Unhinged Comments
rita lora
first & formost you are very talented, this is a great chapter, I do hope Kiya & Nerón get a chance to be together because he is obviously a different person, I agree with many, he should resign his title as alpha since he never even wanted it, that would be 1 of the partial revenge to his father Jonathan... I think this was good for Kiya because it pushed her to open up about the rape which is what was truly holding her back to fully heal & be the Avatar she is meant to be...
12/17/2020 15:55Albertina Mcclain
This chapter broke me down. I cried with Kiya😪😭. They had to had seen the blood, bite marks and scratches. Neron did care back the because he was to busy sniffing Odessa's back side. shame on him!
12/17/2020 15:38
ballen282004
😭😭😭I had to prepare myself before reading this chapter. I could barely see whe reading Kiya telling her story....I hope the torture Tristan. I hope they fry his dick in hot grease while he is still alive and then feed it to him. 🤬🤬🤬
12/17/2020 15:25
Reader-003394
I love these characters and the pain kiya feels is so sad. I do hope she gives Neron a chance at redemption. he truly loves her and the stupid choices he made as a hurt young boy will haunt him forever but I believe he is a better man now and they deserve some happiness together. also please write faster lol
12/17/2020 15:21JamieHichew
I’m devistated for her. I can’t even imagine. I hope Neron gives up being alpha and takes her far away from there 🥺😭
12/17/2020 14:51Taina Iosefo
This had to be the hardest and saddest chapter reading. I couldn’t imagine what she has gone through but with this chapter I feel her pain. I hope Neron can make it better for Kiya. 💔🥺😭😭
12/17/2020 14:11Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
my heart really aches for Kiya 💔😭
12/17/2020 13:50
Justmee
I'm glad I read the comments. I would have missed the changes made to the previous chapter. So I read them both again. Just when I thought this book couldn't get any better. You have once again surpassed my expectations. Bravo!!! Please give me the next update tonight 😪! I'm like a kid at their favorite toy store while reading your work. Thank you for taking the time to fill my day with your amazing talent. FYI I'll be here waiting for the next flawless update.
12/17/2020 13:21Kelly Rohrer
I just weep - my heart just bleeds for Kiya 😢😞
12/17/2020 13:05Cata Deveza-Yap
I wonder who said the last "NOTHING!"... was it Kiya? Artemis or... the darkness that Osiris had been wanting to release from Kiya.
12/17/2020 12:45Glemmett Maylor
oh my God, I'm bawling my eyes out. As a rape victim, I feel her pain 100 fold. You have done an excellent job writing the emotions and questions governing such an attack. I am so ready to read what happens next. Fabulous job as always!
12/17/2020 11:37Jess
OMGOSH I like need the rest of the book NOW! I want to know what their excuses were too! I'm so mad for her and sad for her. I wonder how Neron will handle this. yeah this pack doesn't deserve her.
12/17/2020 11:22Justmee
***sigh poor Kiya 😫! My feelings are to hurt for her!!! You can make it through this baby girl 🤧. Neron 👏🏾 you 👏🏾 better 👏🏾 make 👏🏾 him 👏🏾 suffer 👏🏾😪😔! I can't wait to read the next chapter 👀
12/17/2020 10:39Cata Deveza-Yap
Okay... okay... breathe in, breathe out. I will never want to be in Kiya's shoes, but Neron's footing at this moment was just as worse Kiya's. Now I understand why Kiya wanted to kill them all... It wasn't the beatings and the deprivation of the basic things. They ignored her, deliberately turned blind eye to while she bled. 😭😭😭😭 I don't know how this is a help to Osiris' plan. But I hope it aint how he expected things to be. Kiya still has Arty. That makes me confident that Kiya's light will prevail still. Gosh... Ms. Author please have mercy on my weekend. Please let me know when the next updates would be.😉
12/17/2020 09:51
Mawusi Ford
omg 😭😭😭😭 poor Kiya I have no words nothing can be said for her pain and it like she is reliving it because she kept it a secret and the secret is out now 😭😭. l don’t blame her for being angry
12/17/2020 09:40
Elsa Rodarte
wow very raw
12/17/2020 08:49Esessanee Wallace Moten
30 chapters please let kiya and neron get together please
12/17/2020 08:19Cata Deveza-Yap
😭😭😭😭 no words...
12/17/2020 08:06
Pupu
oh my god! the chapter is more intense now. when are we getting the next update ? I hope Neron does something brutal to punish the gaurd. and something transpires between Neron and Kiya.
12/17/2020 07:43Esessanee Wallace Moten
ok enough when am I go. a get the rest I want them to work please you cant leave us hangjng
12/17/2020 07:03Reader-087914
I don’t see an other ending. how do I unlock it?
12/17/2020 05:49
wana blain
I cry so much... I lost my words... A masterpiece...
12/17/2020 04:44
Marii Solaria
Hey, readers! The end of chapter 27 will be edited! If there’s any changes, like if the chapter gets relocked after the edit, let me know! ❤️
12/17/2020 01:29
Yahaida Perez-Lemon
Damn it I was hoping she was gonna kill him! For all the people that have ever had to go through that, my heart breaks for you and I honestly wish you could have a moment like this with your monsters!
12/17/2020 01:10Samantha Shini
i read the first book and up to here in 3 days! I love this book. wish it was longer lol
12/16/2020 22:59
Jade Cross
cliffhanger like none other... I'm so glad that kiya has not got this huge secret off her chest! with it now out in the open people can really see why she is the way she is around them and will open up so much in nerons eyes to just how much she had and is suffering because of what his dad had allowed. manipulation and pain is a huge thing to hold over people and that is exactly what johnathen did. neron is not a bad man he had the worst person to guide him in his grieving. it is something he has to live with and he knows that and there's only 1 person who can make kiya truely happy and I feel like she has already starting trusting him more then she could have planned to feel she can shout out her past to them all. she's falling for him unbeknown to her shes falling and I hope they do admit and mate and be a power pair to get rid of the only terror left in her life oiris! mind is making up its own ending here i need these chapters 🤣 thank you for such an emotional truthfelt story line. I was on the edge of the chair now on the floor waiting dear I say patiently?... x
12/16/2020 17:18Cata Deveza-Yap
I am afraid that Tristan won't get charged of rape because at the time he was assaulting Kiya, it was allowed under the order of Jonathan, the reigning alpha at that time. Kiya could only charged Tristan of attempted assault this time and the beatings she had done would mean self-defense.
12/16/2020 06:23
Mary Jileen Santos-Zamora
😱😳
12/16/2020 04:50JamieHichew
oh. my. gosh! 🤭🥺
12/16/2020 03:48Cata Deveza-Yap
Next chapter please.... 😭
12/16/2020 03:41
Yaritza Carrero
wooowwww pleeeeaaseeee write the next chapter! pretty please!!!
12/16/2020 02:03Glemmett Maylor
Holy hell! You can't leave me here....nooooooo! I need more now! lol
12/15/2020 22:33
HanaBana
Oh em geeeee! What a cliffhanger! I'm glad Kiya got revenge for what that guard did to her, and now that Neron knows maybe he will punish him too! I hope now that Kiya got her revenge it might have released some of the anger and that she will be able to being to recover. I'm looking forward to more Kiya and Neron moments though!
12/15/2020 20:27Daisylion
every time I come on and see a new update I get so excited😩 the story just keeps getting better and better😩😩
12/15/2020 19:44Paige Copeland
He deserved it plus some, but I’m really concerned that she agreed with Osiris. I hope she can get her rage back under control, and know that to keep Osiris away she has to keep her rage under control. In my opinion the only other people that still deserve her rage are obviously Odessa, Neron’s dad, and her “parents.” Everybody else has worked tirelessly for her forgiveness, especially Neron. I’m still really really rooting for them. He was a terrible person when he was around his father and Odessa, and now he has proved repeatedly that he CAN be trusted, and he does love her. I want them to be together, but not because his father wants them to be. I really feel like the only way they can be together is if his dad and Odessa are dead. They are pure evil and will always be a problem.
12/15/2020 18:37Junita Braithwaite
I admire Kiya's strength in this chapter. She was able to face her attacker and in some ways overcome her debilitating fear but now I also fear for her struggle with her sense of morality. Did she take a step closer to the "light" side or the "dark" side? I'm so excited to see what happens next!!!
12/15/2020 18:33
Lips
I usually lurk the comments and feel the feels with everyone else here but omggggg that was intense and satisfying and heart wrenching 😭 I was positive that he was her rapist based on her reaction to his name when Neron said it. I wonder if she will let Arty take over her body for a while now. I hope she does 😔 I have mixed feelings about her shielding Artemis from those moments in the past. I want Artemis to know so she can get angry for and with Kiya but I also don’t want her to feel the horrifying memories and pain like Kiya and I understand why Kiya blocked her from it. I know I am gonna keep re-reading the chapter till the next update 😬 Great work Marii!
12/15/2020 18:23
Jess Booth
this chapter was amazing! I’m so glad she did what she did! i felt her anger while reading this! we need more...
12/15/2020 18:19Lois Withers
fuck ya I wish I did the same to mine I'm so fucking proud of her
12/15/2020 15:16
Jenn McCoy
I am proud of what she did! he deserved it and then some. now they all know some more pain she went through! no one was there no one cared idk I am struggling staying on the good side because there is so much evil and unfortunately some can't be forgiven! Neron better go after her! I like them together but its hard because of how he treated her! I think they could be together if he just gave up alpha and moved his members that are not evil to her brothers pack! I think they would be great but I hate to say them staying there is a no that pack needs to burn to the ground and move on with those that want a brighter future!
12/15/2020 15:11Taina Iosefo
I ain’t mad for what she did and I’m so glad and proud that she was able to face her fears and protect herself and her wolf. I so hope Neron goes after Kiya and comforts her and I hope she lets him. I hope everyone feels like crap with finding out what has happened to her besides being abused physically and mentally. Can’t wait for the next update.
12/15/2020 14:03
Reader143637
I hope Neron goes after her... poor Kiya she is so strong and hope everyone that out her through hell feels like crap ... thank you for another amazing chapter... love your work can’t wait for more!
12/15/2020 13:31Pupu
I am just hoping Neron comforts Kiya and proves to be her true mate rather than listening to any non sence the gaurd says.
12/15/2020 13:25Justmee
Why did I feel like crying for Kiya? Lawd have mercy 😪! I'm honestly in love with all the characters in your book but Kiya holds a special place in my heart ❣. I felt her pain SMH 😔🤯! I'm glad she was able to release some of her pain. ***sheesh that was deep! Thank you for another wonderful update.
12/15/2020 13:10
FiestyOne
omg!!!! such a cliffhanger! I cannot wait to read what happens next ☺️😬
12/15/2020 12:03Justmee
My heart is pounding and I haven't read the update yet 🤭🤯😪
12/15/2020 11:48Mia
I am glad that Kiya had her revenge on that guard... I am also glad she finallly told everyone of what he did to her - albeit under those horrible circumstances. It also highlights and reminds everyone at Zircon pack of how they treated Kiya terribly. (to even allow such attocities to occur!)
12/15/2020 11:01ZiZo ELF
OMG😻🥰
12/15/2020 10:17
Sierra Russell
WOOOOHHHAAA!!!! And you're just gonna leave us like this, hanging? I knew it was coming, Im happy she got that bastard back. That right there was well deserved 👏👏👏
12/15/2020 09:57Cata Deveza-Yap
Oh my Kiya 😭😭😭 It's about time she releases herself from the nightmare. I am so proud of her. Revealing this kind of dark secret takes HUGE amount of courage. I hope her healing starts from here. Oh thank you, Ms. Author.
12/15/2020 09:37
Nikki-1701
WOW. that was so intense!!! I’m happy she beat his ass, I’m happy she verbalized what he did. now for Nerons reaction and Garnet moon members to go comfort her. that was an amazing emotion filled chapter, thank you
12/15/2020 07:10Mawusi Ford
whew mercy!! that was intense. I’m glad she kicked his ass. Neron is about to feel really guilty now. can’t wait for more and see what happens next. Thank you
12/15/2020 07:04Mihaela Vardianu
lovely book keep you in suspense need more please
12/15/2020 06:45
Alyssa
I’m going to need people to stop leaving nasty comments for our beloved author. You are doing a wonderful job, and I love that the characters celebrate their natural hair and wear locks. Very good representation in these 2 books. Ignore the haters
12/15/2020 04:39
Rhayine
GHA! I NEEEED MOREEE and why do I feel like Diana is Nerons sister, or Selena
12/15/2020 02:53Reader143637
I hope Neron and Kiki make a deeper connection!!! and I have a feeling Diana is going to play a big role later down the road!!! love your book can’t wait to read more!!!!
12/15/2020 02:42Stacy Jefferson
I had a feeling there was something up with Tristan I just didn’t think it was this omg!!! Habe to reread a few chapters to if I’m what I’m thinking about Neron thinking he is one of his best men.
12/14/2020 21:56Cheryl P Westmoreland
Oh I need more chapters faster!! The suspense is killing me!
12/14/2020 20:15Paige Copeland
I don’t want anyone to come save her, I want her to save herself here. She deserves to avenge herself for what he took from her. Whoop his grimy ass, and then drop his body at Odessa’s feet. Make sure it gets on her shoes too, crazy bitch is tap dancing on my very last nerve.
12/14/2020 19:28Jael Brown
Damn, oh my shit. Things just got real fucked up. I feel so bad for Kiya right now. I hope my girl remembers who and what she is and stays strong. Odessa is an evil bitch.
12/14/2020 18:44Krissy Cookie Kretchmer
oh goddess I'm about to start this book now... and it's not finished, and there's a cliffhanger?! not that that will stop me from reading 🤣 why am I rooting for Neron though? I have no idea... but the Moon Goddess destined them together for a reason! I do NOT like Neron's dad at all. 🤬
12/14/2020 17:48wana blain
first of all, you’re a genius writer. Woww can’t even describe the feeling I’m having when I read your chapters. Bravo!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 Secondly, you should not let negative comment affect you. you obviously have a life beside writing. Don’t let anything disturb your peace or mind. You strong and you know it ☺️☺️ Again bravooooo ☺️☺️
12/14/2020 16:38Elsa Rodarte
when did Tristan abuse her?
12/14/2020 14:24Taina Iosefo
OMH... come on this is a huge cliffhanger to leave us all on without another update. I really hope Neron sees what’s happening and saves Kiya. And then I hope Kiya is able to open up to Neron about this situation.
12/14/2020 13:44Kelly Rohrer
please I need more chapters for Unhinged! I can’t believe I’m rooting for Neron to come through for Kiya!
12/14/2020 13:37Justmee
***LAWD, please let Kiya be okay! I seriously hate buddy right now 🤬! Another great update. Thank you! Ignore the negative comments. People have to understand you still have a life outside of writing and it's the holiday season 😊. Keep up the great work 🥰! I'll be patiently waiting for another brilliant update 💃🏾
12/14/2020 09:54Cata Deveza-Yap
And of all the scents there is, he got coriander. I mean... I like coriander on food but on human? Ewe. I bet he never had chances on deodorants. 🤦🤦🤦
12/14/2020 09:20Lois Withers
omg you are an amazing writer but youre killin me here lol I almost chucked my phone felt like I was watching true blood again lol awesome chapter
12/14/2020 05:19Cata Deveza-Yap
Kiya 😭😭😭 You're stronger now, remember that. I was never in your shoes but I know what anxiety felt like. Killing would be easy on him. Don't kill him. Please. Send that monster to my house and I'll make sure, you will like what I'm gonna do. ✌️Just kidding. Can't wait for thw next chapter. And I do hope, I don't have to wait for a week. (Wishful thinking. 😌)
12/14/2020 05:01Nikki-1701
omg!!! kick his ass Kiya or lucid Darien or Neron to the rescue??? the man Neron trusted to help him he’ll find assaulting Kiya... so many ways for this one to play out.
12/14/2020 04:15Mawusi Ford
well Kiya is not the girl she was back then. I’m sure seeing him knocks her back for a second but she is more than capable of taking care of herself. I’m sure Tristan is about to get his
12/14/2020 04:10
dailyLimz
damn.. this book brought laughter and other times anger.. and sadness, it really had me in tears.. it’s as if I was actually there spectating.. @Marii Solaria, you are amazing.. thank you.. one of the books that had me in different emotions back and ford.. spectacular! 🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠
12/14/2020 04:07
G.A Coppola
Ohhhh no!!! I hope Neron finds her in time. how does Odessa know what Tristan did? was she responsible for it somehow? or does she simply know bc of the power Osiris gave her?
12/14/2020 04:03ballen282004
omg Kiya kick him in the balls sis and run!!! please have Neron or Jackie tear Odessa and Tristan a new a$$ hole!!! thanks for the update rooting for Kiya to make it through this 🙌
12/14/2020 04:02Taina Iosefo
OH MAN NOT GOOD. Wait Octavius didn’t have much of a interaction with Kiya... so what’s his storyline in this whole thing besides wanting power and Kiya?
12/13/2020 15:30Reader-003394
ok really one chapter every week is getting old. I think I’m about to delete the app and stick to kobo or kindle
12/13/2020 14:44Reader-003394
I really enjoy this series other then the fact it takes to long for a chapter too come in. I wish it was easier to get the stories as I’ve had trouble with the coins, from not receiving what I paid for to them taking to many for a chapter. need help
12/13/2020 13:35Tammy White Evans
more chapters please!😁
12/13/2020 13:04Justmee
I'm so happy to be back!!! My phone finally gave out on me (iphone) 😅🤨! So I bought a Samsung 🤪! Not realizing that I would not be able to download the app ***sheesh!!! I almost cried like two times 🙄😒🤧! I was so excited to see two chapters when I was finally able download again. Yassss 💃🏾!!!! Keep em coming. Just a friendly reminder I'll be here patiently waiting for another one 😂😂😂! No pressure 😊
12/12/2020 03:43Jael Brown
Damn it I knew Octavius was Osiris, things are really starting to heat up now I love this story so much. I hope Neron gets the chance to follow his dreams.
12/11/2020 16:19Cata Deveza-Yap
Be your own Alpha, Neron. Maybe Kiya can be the pack's leader while you study. And Osiris... whew. I wish Octavius wasn't you, but oh well. Now, who hurt you? why so dark?
12/11/2020 07:43Ashley Fuller
Octavius...someone refresh my mom brain. I’m struggling to remember that name...
12/11/2020 04:32Mawusi Ford
love it!! It would be great for Neron to give up Alpha for her. He seems to only do it for duty not a passion for him at all
12/11/2020 04:07
Angelica Person
i love this book. thanks so much for the coins I bought some too. please give me more chapters as soon as you can.
12/10/2020 08:54
AZM24
Ok so I’m guessing Tristan is the guard that abused her from her subconscious response to his name. I can’t wait for Neron to put that piece of the puzzle together, he’s going to loose a gasket!...I’m glad they spent some “regular” time together to be themselves and get to know each other more! I’m just wondering who could be watching her, oh what if it’s that man she bumped into at the other mall isn’t he involved with Osiris?!?!!!...Ok can’t wait for the next update!! Impatiently waiting for your brilliance as always!!
12/10/2020 05:06Marii Solaria
Hey guys! The app is now back in the Google Play Store! You can purchase coins! Happy Reading! ❤️
12/09/2020 17:00Marii Solaria
New redemption code for 12/8! KPR72T
12/08/2020 22:21Sobina Hammad
I really don’t get it y does she keep repeating stupid mistakes they have the witch avatar who can’t sense evil makes no sense neron knows Odessa yet he does nothing her friends are not even going after Darien she does not understand that he can hurt her friends for her apparently she does not trust them like she should sorry but the story is angling towards madness
12/08/2020 17:01rita lora
what are redemption codes for?
12/08/2020 16:43ballen282004
Great update! I'm guessing Tristan is the guard who raped her while she was held in the cage? I wonder does anyone in the pack knows what he did to her? and is he going to be the straw that breaks the camels back for Kiya and she blows Zircon Moon up? Lots of questions and cannot wait to read more chapters!😍🥰😁
12/08/2020 06:29Marii Solaria
New redemption code for 12/7! YKB2YB
12/07/2020 20:35
Maria Svedinger Andersson
Really good book so far but damn it...the slow uppdaterad are killing me...I'm not the moste patient person in the world. I really need to learn not to start reading unfinished books.
12/07/2020 16:03
Crissy Walker
When will a new chapter be updated? Such a good book so far.
12/07/2020 01:52Marii Solaria
New redemption code for 12/6! RHCLKN
12/06/2020 22:12
empress
So when does the new chapter come out? I’m addicted.
12/06/2020 19:01
Kari Shockley
I hope Neuron & Kiya get to be happy together soon. He is trying so hard to redeem himself.
12/06/2020 17:12
Фатя Султанова
please share a longer chapter once in a while. you give us redemption code anyway ❤️
12/06/2020 16:52
lala lala
has anyone had all their coins taken away from them? mine have disappeared and I haven't used the app in 2 days!
12/06/2020 14:45Taina Iosefo
OMG.... So glad Darian was able to speak with Kiya and tell him everything he feels and his speculations. I hope Kiya is able to tell Neron and they can plan on doing something great.
12/06/2020 12:13Paige Copeland
Okay that genuinely made my heart hurt a little bit for Darien. Actually even more so for his wolf, but I am just repulsed by Odessa. I mean it’s not like I haven’t been this whole series, but to treat your mate as an object and ruin his life for someone who doesn’t want you? Whew, the delusion...
12/05/2020 18:27
