Unhinged Comments
Lois Withers
you are pure evil!!!! lol the suspense is killing me this is sooo awesome!!!!!
11/18/2020 13:07Taina Iosefo
Seriously... I wonder if Kiya notices the hickies on her neck or upset with what Artemis did or maybe it’s something totally different... the anticipation is too much. can’t wait for the next update!
11/18/2020 11:56
JustMee
You can’t be serious... leaving me on the the edge with that ending 🥴! Give me more please 😂! I absolutely love this book. Stop teasing me 🥴😂😂😂
11/18/2020 11:14
HanaBana
Wow! Artemis and Onyx! I need more chapters like these! And then that cliffhanger!!! *waits impatiently for the next chapter*
11/18/2020 10:12
Heather Shay
Oh hell no! You cannot just leave me hanging like that!!!
11/18/2020 06:04
Reader-680486
I can’t wait for your next update! Read this and your first constantly over the last two days! Obsessed, ha! How ofen are updates please?
11/17/2020 23:46ashley surrency
i NEED the rest of this story...and like now!! so im seriously impatient
11/16/2020 23:55Sarah Williams
Cannot wait for the next few chapters, I love this storyline. I hope they come together just before osiris gets what he doesn't deserve.
11/16/2020 21:30
Elizabeth Edmondson
This is the time for Artemis to tell Onyx what has been going on with Kiya. Kiya mentioned she doesnt fell the sparks anymore, but Artemis said she did. It seems Osiris's bite only goes to Kiya, leaving Onyx and Artemis bonded. If she reveals what is happening, they can help both Neron and Kiya later.
11/16/2020 20:02
AZM24
Yes! this chapter was great, loved the banter and steamy make out sesh!! LOL 😂 ...do it again!!
11/16/2020 14:35Christy G
Lmao! No shit sherlock!....do it again. That line is awesome.
11/16/2020 12:36
Aliyah Ansari
I am so excited to read this book. I can't tell you how awesome it is to read a werewolf book where the heroine is black! I've literally been searching. I am pushing myself to wait until there are a lot more chapters before starting the second book. I can't bear to wait every couple of days for new chapters so I am testing my will power lol
11/16/2020 04:53JamieHichew
love that they kissed!
11/16/2020 04:02Taina Iosefo
Loved how Onyx came to Kiya’s defense with Odessa and Darian. For someone being a BFF and turns his back on her despite it all doing cause of Odessa and Osiris but still. That was big of Onyx to come out at the right time. hahaha Love the run with Artemis and Onyx... little teenagers. hahaha can’t wait for the next update!!
11/16/2020 02:50Heather Shay
"Do it again... " best line in the entire story!
11/16/2020 00:01Cata Deveza-Yap
Okay... we got a here a teenage wolf. 😂🤣😂🤣 basically this is her first kiss. Give her a break. Yeah! I enjoyed this chapter. 🥰
11/15/2020 22:52
G.A Coppola
yes Artemis! get it girl
11/15/2020 22:47
Nivia M.
this is disappointing. I really hoped that Kiya and Artemis would eventually reject Neuron and fall in love with someone who hasn’t and won’t hurt her, someone who deserves her. but whatever I guess.
11/15/2020 22:28Becky Strong
ok I'm at the part were shes helping with the rock wall, is Artimas a boy wolf? have I missed something here..
11/15/2020 21:59Raven Dark-fhang
yea Onyx!! loved that he showed up.
11/15/2020 21:09Angie O'Flaherty Thomas
I think Diana is Neron's mother's spirit watching over them
11/15/2020 15:30
ballen282004
I loved this update. I'm finally coming around with the shipping of Neron and Kiya. onyx sold me on it. I was smiling and so happy for Kiya in these last two chapters. 🥰😍🥰😍🥰
11/15/2020 04:45
Jess Booth
I’m loving these last two chapters, 13 and 14!! I’m ready for Kiya and Nerons relationship to hit off!!
11/15/2020 02:01rita lora
Diana the owl is the moon goddess watching over Kita & Nerón right?
11/15/2020 00:28
Kari Shockley
pls end Osiris already. No more ppl under spells, how many flipping obstacles can one couple possibly fight against.... sigh. Let them ne together already.
11/14/2020 21:37
Legend of Gru
Oooouuuuu, this Onx and Artemis relationship is beautiful ♥️ My single ass is squealing around like I’m the one in the relationship 😂😂😂😂😂
11/14/2020 21:04Legend of Gru
so this Osiris guy is being such a pain in the backside! He’s putting people in this Z-moon pack under his spell, the very same people that tormented Kiya when she was still there. Thisbwill cause her to forget all of the positive validation she’s been receiving from the G-pack and lead her to regress to her dark thoughts. Then he’s going to claim to be the only person that understands and cares for her! He’s a literal snake! Even though he has a snake! Honest scum of the earth. I also think Jonathan knows of the impeding darkness coming from Osiris, but because he’s blinded by power and pride, he’s going to be one of the next people that Osiris will target because he already has a weak mental state. I feel sorry for Nero as well, he needs to have a whole counselling session for his guilt. Not saying that he shouldn’t forget what he did, but that he shouldn’t let it ruin him as well. Our minds are tricky. This is such a mind game I tell you.
11/14/2020 20:16Christy G
Awww! Such a sweet moment between Nero and Kiya and their wolves. ❤❤❤❤ I think Darien is under a spell from Odessa because Sirius gave her powers.
11/14/2020 18:08JustMee
Chapter 11 is completely blank? Is there some way I can fix this issue?
11/14/2020 17:08Lois Withers
omg this was so beautifully
11/14/2020 14:31AZM24
🤗🤗 LOVED these 2 chapters! Kiya and Neron were relaxed, sharing moments, and enjoying being around each other, priceless! Reading from Onyx and Artemis’s POV was wonderful I loved their exchange as well ❤️ I definitely can’t wait for more chapters like this!! Is Kiya going to finally tell Neron and her friends about Osiris?!! 🙏🏻🙏🏻 ...Odessa’s got to go!! And I’m glad Onyx went big bad Alpha on that B-word!
11/14/2020 14:07G.A Coppola
loved the hair washing between Kiya and Neron. so happy they were able to have some intimate moments.
11/14/2020 11:26HanaBana
Loved seeing both Neron and Kiya and Onyx and Artemis having a moment! I look forward to more chapters like this! I can't wait for them to figure out that Odessa and Osiris is behind the changed of Darien's behaviour towards Kiya!
11/14/2020 10:26Cata Deveza-Yap
I love cheese pizza too!
11/14/2020 06:27Emna Makni
is there a planning for the apdates? Your story is good and well written. thank u! 🤗👍
11/12/2020 20:10
Lyss
I am so glad kiya and Neron are having some emotional moment and coming closer together. I am also glad that Neron is trying to do right by Kiya. Are we gonna see more between Artemis and onyx. I know that as kiya and Neron become closer so Will Artemis and onyx but it would be great to see their emotions from their point of view.
11/12/2020 19:52dee brack
Can’t wait til it’s finished!!!!🙃
11/12/2020 11:33Jael Brown
Neron needs to tell Kiya how he feels and how he truly regrets causing her so much hurt. They both need to heal. I am glad Neron regrets what he did because often at times the abuser has no remorse for the person they have abused.
11/12/2020 00:42Nathalie Iliana Van Kerckhoven
Every Chapter is Writing with so much truth and emotion, exept ofcourse the existence of were-wolf. Even in the "hello-ween" part is much of truth in it, that we all can Fall in Darkness when the World have done us wrong..even when we are good hearted. Sometimes I wish that i had an were-wolf part who talk to us and Guide us 🤣 Again, Nice Chapters and I love the realistic Touch in these Books. keep doing the good work!
11/11/2020 23:45June Chase
very nice chapter
11/11/2020 22:36Nasteeha Hussein
I’m feeling sorry for him and as humans we need second chance and he Deserve it
11/11/2020 15:52AZM24
Great chapter, thank you for sharing more about Neron’s pain and suffering as well. He has come a long way and everyone deserves a second chance, if they are truly genuine about their guilt and doing everything to make amends. I hope they do talk and share another vulnerable moment with each other. I am pulling for Kiya and Neron...and Diana she is WONDERFUL 😉
11/11/2020 03:13
Mawusi Ford
beautiful chapter! you really have a gift of writing. this really made me feel for Neron. Him and Kiya are two broken souls hopefully they can heal and come together. Love Diana she is my favorite lol
11/10/2020 14:43Lois Withers
I almost cried here lol
11/10/2020 13:02
Sierra Russell
My hearg is actually going out to Neron for the firt time. I feel really bad for him. I hope he and Kiya are able to be together and actually love one another now🥺🥺🥺
11/10/2020 12:12G.A Coppola
this was a great chapter. the jealousy, the flashbacks, the guilt, the panic attack...all explored beautifully. I love your writing!
11/10/2020 10:50Taina Iosefo
I love your stories!! I hope that Kiya will open up to Neron and let him know about Osiris.. She can’t just keep it to herself. I think Kiya is having real feelings for Neron. She’s bugged she doesn’t feel the sparks but that could all be because of stupid Osiris. I love seeing Diana more when the time fits. I always had a feeling Diana is Nuria.. Can’t wait for the next update!!
11/10/2020 03:58AZM24
YES!! I love this chapter and I’m loving Neron even more, I am so glad he FINALLY told his dad where to shove it!! I think Kiya is falling for Neron too, or at least I’m hoping for it...Diana is such a sweet owl, I think she’s Nuria watching over her 2 favorite people and helping them come together 😍
11/10/2020 00:00Mawusi Ford
awww l love Diane l do wonder if she is the sister/best friend reincarnated. Love this
11/09/2020 17:13Lois Withers
omg youre killin me smalls lol gettin good!!!
11/09/2020 13:10Reader-818565
does anyone know when the new chapters are coming out? I’m dyingggg!! 😭❤️
11/08/2020 18:24AZM24
I’m so happy she’s bothered by not feeling the mating bond sparks and worried that Neron might not feel them either!! 🤗 I really think it has something to do with Osiris!! 😤 awww I hope she will feel them again...I love the competition in this chapter and the fact that both Kiya’s and Neron’s love for children is showcased! #bringingthemclosertogether 😉
11/07/2020 22:08G.A Coppola
so why doesn’t she feel the sparks anymore? is it bc of Osiris’ bite? is he her mate now since Neron never marked her? if so, I think this would be great bc she wanted to be loved without the bond so this may allow her to develop feelings without the sparks and see that her feelings towards Neron are genuine and not something she’s been made to feel.
11/07/2020 11:35Lois Withers
does anyone know when that will be? the suspense is killing me
11/07/2020 02:47
ChinaRedd
"Kiss my ass!" yeeessss Kiya! She is unregretably fierce. Can't wait for the next update.
11/07/2020 02:04Nasteeha Hussein
when is the updates
11/06/2020 04:09Nasteeha Hussein
I hope neron and kiya end up loving each other. I know neron made mistakes but he was young and losing his mother and sister made him do what he did. but know I hope kiya give him chance since we already know that he loves her
11/06/2020 03:12Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
"Kiss my ass!" -Kiya hahaha! oh I love that one 😁😁😁
11/05/2020 14:12Lyss
Oh My Gosh it feels like Christmas waiting for a new chapter. I am rereading untouchable while unhinged is updating. No other books compare right now. I am so excited to find out what happens next. I know others won’t agree with me but I hope Neron and Kyia end up together. Marii I just want to comment on how talented you are. You capture us with your amazing writing. I really hope someday this becomes a movie!!! it would be amazing. I love this story!!!!
11/05/2020 02:57AZM24
OMG OMG!!! I loved these chapters and she was so close to telling Neron, ugh then his stupid Jack of a father had to show up!! I hope Neron really gives him a piece of his mind and puts him in his place soon!! ahhhhhhh I’m so happy that they were so close and she reacted so positively 🤗...Love it!
11/04/2020 12:14Christy G
Oh my goodness! She was about to tell him! Odessa and Nerons father need to be gone. Seriously Kiya needs a happy ending.
11/04/2020 03:02G.A Coppola
ouuuu she was about to tell him! that dad and Odessa need to be put in their place and soon!
11/04/2020 00:48Lois Withers
MORE MORE MORE PLEASE
11/04/2020 00:09Alythrae
I'm so glad this story is up! I have to know what happens. Odessa I'm sorry will have a ride awakening. I can't decide if I'm on board with the Kiya/Neron team, but definitely don't like Kiya/Osiris. I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/02/2020 14:27
MirahLove
ooooh this is so good!! 😆 I’ve been waiting for this! It has my heart pumping. Cant wait for more
11/02/2020 03:15Stephanie Bourne
been waiting for this book. hope Kiya gives Neron a second chance.. but dont blame her for all that was done to her.
11/02/2020 01:05Stina
Can't wait for Odessa to finally get what she deserves. Evil b... 🤐
11/01/2020 16:31Jael Brown
I don't know about anyone else but I am waiting for the fight between Odessa and Kiya to go down and I hope Kiya slaps that heffs into oblivion. As for Neron I see him slowly making strides to win Kiya's heart and that the fact he told that evil she-devil to take a hike proves it. Hopefully in the end they will realize how much they truly love each other.
11/01/2020 12:53Cata Deveza-Yap
I still feel so soorryyyy for Odessa. But I am also annoyed.
11/01/2020 03:36Victoria Richard
I think neron will see his wrongs and fix them for her and she will be with neron and together with true love not mate bonding love but honest true love they will beat osiris.
10/31/2020 12:49dee brack
I can’t wait to read the rest of Unhinged, great writing!. This should be a movie!
10/31/2020 02:08Reader-586470
The book is great!! I just have to say that I am on Neron team 🙌. The forgiveness has to happen...can’t wait for another chapter.
10/30/2020 21:02AZM24
Wow, great chapter! I liked that you had Osiris talking to US, the readers, and his words are very true and relatable as many of us have been through abuse and are struck by his words!...To answer some of his questions, in the grand scheme of things forgiveness and love are the only way to heal that broken part of yourself. Yes how I’ve wanted the worst to happen to my abuser so he could feel my pain but why would I want to be like him? Once you finally get the courage to walk away and break free of that hell, that’s when you show your true strength, feel your happiest, and shine brighter than the sun!
10/29/2020 20:37Emma Atkins
My favourite colour (and my hair) are purple :)
10/29/2020 01:11
Sherisa Weston
I am still not fully on board this KiyaxNeron ship. It seems like Osiris and Neron are going to be her main love interest so Neron would be better if that is the case. I just want Kiya to find love of her own will and not be tied down to this mate bond. I don't want her to feel compelled to Neron because of some mate bond. I can't wait until Odessa and Johnathan get everything they deserve for messing with Kiya. It is so upsetting reading about them.
10/28/2020 16:20Gwendolyn D. Pough
I really hope she doesn’t have much more suffering in her future. Odessa must be caught quickly. if Odessa turns everyone against her and she suffers again I won’t be able to take it. 😢😢😢
10/28/2020 05:24Kira Galkina
Love it! and agree with a few comments below about Neron and Kiya hopefully will end up together. absolutely enjoying reading. When is new chapters will be out? :)
10/28/2020 00:46T Rich
Nuria is the owl! I'm convinced!!
10/27/2020 19:49Starr Hawkins
I still hate everyone in her old pack. I just can’t help it.
10/27/2020 12:31Mawusi Ford
hummmm interesting Diana keeps coming around lol l like her 🤣🤣
10/26/2020 16:47
erin genovese
How often is this book updated?
10/26/2020 15:55HanaBana
Wow! I'm loving this already! It did not disappoint. I'm so ready for more moments between Kiya and Neron, and little Diana! I hope Neron triumphs over Osiris.
10/26/2020 15:52Nans Smith
please put them together I kn he dont deserve her forgiveness or her heart her love but I kn that's y the moon goddess gave her a second life and she didn't want a2nd mate so the1st mate is where she belongs her heart can forgive she always just wanted her family&pack to love her she is meant to b that packs true Luna please
10/26/2020 13:19Cata Deveza-Yap
Thank you sooooo much. Finally, it's here!
10/26/2020 06:14
Lynora Crawford
I'm so glad to see this up now! I've been checking every other day since finishing the first one! I'm looking forward to what you bring to the story this time!
10/26/2020 05:19Jael Brown
I just finished reading the first few chapters they were amazing. A few questions though, out of all the avatars he could have why does Osiris desire Kiya so much? Why can't Odessa just be happy with Darien? Speaking of Darien was he really that weak minded that he would be so easily influenced to throw away his friendship with Kiya? I also have to ask how often will you post updates, I am just curious but please don't rush chapters the story has an awesome flow that would be ruined if chapters were rushed.
10/26/2020 01:42Christy G
Oh my goodness a I'm so excited to read this.
10/26/2020 01:20Mawusi Ford
yay welcome back!! oh i hate Odessa more already 😑😑
10/26/2020 00:21
