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LuciAnn Lara
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! Wow!!! I truly didn't see Osiris coming in wow awesome twist!! can't qait.to see how Kiya and Artemis are going to beat him
02/05/2021 06:19
RoyalGala
I can't wait to read about the ritual and how Kiya will survive! When will you release the next chapter?
02/05/2021 04:15
Kari Shockley
Well this is just dragging out. Hope you get to the end soon so I can just read then final couple chapters. Kiya & Neuron have been thru enough already.
02/05/2021 03:41
Nivia M.
where do you get your book covers from?
02/05/2021 00:19Taina Iosefo
Oh no no no they gotta find Kiya before the ritual is done. come on... please don’t take Kiya away from Neron or her family. Osiris is unbelievable.. while Neron was reading the journals he didn’t see anything about Osiris???
02/04/2021 15:43
Yahaida Perez-Lemon
Sweet Cheese! I forgot all about the Ritual! 😱
02/04/2021 12:00Mia
Holey Moley!!!!!!! That mutt Johnathon must of helped Osiris !! Oooo Please Please update asap!!!
02/04/2021 09:22
Reader-003394
marii solaria I must say you are an amazing writing. these books you have written need to be in print or in kobo , kindle well everywhere. you are so talented that you keep me riveted to each chapter. Don’t ever stop writing . maybe I’ll get lucky and they will make your books a tv series
02/04/2021 07:41Malinda Hoffman
have you wrote any more books, I read both in this series
02/04/2021 04:54Cassandra
how do they have a bond? I thought once he rejected her and she excepted there bond was gone and the fact that she died and came back with not wanting another mate so how is a bond being broken when there not one? and there was one wouldn’t he know she was in trouble when this all happened?
02/04/2021 03:25Raine Stoehr
Hey, not done reading the chapter yet, but I thought I’d let you know before I forget, I spotted a typo. After Odessa enthralled Darien, I think you meant to write “Invincible” but it says “Invisible” which is the opposite of what she wants from what I gather. But I’m absolutely in love with this series so far. I’m very proud of Kiya for overcoming all the darkness she’s been through, and I absolutely understand her anger and frustration at the people who have hurt her. But I do hope she’ll reach a point of healing where she can let that pain go and truly move on from it. Where she can learn to forgive the sins of the past. Not for Neron or Raina, but just for herself. It’s easy to hate, it’s easy to seek revenge, but it’s hard to forgive and find mercy.
02/04/2021 02:22Khrysty Marcum
oh gods above!! Osiris is trying to break the bond!!!
02/04/2021 01:31
Sherisa Weston
Osiris really doesn't want anyone to find Kiya. He is even trying to snap to bond on Neron side. It is that ritual
02/04/2021 00:44Shay Reece
I just knew Jonathan had something to do with it.... love this book every time I read it
02/03/2021 23:52
Alyssa
The only person who would have loved Neron unconditionally was his mate. That Odessa only loved his title and the father is a monster!!! I’m shaking my head. That Jonathan really is pure evil.
02/03/2021 22:17Reader-217547
is she okay are they gonna be okay? and who is the dang owl! ahhh I’m gonna pull my hair out! lol
02/03/2021 21:16Jessica Pye
Talk about a cliff hanger...oh man I can't wait for more! Onyx officially has my heart!
02/03/2021 21:09
Alyse Wilson
I think this is the best book I've ever read !! wow!
02/03/2021 19:16
Roza Pestana
Now I'm just wondering what the hell are those bastards doing to Kiya
02/03/2021 19:05Roza Pestana
Marii Solaria I don't care how many chapters you put in your books I will read all of them and I don't mind paying for them. I love your books
02/03/2021 19:01Lois Withers
oh you are so evil lol how can you just leave a cliff hanger like that to torture us lol amazing but I'm dying here for more lol
02/03/2021 18:58
Moonlight Muse
such a good story and chapter, not sure why some people are complaining, if u dont like it dont read it, the character growth of this story are incredible like everyone has a story and solid personality and if we want to see nerons redemption its not guna b a quick thing, the writer has done an incredible job on it, keep up the amazing work marii, im constantly checking insta for updates and was so happy there was two this morning whem i woke up
02/03/2021 17:55Jael Brown
Marii this update had me in my feelings and crying my heart out. Neron comes from a long line of fucked up Alphas hellbent on POWER!! I am glad Neron stumbled upon those journals, I wonder what kind of twisted fucked was woven into those pages. The truth hurts but it is still something we need to discover, since he has severed his bond with his father he can now focus on being the type of alpha he wants to be. Maybe now his bond with Kiya will be a whole stronger and that is why he can since what she is going through.
02/03/2021 15:35Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
OMG! What is happening to Kiya?
02/03/2021 15:06
yellomaroon
why are they're so many chapters. Damn. im not wasting more money on bs.
02/03/2021 14:53
Spectral Beauty
I know it’s sad, but I appreciated hearing more about Neron’s upbringing. Obviously he wasn’t as abused as Kiya, but he is still a victim of the violence of his dad. Now, it doesn’t absolve him of turning around and abusing Kiya in turn, because he had the choice not to and chose wrong. Neron’s self-realizations are coming out big time, perhaps 5 years delayed, but very much needed.
02/03/2021 14:33Spectral Beauty
Good lord, if this book is going to be as long as Untouchable...we got 30+ chapters ahead of craziness! All those peeps out there hating and saying they’re not going to read the book anymore because it was “slow” should’ve waited a little longer! 😂
02/03/2021 14:28Spectral Beauty
NO! Is Osiris breaking their bond? Or making Kiya reject Neron??? Gah what a cliffhanger!
02/03/2021 13:53
Meaghan Prue
omg what of osiris kills artemis like he killed his wolf please dont let that happen marii
02/03/2021 12:43Reader-272436
my chapters have locked up after ive read paid to unlock them. who do i contact to sort it out
02/03/2021 12:30Glemmett Maylor
Oh no!!!! Is their bond breaking?
02/03/2021 11:49Glemmett Maylor
Good for you Neron! This is a proud moment.
02/03/2021 11:49
Justmee
All of that sent chills 🥶🥶🥶 up and down my spine. I'm glad Neron finally accepted the fact that his father was the reason behind his downfall 😪! Kudos to him for putting the pieces together and realizing he played a part in Kiya being captured. Osiris 🤔, what's the need to break Kiya's and Nerons bond? I'm wondering if that will give him free reign over Kiya's powers? She will after all still carry Osiris mark 🙃😑! I'm just blabbering at this point because every time I think I have something figured out you plot twist my ass 😅🤣😂! No worries... I'm here for it!
02/03/2021 11:45Kelly Rohrer
Good for Neron!!! I just totally hope Neron and Kiya can be reunited. but holy shit! What’s happening to Kiya!!
02/03/2021 10:08Cata Deveza-Yap
So the ritual was about breaking the bond between Kiya and Neron? 😱
02/03/2021 09:25Arianna Parata-Plant
Ahhhhh i need to know what happens next...
02/03/2021 06:40Briley Armstrong
How often do you update?
02/03/2021 06:34LuciAnn Lara
I love it!!!!! thank you thank you I was hoping Neron would figure it out oh my goodness I am literally on the edge of my seat!!!! worried about Kiya hoping Ariel gets her separation from Odessa. It would be wonderful to reunite Ariel with Darren
02/03/2021 06:15Spectral Beauty
Oh snap...Neron’s on the warpath, and rightfully so 😬
02/03/2021 04:41Meaghan Prue
Finally go get him Neron he deserves every damn thing he knew about Kiya how special she was. Him and odessa are nothing about trash and i hope ariel can be happy again too without that skank.
02/03/2021 04:23Kelly Rohrer
get him Neron !!!
02/03/2021 03:36Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
Odessa is only attracted to Neron because of his rank and power...she said it clear as daylight
02/03/2021 01:39
Tammy Payne
Wow! I can’t wait for the new chapters. Talking about cliffhangers. What will happen next?
02/02/2021 18:27Khrysty Marcum
I need more!!!
02/02/2021 15:55Taina Iosefo
Now that’s a twist... Ariel wants to be separated from Odessa... crazy. can’t wait for the next update!!
02/02/2021 15:41Gee Higgins
chapter 36 yeah for adopting mum she the bomb
02/02/2021 06:47
Juànita Parker
Hi, I'm new to the online book. I love the ideas and love the story. I haven't read this story yet but if it's like some of the other stores I know I will love it. love you much. JGS( just getting started). Later.
02/02/2021 05:51Gee Higgins
oh no hope she doesn't kill him that will really take her to the dark side
02/02/2021 05:17Reader-217547
love both books can’t wait for the next update
02/02/2021 04:38Gee Higgins
ok so she's just disclosed the rape..why does she have to stay there I'd be gone
02/02/2021 03:06Gee Higgins
I reckon Osiris is the guy she bumped into at the mall in the first book... I also think the only way she can resist the dark is to forgive those who harmed her and they need to mate to fight together plus perhaps break his claim on her....my thoughts
02/02/2021 01:39Kelly Rohrer
I wanted to take a minute and just tell the author how much I love the story (both books). I LOVE show your story is heart and soul not just everything sexual. Don’t get me wrong I love a couple of those others that are very “sexy” lol - the ones with a good storyline (just to be clear) I just love how much thought the author puts into each character and their back story ❤️ Even the evil ones are so incredibly thought out. thank you so much for your stories. I am a forever fan 💜
02/01/2021 23:42Alyse Wilson
wow this book and the first book are amazing! to the author thank you for blessing us with such an amazing book and surrounding it around a woman of color. you don't find alot of books like that! thank you ♡♡
02/01/2021 22:40Mia
oh wow?? I thought Ariel had left Odessa -taken of course from Osiris? Poor Ariel she deserves a separate chance!!
02/01/2021 04:37
Marcy Carrillo
Keep Ariel. Ariel deserves a chance at a better life, better human her truest of true mates. She deserves the happiness Odessa robbed her of because of her selfish reasons. ODESSA needs to go.
01/31/2021 22:54Meryam Ahsan
Okay, I’m all for keeping Ariel somehow and sending her to another human, Selene , help!!! also and I know this is an unpopular opinion : I am pro Team Neron+Kiya rather than Darien+Kiya . Sometimes the best are people who learn from their mistakes rather than those who haven’t been tested.
01/31/2021 19:28Reader-018349
If I wasn’t so excited to read the words “You’re not a failure” from Nikolai I would have been crying. I am so happy that Neron got a chance to feel what real parental care is like. As far as Ariel, I think Neron should figure out if can be done without harming Odessa and Ariel, not that I’m on Odessa’s side, but it would crush Darien if she died. I also think he should include Darien in his decision. If the plan does work then he doesn’t have to worry about what to do with Odessa, she would be just human and banished for life. As for Ariel I do hope that her wolf would be able to be put into another and her and Darien (and Sirius) can be second chance mates.
01/31/2021 15:22Yahaida Perez-Lemon
yes! Let Ariel live and Odessa DIE!!!!!
01/31/2021 09:05Jamee Moore
Wow I feel so bad for Ariel. She really deserved a better human than Odessa. Now it makes me sad to think that if she goes through with it, she'll end up dying. Then again, it's probably been killing Ariel inside that she can't be with Darien/Sirius all because Odessa is so greedy and ungrateful. I wish all the best for the three of them, but Odessa doesn't deserve redemption at this point. This shows that sometimes you'll run into people who are so delusional they don't want to believe or accept anything unless it's something that they want. Odessa wants what she wants, not what she needed. Some people never learn sadly.
01/31/2021 03:22Geraldine Ferraren
That is a powerful request from Ariel, I hope Neron honors it.
01/31/2021 02:16
MzDiva1987
it’s about time Neron saw the truth for himself. Odessa never loved Darrien and she never really love Neron, loved only what he can give her. Odessa’s real true love was always power. it’s sad
01/31/2021 02:05Dollsenz Oui
this story is really dragging out and getting boring. seems like no new developments of each chapter. Seems author is struggling with storyline....The only thing keeping me interested is Neron the and Kiya's relationship. If the ending centres on Kiya and her family then Neron and his Pack should be written out of the storyline. Odessa isn't even worth writing about. should just hand her the sentence and be done with it.
01/30/2021 21:26Sherisa Weston
I have a feeling if Ariel separates herself Odessa may actually die this time and Ariel may get seriously hurt. I wonder if she separates and become just a wolf if she can somehow become a wolf spirit again and bond with a human and theh become a werewolf. Maybe a witch could help with that. haha
01/30/2021 21:01Cata Deveza-Yap
😭😭😭 Ariel...
01/30/2021 15:47Cata Deveza-Yap
I am not taking Odessa's side, but I can feel her pain... maybe it's just too fast for her? Maybe it would have been better if Neron broken up with her before Kiya arrived. I don't know.
01/30/2021 15:44Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
woah! Ariel! so what will happen to Ariel if she is successfully separated from Odessa? She will wait in Selene's realm while the the Moon Goddess chooses another human for her?
01/30/2021 14:40Jael Brown
Wow is all I can say after reading this chapter. You are not a failure, those words brought tears to my eyes because it was a personal mantra for me for a long time. Sometimes we need to hear this in order to make it through. Nikolai is a good man and I think he is a good guiding light for Neron. I am shocked that Diana went back to Nevada with Neron and his wolves, but he needs her now. Although I am not on team Odessa everything she did was on direct correlation to Neron's actions and how he disregarded her feelings. I hope Ariel gets to be free she like so many others was an innocent bystander in Odessa's quest for Neron's affections. This was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next update.
01/30/2021 13:11Moonlight Muse
love the chapter! as always was excited to see the update
01/30/2021 12:23
Sarmba Medina
when he the next update I hope it is more than one chapter
01/30/2021 11:22
Heather Shay
You are not a failure! 😭😭😭😭😭 Having real parents made a huge difference for Kiya. Imagine if Neron had a real alpha /father to lead him. Things could have been so different.
01/30/2021 10:58Elle 🧿
Oh my gosh!!! Ariel... I love this, I hope she survives and somehow is reunited with Darien and his wolf. Maybe her wolf can find another human and become Darien and his wolf’s second chance mate 🤞. Is this even possible? I’m hoping .... I’m praying 🙏😂🤞😂🤞😂🤞😂
01/30/2021 10:46Kelly Rohrer
also... I hope Darien gets a second chance mate ... he so derserves one
01/30/2021 10:28Kelly Rohrer
whoa!!! Ariel !!!!! I also need to say, again, how fucking awesome Nikolai and the rest of Garnet Moon are💜 thanks for a great chapter 🥰
01/30/2021 10:27
Berry Bear
uhh... i thought Ariel was already gone... love the Twist. Maybe it is possible to separate them and Ariel can live as a Wolf on the packgrounds. i would love that ♡
01/30/2021 08:34LuciAnn Lara
Oh my gosh!!!! Ariel!!! I love it!!! Can't wait for Nerons response For more
01/30/2021 07:20Kekedastarr
I love how the book starts off. very intense and it draws the audience into the book.
01/30/2021 06:24dee brack
To the author we never got Kiya’s old parent POV. or did I read to fast?
01/29/2021 22:25Neodesha McCollum Hendley
I am going to take a break. I thoroughly enjoyed the first book, but was not expecting a sequel/series. I thought it was just a straightforward romance. My life has been filled with death and loss these last few years and reading is my escape. This author is excellent, but I will take a break to find just a 1 book romance. I'll come back later. I love how diverse your characters are and how you even talk about natural hair. Thank you for that author.
01/29/2021 21:17Reader-217547
I need more!
01/29/2021 20:45
Pupu
Neron seriously deserves another chance...he is not like Kiya's birth parents who care only about their guilt. He loves Kiya. It would be sad if they do not end up together.
01/29/2021 18:38Cata Deveza-Yap
Darien actually slapped Neron the way I would do too. Nice. And I admire his humility to admit his... uhm insecurity to Neron, in front of everyone. But I do hope, he wouldn't let his bitterness and anger get the best of him. Otherwise, he could be the next Osiris.
01/29/2021 05:46Reader-297469
I hope the owl is Amber. Maybe she can calm the crazy vampire down
01/29/2021 02:06Sherisa Weston
oh Darien :'( I know I read somewhere but could you tell me what happened to Odessa's parents and who she was living with in the pack like who took care of her? I think her parents died so how old was she when that happened?
01/29/2021 00:48Sniderin
I NEED MOOOORE!!!! AAAAAAH!!!! It's my drug of choice.
01/28/2021 23:39Reader-018349
So I know it would be a hard conversation to happen, but I would like Neron to have a heart to heart with Kiya’s parents before he leaves Garnet Moon. I think it could help him deal with his dad and his pack. They have insite that he doesn’t know about and he needs some good parental guidance.
01/28/2021 21:56Reader-296617
more please! 😊😊😊
01/28/2021 21:51Bebear9874
I hope she doesn't take Neron back....
01/28/2021 20:48
amanda Burrows
I need more.....chapter by chapter is killing so good!
01/28/2021 20:48Taina Iosefo
OMG... Diana just needs to give Neron a sign of who she is. who’s spirit is she?? I’m thinking it could be his sister or even Osiris mate... possibly.. hehe I hope Neron can find out all that he can to help find Kiya. She needs him and her family.
01/28/2021 19:28Reader-018349
Did by chance anyone else catch Osiris’s lie about his parents? If the portrait on the wall is indeed his parents, then he lied to Kiya about wondering if his mom made it to his dad. So what else about his story can be true. Osiris is devious, who knows what the real truth is.
01/28/2021 17:24Jael Brown
I love Diana, I can't wait for her true identity to be revealed. Oynx has always been the voice of reason for Neron he was just hurt by the loss of his mom and sister to listen. His dad slowly descending down a slope of insanity didn't help either. Poor Darien, I can't blame him for his outburst. Odessa tore his heart out with her bear hands and decided to play hackeysack with it. Although the decision s she made were her own they were in direct correlation to Neron's actions. I am interested in seeing what happens to Odessa and how Neron handles this and all of the other situations that have arose in his pack
01/28/2021 13:56Renee Fogg
I love this series I can't put it down. I wish they made a movie or TV show out of this
01/28/2021 13:03Kelly Rohrer
I fucking love Onyx and Diana 💜 My heart is so sad for Darien 😞 I hope he gets a second chance mate so so much
01/28/2021 10:35Gwendolyn D. Pough
Darien was bitter and mad but he was also dropping truth bombs! LOL
01/28/2021 05:37LuciAnn Lara
I absolutely love your characters Love how you evolved Neron into a lovable character I just couldn't put my phone down and read through both books I do hope they somehow wind up together but whatever you are planning for your heroes I am excited to find out!!! Oh and I absolutely love Kiya being an avatar!! Thank you for all your work it takes me away from all the stress of raising my 3 grandbabies...
01/27/2021 19:56Alyssa
Kiya is a doggone Avatar!!! She doesn’t need anyone to save her!!! She has everything within to save herself. She has Selene’s blessing!!! At first I was like.... where’s Anthony/ Neron, BUT I am tired of these werewolf heroines being saved by the man!!!
01/27/2021 00:43
Dolly Gunn
How often do you update with more chapters? Thank you.
01/26/2021 22:00Reader-018349
I’m still routing for Neron and Kiya to get together. If anything a few years down the road so they can get to know each other more and have stability in their lives. To the author: you have done an amazing job. Your books are captivating and leave you in suspense for more. You are a gifted aurthor. Keep doing what your doing.
01/26/2021 19:08Reader-018349
So kinda figured it was a trap and Kiya can’t completely escape him cause she’s marked. I have a feeling this 2 part ritual is to ressurect Amber and turn Kiya bad. Also part of Osiris tale has been proven to be a lie. If the portrait on the wall is really his parents then what he told Kiya about not knowing if his mother made it to his father after she was banished is a lie. He absolutely knew his parent made it out together, he’s living in their castle. In order to help Kiya, I think everyone is going to need some history lessons from Zircon, somewhere back there are going to be the answers they’re going to need to rescue her and bring our questions to light.
01/26/2021 19:03Taina Iosefo
No No No No No... where are the others to find her. How can they even find her there’s no link to her. Oh man.. so excited for the next update.
01/26/2021 14:51
