Unhinged Comments
Amber Mitchell
This is one of my favorite series by far. Can’t wait to see how it ends! Patiently waiting for the next update and then book 3 😬
06/14/2021 22:36Jemma
need my fix 🙊🐺🦉🤍
06/14/2021 21:33Meryam Ahsan
we want team Ki-Ron updates!!! pleaaase!
06/14/2021 10:18
Reader-742236
waiting patiently for updates...... but it’s killing me lol
06/13/2021 03:21
Autumn Harvey
I absolutely adore your ability to capture people's emotions. this is my favorite story, hands down. when's the next update coming?
06/12/2021 23:01
Gosia J
I hope they will manage to be together :) they belive in their love :) Thank you
06/12/2021 18:54Humairah Mahomedy Rangila
thank you Marii, you writing really taps into deep emotions. I love how well developed all your characters are .
06/12/2021 16:41
G.A Coppola
when is the next update?
06/11/2021 01:41
Meaghan Prue
so before she updates what is everyone's thoughts how will Osiris be finished
06/09/2021 23:55Cheryl Thomas
Can't wait the new chapters...huge fan
06/09/2021 12:29
Kecina_Janice
ugh he keeps putting his nasty lips on her 🤮😂
06/07/2021 21:02Kecina_Janice
oh my this chapter tugged on heart strings 😢
06/07/2021 02:43Carrie McKown
I love your books. I cannot wait to see how book 2 ends and what happens in book 3. Kiya speaks to me on a deep level and her journey to healing is so special and touching to read about
06/06/2021 01:21Hazel Roseby
Regardless of how this story ends; it’s been a pleasure reading it... I’m so happy to bumped into book 1 and cannot wait to see whats comming next... THANK YOU Marii for all the emotions you’ve had us experienced throughout the chapters. (I come every day just in case the notification doesnt work hahahahaha) <3
06/04/2021 03:30Sky Jones
I’m Nooooo but did Halima change her name to Kiya
06/01/2021 07:48
Hollstar
awwwww I just love Diana! 🥰🥰🥰 and I love how supportive and understanding Neron is with Kiya! I hope they work things out and end up together! ❤️ I know he hurt her in the past but he was young, also abused and strongly influenced by his crazy father! he definitely seems to have learned his lesson and kiya seems to trust him again now... especially after he didn’t react badly to Lady Sanguine’s actions like kiya thought he would!
05/31/2021 01:14Meaghan Prue
Marii when I was rereading I noticed a paragraph I missed about how kiya was attracted to both sexes and I know she asked selene to not give her a second chance and I'm still team neron but I am curious why that was put in there I mean it's never mentioned again I just wondered what was the thought behind it was it hinting at something in future or am I just reading to much into it
05/31/2021 00:55
Sherisa Weston
Marri is Kiya and Neron's relationship going to be permanently completed at the end of this book? Like whether they just stay as friends or become a couple and mates? Also, what is book 3 going to be about and is it going to be the final book about them and in total?
05/30/2021 22:30Jael Brown
Marii this was a sweet and cute update, but I have to ask will Kiya be confronted by Selene about what she did even though those people got their just desserts. I want Kiya and Neron to be together and this was them making strides towards that. One more thing Kiya will get her appetite back because that was pretty scary
05/30/2021 18:10Taina Iosefo
Sweet.. they are now talking and just being honest with each other. love it!! yay yay yay!!
05/30/2021 16:07
Mawusi Ford
Awww l just love them together l hope they can continue to build their bond
05/30/2021 13:32Meaghan Prue
this chapter was well written and much needed i want them together so badly but just out of curiosity Marii when Kiya was asking Selene to forgive her im just wondering why you didn't add like a part where selene tells her that its okay or was that what Diana was for
05/30/2021 13:25Kelly Rohrer
yessss finally creating a much needed TRUSTED friendship 💜 I will still hold out hope for them to be truly together- it will be a long and hard road but, Neron is truly going to put in the effort required to EARN Kiya’s love 💜 So what if the mate bond is weak - they can build it back up by choice 💜
05/30/2021 12:46
Moonlight Muse
really enjoyed these chapters and LOVED how neron got her to agree to eat 😍 when no one else could. also the fact with thier mate bond literally gone that theyre still talking and have that bond is great
05/30/2021 07:29Cata Deveza-Yap
Question. After all that's happened to Valerian and Raina, can I trust that he won't betray Kiya or Neron? He seemed to hate Kiya/LS for almost killing his mate infront of him. Also, I hope Selene would help in the fight this time. Maybe send Amber temporarily to distract Osiris while on the fight? As for the older Lanes, I hope one of them would die in the battle, while trying to save Kiya... You know, sacrificial death, which might bring Kiya to let go of her hatred towards them. But if the couldn't do it, then I hope they would never be part of her life, ever again.
05/30/2021 05:03
Carol Hatton
Such an amazing writer! Your gift of expressing your imagination and thoughts into words….. unmatched!! I love how your writing engulfs is into the minds and actions of the characters as well as the scene that is taking place! I’M A FAN!!! I wish you all the success you can handle and more! Can’t wait for what’s to come!!!
05/29/2021 23:34Sherisa Weston
Is Asim's parents still alive? Not sure if that was mentioned
05/27/2021 16:05
A M Archibald
I don't want osiris to die. I know he will because there isn't anyway coming back from this because his avatar is the main reason he is so destructive. But I don't know I can understand his actions. He hasnt lied. Also kiyas parents should have died. They're the real villains in this book. Same with Valerian he is so obtuse.
05/27/2021 03:55Saki J. Gibson
This was awesome! I’m so excited. I can’t wait until Kiya and Neron have a heart to heart ❤️
05/27/2021 03:47
Brittney Allen
Favorite part is Onyx "I'm not read to die, and you sure as hell not taking me with you" 🤣🤣🤣 He is by far my favorite character. I love Kiya but Onyx is hilarious and sweet.😍🥰🤣
05/26/2021 23:17Jael Brown
Damn for a minute there I thought Asim killed Osiris, but I guess I thought wrong. Valerian had better pull his head out of his but. I get that the Lanes are Raina's parents but he better be glad Lady Seguine didn't kill them, him or Raina. When you sit back and watch someone suffer knowing you could have stopped their suffering at anytime put you were to much of a coward, then you can not be upset when that person retaliates against you. I think if Valerian and Kiya got into a fight Kiya would kill him. Valerian better back down before he gets smacked down he better chill. Great update Marii
05/26/2021 22:06Meaghan Prue
Hey marii will be getting a backstory of how asim knew where his brother was and why he never came back for him
05/26/2021 20:36Taina Iosefo
Oh man... I hope Neron can get to Kiya and have her eat. And they have the conversation they’ve been needing to have. Can’t wait for the next update!! Yay!!
05/26/2021 15:08Kish Kush
This story has a way of drawing you into each characters life. You want to know where life will take them next and you will wait EAGERLY for the next update because each chapter opens up a new part of lives for you. Not many books can make you feel like that. Marii thank so much for writing this.
05/26/2021 04:57Keith Renner
so the way is sounds darkness wins even if hamila "comes" back sou ds like she fell & became a disgrace to the gift given her & another book where the Goddess just doesnt care at all
05/26/2021 01:49Meaghan Prue
you know of all the villains I have ever read about and wanted destroyed I want Osiris to suffer the most horrendous death ripped apart put together and ripped apart again until the twisted evil bastard is no more. and that stupid snake dunked in a bowl of acid and then burned alive
05/25/2021 22:26Christy G
Marii, I have followed this story since the beginning and I am with you all the way. I hope Kiya comes back and puts Lady Sanguine in a place that can be put to rest. Kiya has a good heart in spite all she has been through. I love Kiya and want her to overcome all that she has been through.
05/25/2021 00:18
Mrs.Hyde
I really like the last chapter I liked the explanation Kiya gives for Lady Sanguine appearance and how she and Halima subdue her. I don't think Kiya is a monster I just hated to see her go down such a destructive path although I do still believe that the people that hurt her should be punished. At yet and still I do like and can see that Neron is trying to right his wrong and be a better person. Not just for Kiya but for himself.
05/24/2021 15:59Cata Deveza-Yap
Welcome back, Kiya ♥️
05/24/2021 04:24Mouri
Anger is a taboo subject not talked about often when the topic of trauma is mentioned. How we all feel toward Lady Sanguine/Kiya’s actions is subjective, but I think it is important to examine the relationship between Lady Sanguine and Kiya. In the recent chapters, she always refers to Kiya in the third person but never claimed to be her. This is why I believe that LS, a manifestation of Kiya’s anger, protected her all this time. In the first book, we’ve seen how her anger played a role into not accepting Neron and her family so soon. And how being angry ensured no one would hurt her again. Lady Sanguine LOVES Kiya a lot. She took everything to the extreme because she believed Kiya will never feel safe as long as her abusers are still alive. They thrived while she suffered, so she saw the injustice of it all. I’d give anything to go batshit crazy on my abusers for the harm they chose to inflict on me. This is a beautiful story and the imagery is top notch. The internal conflicts of both Kiya and Neron really shone through and now that she’s back, I’m sure there are conversations to be held when Osiris isn’t being a pain in the ass. Excellent work! Keep it up!
05/24/2021 00:04Meryam Ahsan
Two wrongs don’t make a right, that being said I hope that the others ask for her forgiveness & Kiya also asks theirs. behaving like the people who have wronged us makes us no better than them. I still think they should all have escaped with their lives and then had Neron hold them accountable as alpha for their sins. Then it would have created some balance.
05/23/2021 21:15Meaghan Prue
it can't be that easy to get rid of sanguine there s a catch
05/23/2021 13:26A M Archibald
I wish you'd do a bulk upload. This 1 chapter a week or two is dragging. I might have to not read for a couple of months so that I've got a nice chunk to read.
05/23/2021 12:31ShyShy
Marii, you are an amazing author! I love your writing style. This latest chapter gave more insight to Kiyah & Neron’s mindsets. They both had to face their trauma head on instead of running from it. I’m excited for the next update ❤️
05/23/2021 11:15Lisa Essler
Maria you are doinga great job with a difficult subject. Trauma and the resulting disassociation that can occur is important to understand, but it's damn difficult to write about. As well, a manipulative, narcissistic sociopath like Osiris is hard to get right.
05/23/2021 08:57Githa Datadin
still hoping that they get back together and heal together.
05/23/2021 08:53Carol Hatton
on edge waiting for the update!!! 🤗😁
05/22/2021 22:43Mrs.Hyde
I'm confused at times the actions perpetrated by Kiya.
05/22/2021 21:14Mrs.Hyde
I waited for a while to have several chapters to read...I know that Kiya went through horrible abuse and while I agree that some people at Zircon Moon should be punished I just wish Kiya didn't have to be turned into a monster to make it happen. I loved her strength and resilience but really now what makes her any better than the people she's so determined to destroy?
05/22/2021 21:12Sherisa Weston
The bold words telling Neron to run was Onyx and the unbolded italic words telling him the same thing were his conscience?
05/20/2021 16:37Taina Iosefo
Wow.... it’s getting more and more intense.. so excited.. haha
05/18/2021 15:06
Sarah
I hope they in up together by the end of the book and the next book about them growing closer
05/18/2021 02:49Hollstar
ooooh great chapter!
05/18/2021 00:46Kirsten Burmeister
oh things are getting even more intense 😱
05/17/2021 19:52G.A Coppola
If Neron survives, and if Kiya prevails against LS, where will they go from there? kiya brings up in this chapter if she could still be considered good after all this. I don’t think so. I appreciate the straying from the norm here, but I think neron killing his dad and everything LS did went too far. I don’t see how they can make it back from this realistically, and I was holding out hope that they would find their way back together, but I don’t think that will be possible now in a way that’s believable.
05/17/2021 11:12
Nina072
y'all let's be patient. I know it's good and were hooked but lets remember our girl needs her time. especially right now.
05/17/2021 06:30Jael Brown
I 😘 be the inner battle Kiya and Lady Seguine are fighting, but I can't help but wonder will Kiya kill the Lanes or will they just rot to death in the dungeon. Where is Osiris during all of this, I thought he would love to see the demise of Jonathan. I can't wait for the next update,!!! Take care of yourself and your family Marii!!!!
05/17/2021 05:38Reader-016812
I can feel the conflict between Kiya and Sanguine so much... I remember you mentioned being a survivor of abuse yourself and your description of the fight to reclaim power after such abuse is both accurate and compelling. I commend you for being able to channel your experience, what you went through directly or indirectly, and turn it into such an incredible story, so skillfully written, where emotions are genuine in their fascinating complexity. I would hope that writing is cathartic to you and that the amount of readers, as well as their enthusiast comments, brings a form of healing and a sense of vindication to you. Thank you, Marii 💕💪
05/17/2021 05:26Jemma
I need a chapter!! I am obsessed with this book. Kiya Diana Artemis Neron.. I need my fix 🤍🦉🐺 .. I wasn’t expecting him to kill his Dad although screaming at his dad to shut his trap the entire time 💆🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️ he was awful 😒 we’re really starting to see just how badly Neron’s head and self esteem is from his father just how badly the emotional abuse actually runs 😕 not that it is an excuse in any way for what he did there is no justification for abuse. but it is very sad Kiya Neron the dad was a very selfish horrible person he would of never changed but it doesn’t stop it from the fact it was still his dad 😢 Neron did fail Kiya yes but he did not fail his Dad his dad failed him!!! it is NOT the child’s responsibility for the parents actions! I do hope we get to see if the dad meets Selene or his wife and daughter I can’t think which will be more justified as to him not getting that chance/peace or actually hearing the truth/shame from them .. either way he was a bully and a vile coward. what Neron is doing now is what an Alpha is an alpha is not and never will be someone who bullies and leads with fear instead of respect, they own and take responsibility for there actions and have compassion and strength, and most of all PROTECT not control belittle and abuse.. his fathers view of what strength means is very wrong! definition of WEAK 😒 and alpha/Luna should be equals partnership not control and possession they respect and love there luna like any relationship should be not about power plays. they actually know there value 👊🏻 they would know there other half is there strength and vise versa.. we all know the luna’s are the heart of the pack there alpha needs them and man enough to know it 😉😬🐺 I don’t know what will happen with Kiya and Neron or if anything will for that matter but the most important lesson is exactly that point is that he’s doing this without expecting anything in return or to be with her 😶 I don’t know if that can happen but at least he is acknowledging and becoming a better person not just for her but himself. I hope Kiya can push through soon 😅 I’m glad she didn’t kill her sister apart from Neron she’s the only one who has genuinely learned anything and sorry. I hope we get to see more of Pheobe being Hekate’s avatar she’s got to be something special indeed I think there is a lot more held back in her 💜 being hekate’s avatar would she not maybe be able to have some sort of control over the dead rouges and even over cerebus 🤔 that would be interesting 💪🏻🧙🏻♀️🌕🌑🌕
05/15/2021 21:12Carrie Holley McKown
I am addicted to this series. I can't wait for updates and a book 3 🙀🙀🙀. I'm so in love with these characters.
05/15/2021 02:43Rae Evans
can’t wait for the next update. Book 3!!! 😬😬😬😬
05/14/2021 18:00
Trisha
Can’t wait for the next update! And Book 3, and Paperback of Untouchable 😁
05/14/2021 14:23
Pupu
Marii will there be any romance in the book ? just team Neron and Kiya here :D
05/11/2021 18:30Wendy Virginia
how often will you be updating? is there going to be a book 3?
05/10/2021 01:28
yvonne willis
marii when will this book be finished??i'm dying here
05/09/2021 18:15Megs Runge
aauuggh!! the suspense is killing me! such a great read and I love how you show all the inner emotions play out their own roles!!
05/09/2021 12:28Tammi Schane
ok so is the end of this book and if so what’s the name of next and when does it come out?? I’m so invested can’t wait for update or new book!!
05/08/2021 22:27Sherisa Weston
whoa what a chapter
05/08/2021 01:50Patsy Love
Did you say 3rd book?!? That is exciting. How many chapters are left in this book?
05/07/2021 20:27Taina Iosefo
Oh no no no no no... not Neron too. I so can’t wait for the next update...
05/07/2021 13:42Meaghan Prue
marii i dont understand something in the chapter before was that happening before neron killed johnathan or after because it said Kiya tackled lady s to the ground were they fighting for control and lady s won or will that be in the next chapter
05/07/2021 01:26Nina072
so who's hoping for just a little glimpse of the encounter between Johnathan, essie, nuria and selene. I wanna see that go down, and I'd love to see where selene sends bad wolves.
05/06/2021 16:15Satui Maui'a Laufau
my gosh, why do I feel like eff’n up Lady Stupid’s arse?!? her multiple personality bs is really starting to grind my nerves. trust me, I get it; you’re hurt. but 2 wrongs don’t make it right. so snap tf back and get your life back on track cause making your own mate kill his dad was an overkill. Lady Stupid should’ve just did it.
05/06/2021 11:32Saki J. Gibson
oh this is juicy! I pray Kiya come through for Neron because Lady S is crazy as hell 🤣
05/05/2021 22:41Debbie Carslake
never reading an incomplete book again .suspense is too much
05/05/2021 06:25
miasiacheyenne
finally! Johnathan needed to die and Neron’s hand. it had to be done
05/05/2021 03:26Gwendolyn D. Pough
She did unto him as he did to her and I love it! that Lady Sanguine is no joke! whew!
05/05/2021 02:17Hollstar
ooooh... that was interesting! I’m glad Neron killed his father, he was planning on it previously anyway... it’s sure going to mess with him though! can’t wait to see what happens next! 🤠
05/05/2021 01:05
Roni S
All I can say is WOW!!! What an update! Is the end of the chapter, where LS slashes Neron in the back and sentences him to death, a role reversal of when Neron sentenced Halima in the beginning of book one?
05/05/2021 01:00Meaghan Prue
marii i hope u didnt change your mind about Neron staying alive.
05/05/2021 00:49Cata Deveza-Yap
Oh Neron. 😭😭😭 I still wish you didn't do it. In the deepest part of my heart (and wishful thinking), I really hope this was all a dream. A baaaad baaaad dream. The last part, by the way, was similar to what happened during his Alpha Ceremony. He also stabbed Halima at the back to mark her as a traitor, and he also sentenced her to death. 😭😭😭
05/04/2021 22:00
Spectral Beauty
This was a GREAT update!!! Neron’s dilemma was beautifully written. Gah! Neron survives...right? 😬😬😬
05/04/2021 21:56Moonlight Muse
oooo exciting cant wait for the next chapter! hope kiya comes thru
05/04/2021 20:38Jael Brown
WTH did I really just read this. So Neron grew a pair and killed his father. Wow I didn't think he would, by far didn't see that one coming. I mean I really thought he was going to kill his self for a minute there and not dear old dad. And then Lady Seguine stabbed him in the back, he really should have known better than to turn his back on her. Then again up until recently he always has. Great update Marii!!!
05/04/2021 20:15Nina072
AWESOME UPDATE!!! HOLY BALLS THAT WAS AWESOME!
05/04/2021 19:49Jemma
I miss Artemis & Diana 🤍🐺🦉 I love Artemis so much she thought her way out of the cage and darkness and saved Kiya and Halima because she loves Kiya so much 😢🤍🤍🤍 ♾ and little Diana even got part of her Kiya back I think she makes me cry every time she’s with Kiya or Neron literally hugs them with her wings 🤧🤍 I was so angry when Osiris was about to kill hurt Diana he is evil what he’s done to Kiya manipulating her inner abused child is disgusting cowardly, he’s violated and used her he’s just the same as the Prince men if not worse! used Kiya to get what he wants .. as for Nerons dad Jonathan he is disspicable all of them Osiris Jonathan all the Prince men all vile the only man that has actually learned anything is Neron! Osiris is true predator praying on her inner child and her weaknesses/desires he is crazy if he thinks he’s any different to the Prince men he is evil using there abuse to his advantage to abuse her too for how own purpose
05/04/2021 00:14A M Archibald
Try not to deviate from the tense used. A few times, the present and past dense have been used in the same sentence; an excellent example is in the last paragraph of chapter 77. Just a little something to work on, as I've noticed it a few times now.
05/02/2021 01:26Meaghan Prue
okay why is there two books called untouchable with different covers in the top ten lineup one shows just Kiya in the front the other shows Artemis and Kiya
05/01/2021 18:58Moonlight Muse
amazing story just re read last few chapters
05/01/2021 08:32Reader-742236
please update soon, I can’t get enough js
04/30/2021 22:30Kish Kush
leaving me on the edge of my seat 😱
04/29/2021 06:31
dailyLimz
😳😳 lesss gooo Kiya! you got this!
04/28/2021 22:33Reader-217547
update please 😂
04/28/2021 17:20
XO_XV
awesome awesome chapter!!
04/27/2021 18:46Wini Wilson
Is this thing with LS & Kiya happening @ the same time as LS & Neron?? So LS & Neron are real life, LS & Kiya etc are like spiritual?? sorry couldn't find the right word - Awesome stuff though
04/27/2021 10:31
Meowdel Em
okay this was a great chapter , I did not enjoy the previous chapter so much.
04/27/2021 06:40Sherisa Weston
I was hoping Violetta would return and she will
04/27/2021 02:26Sherisa Weston
man the end of chapter 76 had me imagining those scenes hehehe. I really enjoy Kiya being on the dark side but it is also bittersweet for me. I find LS intriguing but I also miss Kiya and she belongs in the light not the darkness
04/27/2021 02:24Christina Johnson
Omg this was awesome! Thank you so much! go artemis. cant wait until they reunite and kick ass! 😊😊 x
04/26/2021 22:13Nina072
and if you havent joined Marii's facebook group you should!!!!! let's talk about what's going on!!!!! I need to fangirl......I mean discuss what I just read. 😁
04/26/2021 16:31
