. 😭😫 Can we get another chapter with just his point of view like with him and Artemis date?
01/11/2021 06:38Spectral Beauty
Oh snap! So Jonathan’s car is missing and wasn’t at the accident site...but Neron suspects it was he who kidnapped Kiya...ohhhh boy...
01/11/2021 06:35Jael Brown
Odessa and Darien are mates, 😫😫😫😫😫 Ugh. Why wasn't the mate bond strong enough to make her forget about Neron. Odessa knew for awhile Neron was not her mate so why hold on to the hope that he would love her. I know he cares for her, she was his first in many ways but being someone's first doesn't mean you will be there last. How is it that Neron just abandoned his feelings for her to say that he was in love with Kiya and no longer Odessa. I hate her but I do feel sorry for her, no cares for her and that is a hurtful things. Even though she is reaping what she showed.
01/11/2021 03:00Reader-217547
how often do you release a new chapter?
01/11/2021 01:13Alyssa
I have tried to distract myself with other books on this app as I am waiting for updates and I must say that your books/stories/writing are of superior quality Marii. It’s like you are giving us filet mignon and then there’s McDonalds 😀😀😀😀😀😃
01/10/2021 19:12Kirsten Burmeister
I really hope neron leaves this pack for good to be with kiya..even if they won't be proper mates, as I am not sure how I would feel about this. do you plan for there to be a 3rd book or will their story be completed with this book? and may Johnathan burn in hell, freaking prick..
01/10/2021 14:29Kat Layman
i love this book iv not been able to put it down and cry sobbing for neron i cant wait to read how he leaves his pack for her and her wolfs love i hope they make a new pack and she can be nerons luna she would be a great luna and they have pups of there own
01/10/2021 08:55Elle 🧿
I have a feeling Johnathan is behind this or working with Orisi 🤨. Am I the only one who doesn’t feel any romantic connection or doesn’t want a romantic connection between Kiya and Darien 😅🙊? Also, when he looked at the necklace, I just feel he’s hurting, he’s heart broken in such a bad way. I do hope that he finds someone (like a second chance mate), just not Kiya. Is it wrong that I am slightly excited to see what happens with Orisi and Kiya (forbidden feelings 😂🙊). However, I am still routing for Neron and Kiya to end up together 🙌.
01/10/2021 07:25Legend of Gru
I genuinely appreciate the sacrifice which Neron made for Kiya and makes me toto for their friendship even more. Any potential relationship between Darien and Kiya that’s not platonic......I highly doubt. Before the whole Odessa thing, they were the bestest of friends and him fighting with Kiya and protecting her blind spots was doing what a friend would do. With all that’s happened especially Osiris adult-napping Kiya, I actually feel sorry for Neron. It’s going to tear him apart when he finds out. Maybe this is when we’ll discover what or who Diana is 🤔
01/10/2021 06:09MirahLove
literal tears running down my face reading this chapter 😩
01/10/2021 03:31Christine Londo
how often do you update. this book gets better and better
01/10/2021 02:29Reader-828631
I cried for Kiya and Neron - Alpha Jonathan brainwashed his son, Neron Prince use to beg his father to spare her when he was younger , He spewed hate and birth hate in Neron Apha Jonathan is dangerous and Neron will kill his father .Something fishy going on with him
01/10/2021 00:54Reader-828631
I’ve never cried so much over a damn book Gees
01/10/2021 00:47Roza Pestana
I hope Phoebe can help find Kiya. Maybe use a tracking spell
01/09/2021 22:20Reader-219069
nice suspense on the recent update. I’m literally trying to wait until it’s done, but I can’t stop reading lol
01/09/2021 21:36Shannon Reed
So good!!! I know it would seem ideal for Kiya to end up with Darien, but, ..., I'd like to see her with Neron. 🤷♀️
01/09/2021 19:06Amarfis De Los Santos
I don't think she should end with Neron. Although he has changed, he really hasn't made any sacrifices for her. He should have never asked her to kill her rapist, he should have done that himself. I also think that if he really loved her, he would leave that pack and follow her were she is happy and can heal. I don't think he should he the one to stay with his pack and for her to be Luna of a pack that damaged her so much. No one there is willing to sacrifice anything for her. Why should she become their Luna and give them the protection of her wolf? Even when she fought Tristan Neron said to her "is a crime hurting a pack member" so he smack her with that when it wasn't a crime when they were hurting her. She shouldn't end with him. He may have change but I think is out of guilt for his own behaviors, not love.
01/09/2021 17:11Reader-087914
I would love it if Diana was Nuria and that she is there to watch over Kiya. But I would love to get here back and be mated to Darien. That would be awesome. And that Jonathan give up his life for his daughter to be with his mate. or something in the lines of that. Maybe Neron and Kiya can kill him together.
01/09/2021 16:53Shazam
read the first.. now reading this.. you certainly manage to write in a way that draws people into the book.. when reading, you feel as if you are part of what is going on.. so many Emotions, elation, tears of joy, tears of sorrow, anger at how some have acted... I could go on, but I just couldn’t do it justice.. definitely a recommend read.. fantastic.. x
01/09/2021 16:44Sherisa Weston
I love how Darien protected Kiya. When Kiya said she felt like the odd one out because mates were comforting mates and then Darien came up to check on her hehe
01/09/2021 15:52Sherisa Weston
hmm I wonder if Kiya was meant to be Darien's second mate. He seemed jealous when I assumed he saw the necklace Neron gave Kiya. Hmm Darien and Kiya used to date but broke it off because Darien had a mate but now he doesn't hmmm
01/09/2021 15:51Taina Iosefo
Someone needs to get rid of Osiris once and for all. I really hope her parents got her message and will be asking Neron for help and hope he does everything to help find her and bring her back. I hope Kiya fights and stays strong with Osiris trying to make her turn. I hope she can find a way to get rid of the mark he gave her. But what was that with Darien? Was he really not liking the necklace around her neck or did he notice the mark on her neck? He seems more protective than before. Can’t wait for the next update!
01/09/2021 14:07Jael Brown
Mario the suspense is killing me, damn this book just keeps getting better. In the first book didn't Darien and Kiya date for awhile or were they always just friends. I am sure he has always had feelings for Kiya but never truly acted upon them because she was not his true mate. Because of this fact the remained good friends. I am pretty sure while Odessa was busy scheming and even though he was somewhat out of it he knew what was going on with the mark on Kiya's neck. Is the billow of smoke Osiris's true form, can he not stay in his human form for to long. if he is an avatar like Kiya was does he need the rogues and Cerberus to his dirty work when he can do it himself. I am so glad none of her family is dead, I was hoping they all would make it. Now the true battle will begin, hopefully Kiya will be the victor and not a victim. I hope Osiris kills Jonathan though.
01/09/2021 13:39Krexroat619
I wonder if Darius was meant to be Kaya’s second chance mate that the moon goddess had offered her after her suicide?!? I had thought this early on when he was first introduced, but we then discovered his connection with Odessa. Shortly after Kaya and Neron’s connection started growing as well, so I put that thought aside. Now, I wonder if after Darius rejected Odessa if he might feel the pull towards Kaya. So he may have been staring at the necklace Neron gave her? .....or I’m completely wrong and due to his experience with Osiris’s dark magic he may have sensed the mark on Kaya... 🤷♀️ #MyCurrentTheories 😅 Thanks for the updates! You are an amazing writer! I truly love how intense and in-depth your story plots get.
01/09/2021 13:14Yahaida Perez-Lemon
I knew it was him! Bah! I can't stand Osiris! I wonder if Darien still had traces of Osiris and that's why he acted funny? They both had negative reactions to Neron's necklace. But it's getting good. I hope they can kill Osiris.
01/09/2021 09:15Spectral Beauty
Sooo Darien seemed extra protective. Making up for his lost time with Odessa, or something else?? 🤔
01/09/2021 09:12Gwendolyn D. Pough
I was actually considering ‘shipping Osiris and Kiya but now I am not. Putting the family in danger and sending a monster to hurt and kidnap us not the way to a girl’s heart. I am still not team Neron yet though so... I guess I’m team Kiya kicking ass and taking names forever!
01/09/2021 07:09Brittney Allen
awesome update! first off yay!!! everyone survived!!😪 phew had me worried there for a hot minute 😅 Secondly is Darien more upset about the photo or the necklace? 🤔 will there be a bong chica bow wow reunion between Darien and Kiya where he confesses his undying love...or shall he be a casualty to unrequited love😫😭😭😭. join us next time on Unhinged: Kiya's Revenge 😆 🤣 😂
01/09/2021 07:02Alyssa
I need Kiya to kick Osirius ass and Kill Jonathan
01/09/2021 06:34Cata Deveza-Yap
She was taken again! I still wonder how she would defeat Osiris and Cereberus? Neron, help!
01/09/2021 06:23Satui Maui'a Laufau
any updates??? ohhh I need Kiya to stop being so damn stubborn.. I think it’s Neron’s dad plus the damn vampire. I could be more than likely wrong. 🤷🏻♀️ awesome story!
01/09/2021 00:54Yahaida Perez-Lemon
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
01/08/2021 20:42Christine Londo
I love it , but she too private he can probably help her but she won’t tell him she got bit!!! and because of you I found my love to read again!!❤️ thanks
01/08/2021 17:12kittyXO
I need more!! please pretty please!!❤️
01/08/2021 15:42Aobakwe Monaise
I feel like Kiya might fall in love with Neron despite the mate bond. I really like how the author thought up these characters. ❤️
01/08/2021 08:53Elizabeth Turner
Its like I'm a herorin or crack addict! I keep checking for an update every 5 mins because I need a fix! I NEED to know what happens! Amazing job on the series, I can't wait to see what happens next
01/08/2021 03:55Reader-008277
Do y’all really think Jonathon would be so foolish as to mess with Nikolai? He’s warned him and Jonathon agreed that he is no match for him. I think this is Osiris’ doing. I think he sent his demon child Cerubus to try to destroy them and take Kiya. I hope they kick his butt , kill him and send him piece by piece back to his daddy Osiris
01/07/2021 23:43Shannon Reed
Unhinged, Chapter 42, ..., EXCELLENT! 🥰
01/07/2021 23:40Raven Dark-fhang
i need more story!! don’t leave us hanging!
01/07/2021 23:07Crystal Spears
I don't mean to be pushy but... PLEASE add more chapters!! I'm dying here!! What happened to the car, Jonathan or Osiris? Is Neron gonna get to them in time??
01/07/2021 21:29Taina Iosefo
NO NO NO NO.... this can’t be happening... why didn’t she open it sooner why didn’t she say to turn around... this is al Osiris doing. I hope Neron finds and saves them especially Kiya. That was the most purist bond I read and felt when Neron and Kiya we’re saying their goodbyes. I’m so sad. what’s next....
01/07/2021 20:01Reader-003394
I love Neron and Kiya together. they have grown together and I believe he may be the only one to save her from Osiris. please please pleeeeeeeaaaase can you write faster , I’m dying here waiting lol
01/07/2021 15:51Emna Makni
ok.... i am crying..!!!
01/07/2021 12:52676lucy
is this book updated on a specific day and time or just whenever the author updates it? just so I can set my alarm 😂 this book got me hooked!!
01/07/2021 09:31676lucy
fxcccck I can’t!!
01/07/2021 04:34Dollsenz Oui
surely they end up together. they can't live apart. they are still mates. I'm still crying.
01/07/2021 02:32Nathalie Iliana Van Kerckhoven
I am crying. Had Flash backs to the point Where my ex broke up with me, Leaving me behind with our 7 week Old baby girl. The discription how Nemen Felt... well that's Real stuff. It cost me three years to get over the break up... and I am not even a Where wolf. Beatiful Writing
01/07/2021 00:52Cheryl P Westmoreland
OMGosh!! I’m in tears 😭
01/07/2021 00:28Jamee Moore
Notice how Kiya mentioned if she ever gets pregnant, her food cravings are gonna be very interesting. Maybe that's a hint in the future perhaps?
01/06/2021 23:09Geraldine Ferraren
I am crying too 😭😭😢😢😢😭😢😭 I want Kiya and Neron to be together, Moon Godess! make a way lol
01/06/2021 23:02Spectral Beauty
Chasin’ You by Morgan Wallen came on today and it just works with this newest chapter (42) 😭😭
01/06/2021 22:15Ashley Delmage
when will the other chapters be released
01/06/2021 20:33Silvia Stomp Gummels
i want some kiya and neron romance
01/06/2021 18:52Jenn McCoy
yea I cried 😢 😭 its so sad. he is so sweet i know he was a duche before but damn how I want them together. I feel like they will be pulled together again just going to have to fight Osiris. I feel like he is taking his chance on capturing her again.
01/06/2021 17:50