Unhinged Comments

Taina Iosefo

Oh no no no no no... not Neron too. I so can’t wait for the next update...

Jael Brown

I 😘 be the inner battle Kiya and Lady Seguine are fighting, but I can't help but wonder will Kiya kill the Lanes or will they just rot to death in the dungeon. Where is Osiris during all of this, I thought he would love to see the demise of Jonathan. I can't wait for the next update,!!! Take care of yourself and your family Marii!!!!

Ahh! Such a great chapter! Neron finally got to *see* his sister and mom again! 😭

Kerrie Lumsden

How many chapters to the end?

Emily York

is any body els having issues reading the story? everything I try to click on it, it says oops

Debbie Boston

wow what a cliffhanger!! impatiently waiting.....❤❤

i want to keep reading. please dont kill neron.

Meaghan Prue

This needs to be a movie seriously

Drea Harper

are you gonna publish these books? I would love to support!!!

ALINE ALBUQUERQUE

I don't understand: what the orchid smell means?

Nina072

this was such a forking sweet update! ohmahgerd!!! 😍 that was so good, I'm loving how everything is progressing with neron and his projects, so great that Anthony and nikolai are helping him; they some really good peeps and he needs some good men on his side besides Kwame and Valerian. Altough I thought he would be closer to garnet moon, I wonder which would be going with him and who would be relocating elsewhere. I HAVE BEEN SAYING SINCE UNTOUCHABLE THAT DIANA WAS NURIA.🤩🤩🤩 To me this hints were a bit in my face, but more and more it was getting obvious. THIS IS WHY I CALL MARII M. NIGHT YALL!! WHO SAW THAT SHIRT COMING!!👀🙈😱 Celest and nuria's return was straight out left field, forking selene and her mischief. 🤣 such a sweet outcome tho, neron got his mom and sister back. 🥰🥰🥰🥰 One heck of a surprise tho.

Trisha Reynolds

Kiya and Neron have grown so much I’m hoping they can become the soulmates they were meant to be. Despite the horrific past he proved himself worthy over time.

😱😲😲😲😲😲😲 yikes... didn't expect the resurrections... I need time to absorb this with getting clouded with zombie thoughts.

Lois Withers

marii I'm dying here the book is getting soo good I'm about to pull my hair out lol

She did unto him as he did to her and I love it! that Lady Sanguine is no joke! whew!

Jael Brown

Yes I am loving this update Marii, but I have to wonder will we find out why Mara is so shy around Darien. I mean I am sure he will love her no matter what. I am glad everything is falling into place for our characters. The question still remains will Kiya and Neron get their happy ending together or as friends. Great update Marii!!!

Rae Evans

can’t wait for the next update. Book 3!!! 😬😬😬😬

dailyLimz

I just want to drop by and say that I hope you’re doing better on your end and that no rush.. I like it when there’s a cliff hanger of every chapter🥸 it makes me want to read more about your stories! and curious about what will happen next 🙃 hope u r okay and that no matter what, you’re an amazing writer and we as readers, we’re here waiting patiently for you☺️ take care

Question. After all that's happened to Valerian and Raina, can I trust that he won't betray Kiya or Neron? He seemed to hate Kiya/LS for almost killing his mate infront of him. Also, I hope Selene would help in the fight this time. Maybe send Amber temporarily to distract Osiris while on the fight? As for the older Lanes, I hope one of them would die in the battle, while trying to save Kiya... You know, sacrificial death, which might bring Kiya to let go of her hatred towards them. But if the couldn't do it, then I hope they would never be part of her life, ever again.

marina simeonoglou

have there been any more updates? 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Sherisa Weston

The bold words telling Neron to run was Onyx and the unbolded italic words telling him the same thing were his conscience?

Whew I’m glad her friends are around maybe they will help her come out of it

Moonlight Muse

amazing story just re read last few chapters

OMGosh I’m so nervous with this chapter

Amanda Rains

Marii, how is your recovery from surgery going, if I may ask?

Nina072

artemis getting ready to have osiris catch her hands.....I mean, paws. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 had me dead over here.

AstarteLor

ha, love this story so much but I'm so tired of the word amalgamation or any variation of it.

is Raina pregnant??

Coraleigh Nott

omg noooo!!! please tell me she heals him?!!!.... oh god, the suspence🙈😂

Jael Brown

WTH did I really just read this. So Neron grew a pair and killed his father. Wow I didn't think he would, by far didn't see that one coming. I mean I really thought he was going to kill his self for a minute there and not dear old dad. And then Lady Seguine stabbed him in the back, he really should have known better than to turn his back on her. Then again up until recently he always has. Great update Marii!!!

What an amazing couple of chapters! I was tearing up over Neron, he’s come so far 😭 Has Kiya come close to accepting him as her mate? It almost sounded like it! Now the real question becomes: how long will Kiya be in a coma? Days? Months?......Years? Gosh, I’m so excited to know how this book will end! Thank you, Marii ❤️

Jael Brown

First of all great update Marii!!! Hmmm so Jonathan is being tortured, well good he definitely deserves it. He really needs to let it go, Kiya has nothing to with the death of his wife and daughter. The conversation that he had with Osiris really struck a nerve with him, he probably did want to keep Kiya all to himself. And the fact that he doesn't see anything wrong with what the Prince family has done over the years generation after generation is just crazy to me. Jonathan can't even see that him and Titan are so much alike not just in looks but in actions as well. He is so far gone he probably doesn't see anything wrong with what he did to Kiya, his pain has corrupted his heart and clouded his better judgement. I knew Nadia and Lucien would end up together. The two of them suffered alot by the hands of Osiris and they went through alot so it stands to reason they would turn toneach other now. The question is will Osiris allow them to be together and has he even rejected her? Lyra's bluntness is so funny because she reminds me alot of my mom!! Hopefully they will find Kiya, I just hope it's sooner rather than later. Thanks for the great update Marii and I can't wait for the next one!!! Happy Easter 🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰

on the 2nd to last chapter & thought neron said the n word😭💀🤣🤣🤣

Carol Hatton

on edge waiting for the update!!! 🤗😁

Taina Iosefo

So exciting!! Neron finally told her somewhat of what he’s doing. I wonder if the property he was talking about is selling zircon and buying another property closer to Kiya. I surely hope Kiya stays with Neron. Happy he’s not wanting to follow after his family and wanting something better. Love that Darian got a second chance mate. Hope Mara tells him her secret she’s hiding.

Hollstar

ooooh... that was interesting! I’m glad Neron killed his father, he was planning on it previously anyway... it’s sure going to mess with him though! can’t wait to see what happens next! 🤠

Debra Conklin

Kiya & her Wolf are 1 , please don't let her kill Artimas I love Kiya , for I'm right there with her For what happened to her happened to me when I was a little younger, I'm still trying to fight it I'll wait as long it takes for your bks please get well Soon my Prayers are with you

Meaghan Prue

I hope she does forgive him, after all it wasn’t all entirely Nerons fault at a young age his mind was being poisoned by his father believing his every word that Kiya was the problem. then he started to come out of it and realize that the real problem was johnathan let’s not forget children are sponges and being told your failure and weak and that thing killed your mama and sister and u feel sorry for it gets to you and you start believing it but when Kiya died the first time and Neron found she was innocent only then did he start to maybe realize that his dad wasn’t all he was cracked up to be. yeah Neron was in the wrong to beat and hurt her but like I said trauma does things to you and Jonathan began poisoning a young boys mind and sadly it worked for a while Neron isn’t a monster had his mother been with him he probably would have grown up a lot differently parents shape their kids and it’s like the old saying monkey see monkey do and unfortunately Neron was that monkey but he didn’t want to be like his father finally the monkey made his own choice and I hope he either gets Kiyas forgiveness or a second chance mate I think he has done well to prove to Selene that he was not going to be the puppet anymore and be his own man a good one that his mother and sister would be proud of. also I hope Celeste and Nurias wolves came back too

Me to Neron: Do it! Do it! Do it!!!!!!!

A M Archibald

Try not to deviate from the tense used. A few times, the present and past dense have been used in the same sentence; an excellent example is in the last paragraph of chapter 77. Just a little something to work on, as I've noticed it a few times now.

Cara Rodacker

I love this series I started the first book almost two weeks ago and now waiting on updates doesn't help I read fast but I love your writing so it's worth the wait even though it's slightly killing me lol

Meaghan Prue

oh Marii will there be a bonus chapter on Osiris judgement that would be awesome too see him have to face Selene and Set

Meaghan Prue

wait Diana didn’t get hurt did she

Elaine Wilson

love the books I hope that Kiya does not kill her wolf and I hope that she remembers that she is kind.

reader2121

how is kiya ever going to recover from this once she snaps out of her darkness? that’s a lot of blood on her hands.

After these crucially, critically needed moments of healing and vindication, their new lives may start.

Christina Johnson

I love these books. Thank you for updating even though you are not 100%. Get well soon. I loved how he got to see his mum and sister. x

Why do I feel like Selene sending back two people from the dead is going to cause some cosmic problems? 🤔

your the best Marii take care and can't wait to start reading your book one question will I be able to buy this series?

Doris Lopez

I am on the edge of my seat and I can't wait for the next chapter!😣

Bobbie Poole

just wanted to say how much I love ur books and that you are very talented! hope you get well soon sending healing vibes your way!❤️

Arianna Espinoza

do you update weekly?

Angela, Eric Allen, McCray

I just hope an pray that she can forget an forgive she good over evil 🙈

Kish Kush

I really hope there will be a third book because I’m not ready to say goodbye to these characters 😭

Dr Megha

this part is little hard to digest. being a moon goddess avatar, she was sent back by her to do something great and was promised to be watched but what is Kiya doing now is killing. 4 innocent guards killed by her.

awesome awesome chapter!!

not afraid to admit that i been feenin for an update😭😭

Reader-043727

Is anyone else on the edge of their seat reading this? I can’t seem to put this book down🤷🏽‍♀️ My feelings are sooo hurt that she fell into Osiris tricks though. 😭 .... hopefully a happy ending here lol ( I’m only on chapter 58) ...either way I love that this isn’t your typical romance. Full of plots twists, character development and DRAMA! Great job ❤️ ( although my fingers are still crossed for a happy ending lol 🤞🏽)

Sherisa Weston

Neron is in denial about Kiya I see. I mean it is nice that he believes in Kiya's strength and her willpower but how he is doubting what her own mother saw and one of bestfriends, Phoebe when she has the power to see auras seem quite arrogant of him. He even had that vision and sensed something was wrong

Elle 🧿

Uhm... why Lady Sanguine? Can anyone help me? Also, here’s hoping to Darien and Mara 🤭😁 hehe.

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

Neron!! 😭

Amber Mitchell

This is one of my favorite series by far. Can’t wait to see how it ends! Patiently waiting for the next update and then book 3 😬

Reader-837796

Absolutely loved the book, frigginfantastic writing Author Solaria!! super excited to read what you write next, and the many you will write after that!!!!! keep on creating great content Sis!

Sarah

I hope this has a happy ending such a great back but it a heart breaking to reading right now

Moonlight Muse

these chapters were amazing, n the best part i loved the neron n kiya moments. neron really does have a connection to her 😍 im totally shipping for them !

Moonlight Muse

her feelings towards neron make me so wishful to see them happy together 😍 i kno he messed up in past but he has grown n come along so so well,

Taina Iosefo

OMG... I’ve been MIA with reading my books and I come back to reading 4 chapters and well worth it too. I can only imagine how your next chapters will be. When her mom saw her and wept, I was crying too. Seriously so close but yet so far away. I’m glad Darien is back and recovering with the help of Galen. But now I wonder who the visitors are.... is it Osiris and his crew??? is it Neron and some pack members??? WHO WHO.. lol I can wait I was just joking. 😂😂😂

Jael Brown

Omg I am am of the edge of my seat, these chapters have astonished me, caused me to stop breathing and left me speechless all at the same time. Whoa Marii, this fight scene was awesome

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

OMG THANK GOODNESS THEY FOUND THEM FIRST!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!

Sherisa Weston

whew that was amazing! I really hope Kiya does not kill her biological parents. I don't care for Johnathan but no matter how much she hates her parents I think she will really regret it. Maybe she will bond with them a bit after she takes them to wherever. Maybe they could help bring her back even a little bit. At this point I am doubtful but who knows. I think all the killing she did, she will regret to some extent since this is not who Kiya truly is. I think so far she has killed one person, Odessa in her Lady Sanguine phase I don't think she will regret that at all like with Tristan.

rita lora

I was enjoying the story fully up until Kiya gave into evil, 😢

Doris Lopez

great chapters this week so exciting Can't wait for the next one!

Is this thing with LS & Kiya happening @ the same time as LS & Neron?? So LS & Neron are real life, LS & Kiya etc are like spiritual?? sorry couldn't find the right word - Awesome stuff though

Kathy Mac

are you here manager or something that you answer foe her?

Jemma

Artemis and Kiya 🤍♾

All I can say is WOW!!! What an update! Is the end of the chapter, where LS slashes Neron in the back and sentences him to death, a role reversal of when Neron sentenced Halima in the beginning of book one?

Brittney Allen

Best belated birthday present ever!🥰😍🥰😍🥰 I always imagine Onyx in every scene you mention him in. He is always hilarious 🤣😆. So happy Odessa, Tristan, and Johnathan all got their just deserts. I wonder what the Moon Goddess is planning for Nuria and Celeste🤔 Kiya and the vanilla lip balm 🤣🤣🤣Love Jackie! I think she put the vanilla lip balm on her to see if it would wake her up 🤣. She kept saying "Kiya will wake up soon." 🤣🤣🤣 Lyira and Nikolai are the best parents any child should have. Thank you for giving Kiya great parents the second time around because Stephen and Ashley are the worst parents ever. Great Updates 🥰😍🥰😍🥰

Wendy Virginia

how often will you be updating? is there going to be a book 3?

Meaghan Prue

so now does osiris and kiya make love in the next chapter and they mark each other hmm interesting

Ms. Marii when you write your stories, I am always lost at the emotions of your characters. Like just now, I also felt victorious– and it's for Osiris! OSIRIS?! I also felt his obsessive love for Kiya. After reading, I realized this chapter could have been one of the most romantic scene I've read (I just need to take out the 'dark' aspect)👀🤭 I like it, Ms. Marii. Super amazing! Although, something horrible is sure to happen in the next chapters, this one is remarkable because of the way it was written. It's haunting... and hard to forget.

Meaghan Prue

I dont know about anyone else but i am missing my girl artemis. How lonely she must feel trapped in darkness it would have been awesome if onyx could have reached her when they were close.

Meaghan Prue

Marii please please for the love of your readers please that when osiris does get finished make his death so beyond painfu for him i couldnt care less about his past he needs to get a major dose of his deeds. this was so hard to read poor kiya she will be devastated when when she realizes what she is been used for

kittyXO

omg! it can’t end there!! I really really want them to finally be together! it’s like I have travelled this journey with them. it took me to the end to actually forgive Neron for wha he did, but I have forgiven him so hopefully Kiya does 2. xx

Rekha Martinez

I hope she can see the difference between her inner child and the person she now and not fall for evil trap. she need to make peace with it and forgive so she can move on. I want more chapters with her Neón. show them falling in love how he can be awesome to her

A M Archibald

how often do you update? I'm asking so I know what to expect with the amount of updates and when.

Noah Martinez

OMG

Thank you for the updates! Please continue to rest & take care of yourself 🥰

YES! Come on Kiya - fight!!!

As Avatar of the Moon Goddess can she access her full powers without her wolf?

Neron has proven beyond limits - he would die for Kiya 💜 This is what 2 or 3 times now. He definitely has proven his worth

Angela, Eric Allen, McCray

can you please unlock 🔓 the rest of the book 📚

Meaghan Prue

at last. there that conniving little worm is gonna get exactly what she deserves for all the people she has hurt

I LOVE how Ms. Marii made sure that "romantic love" would not be the main plot of Unhinged. ❤️ At the start, I was hoping that Kiya and Neron's would end up together, fall in love with each other as the story unfolds. That was despite the number of times Ms. Marii said, that probably won't happen in this book. I still hoped, and I know I am not alone hoping for the same thing. 😅 Now, I know why it might not happen. Surprisingly, I think I'd be more happy to see Jonathan trembling in fear and Osiris' huge downfall rather than seeing Kiya and Neron getting together. ✌️ I am now more interested at the adventure of the characters as they dedeat their own demons and stay sane despite the insanities around them. Because really, it's kind of hard to be in their shoes right now. 😳😁

Sherisa Weston

I love Jacqueline so much my goodness 😪😭

Rosemarie Carrillo

😬😬😬

yvonne willis

marii when will this book be finished??i'm dying here

Meaghan Prue

omg marii just thought of someyhing please tell me nothing happens to diana too

Moonlight Muse

its going so so good there two chapters were amazing!

Mrs.Hyde

I'm glad for the updates I haven't read in a while just let them build up and then binge on them. Plus I'm reading so many books to get to my goal of 200 by December so it's nice to come here and find alot of chapters waiting after you've been away for a bit.

Saki J. Gibson

oh this is juicy! I pray Kiya come through for Neron because Lady S is crazy as hell 🤣