Unhinged Comments

Christy G

Dammmmnnnnn!

Crissy Walker

When will a new chapter be updated? Such a good book so far.

updates take sooooo long 😩😩😩😩

such a good chapter Neron seems to be redeeming himself still a lot to prove to gain her trust but he seems to be moving in the right direction..it will be a challenge for him to stand up to his father I’m sure

Lois Withers

omg you are an amazing writer but youre killin me here lol I almost chucked my phone felt like I was watching true blood again lol awesome chapter

Ben Knight

Hopefully next chapter drops soon. Am I the only one hoping she doesn't end up accepting him and she gets a 2nd mate? I hate when they get abused for years and accept the mate after a few months of being good to them. Forgiveness is ok but acting like their actions had no consequences in the end gets annoying. Neron can get anther mate or something but not Kiya. Give Darien to her after Odessa dies.

I think Osiris' mark prevents Kiya from figuring out her feelings for Neron. The spark of their mate bond fainted after she was bitten by Osiris, right? 🤔 Also, Is it possible that she's already in love but wasn't aware of it? 👀 She cried because she felt lonely, but didn't know why she was feeling that way. It's probably that "trauma won this round", indeed. 😭

I wonder if Kiya would want to kill him in front of all the pack members. I mean... If she would want to be seen after her revelations...

Reader-008277

Do y’all really think Jonathon would be so foolish as to mess with Nikolai? He’s warned him and Jonathon agreed that he is no match for him. I think this is Osiris’ doing. I think he sent his demon child Cerubus to try to destroy them and take Kiya. I hope they kick his butt , kill him and send him piece by piece back to his daddy Osiris

Christine Londo

I love it , but she too private he can probably help her but she won’t tell him she got bit!!! and because of you I found my love to read again!!❤️ thanks

Legend of Gru

I read chapter 33 and remembered that you drew inspiration from one of the comments a reader posted, it was honestly quite lovely to read through and well executed. Kiya and the Garnet Moon Pack (I hope I’m correct, tend to get it confused sometimes) along with Neron and Raina should just leave. Neron’s pack is just plain toxic and it needs to be cleansed from the inside out. The people have been brainwashed and can barely think for themselves! Am I the only one who thinks that Osiris is a necessary evil to a certain extent????? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 He’s a bit on the 🦇💩 crazy side of life however, by helping Kiya release her inner darkness and anger and rage, it’s helping her as long as she doesn’t lose sight of who she is.

Alyssa

The part when Kiya’s mom was beating Darren with the shoe 👠 😂😂😂😂😂 I got a visual of when my mom used to hit us with a slipper😂😂😂😂😂😂!!! I love it!!

JamieHichew

oh. my. gosh! 🤭🥺

Miasia Holleman

I feel like I need hourly or daily updates..this one every few days is destroying my soul 😩😭

Pearl Minchew Phillips

one chapter at a time??... really???..im out

Elizabeth Edmondson

I'm ready for the interrogation to see how Neron reacts to learning his dad allowed people to do whatever they wanted to kiya. I suspect it will be the final nail in the proverbial coffin for neron tolerating his father anymore.

Rebeca G

That was an absolutely fantastic update! :) I'm scared for kiya, though! If theres one thing I've learned from horror movies, it's never give advance warning when trying to leave a Murder House. Dont wait til morning kiya- run now! zircon moon is a hot second from descending into crazy death cult territory.

Lois Withers

youre killin us smalls lol another great cliff hanger bravo 👏 can't wait for the next one😝😁

Lois Withers

WILL YOU PLEASE STOP MAKING THIS STORY SO FREAKING AMAZING??? YOURE KILLING ME WITH THE CLIFF HANGERS LOL

Heard this before!! We're not hearing anything new, keeps going around in circles, scrathed record

Reader143637

your so talented!!! love your work!

Berry Bear

just let me say you are an awsome writer. i loved the first book and i even love this book more🥰🥰 My plan was to wait until this book is done befor start reading. because i hate waiting for new chapters. But i was to ecxited to wait.😅 I love the Arty/Onix chapter😊 Looks like the are a little more decisive than Kiya and Neron. Great Job☺ Canterbury wait to read more🤪🥳

Rosemarie Carrillo

uh oh 😦

Pupu

when will u give us next update ? 🥺 update a couple of chapters.

Glemmett Maylor

I don't think Kiya should kill him. It will change her forever. She should find a way for him to suffer not die. Death is the easy way out. Lol I suppose now Neron will understand why she cleaves more to the innocent children and did not wnt him to touch her even during her heat.

Justmee

I had a feeling you were going to update today. Yayyyyy!!! I'm so happy Kiya's family stayed by her side during the night. I think she needed to wake up intertwined with loved ones and body heat. That body heat is everything when you feel alone and broken. Ugh, that bite is driving me crazy though 😑🥴! Hopefully Osiris is next on the chopping block. Sleep on it Kiya no matter your decision we have your back. Thank you for another awesome update 🤩

ballen282004

I can feel Kiya's emotions with every sentence. You had me crying from the beginning of Untouchable and cheering for Kiya by the end. Now you got me cheering for her from the beginning of Unhinged and crying my eyes out in what I'm guessing is the middle of this story. Patiently waiting for your next update...also if you are taking suggestions on how Tristan dies...dropping his private parts in a deep fryer while still attached to his body has a nice sound to it🤷🏾‍♀️. Also, what about Tristan's wolf? was he as corrupt as Tristan or was he like Odessa wolf?

Okay, I am sobber now. I hope Jonathan and that Elder are trembling with fear now. If in case, Kiya gets into trouble by killing Tristan, I don't think the Garnet Moon Pack would just stay on the side and watch. And definitely, Zircon couldn't win against Garnet, if they choose to wage war against them. On the other hand, Tristan and Odessa did attack Kiya recently. So execution is still valid on the grounds of: Hurting Kiya, being the Alpha's mate, and on the agreement thar Neron will protect the Garnet's Deltas. In short, Odessa should be executed too. Or be punished in the dungeon. And I HOPE Neron steps down from the Alpha Position... as this will create HUGE vexation to Jonathan.

ballen282004

is Osiris the avatar of the Egyptian god Osiris Lord of the underworld?

Sherisa Weston

Did i mentioned how much I love Jacqueline?! If she didn't already have a mate I wouldn't mind she and Kiya being mates. I just love how protective and caring she is of her

beautiful chapter! you really have a gift of writing. this really made me feel for Neron. Him and Kiya are two broken souls hopefully they can heal and come together. Love Diana she is my favorite lol

Junita Braithwaite

I tried to post this before but I didn't see it pop up.... congratulations on having the top 2 selling books!!! 👏🏾

Starr Hawkins

I still hate everyone in her old pack. I just can’t help it.

Albertina Mcclain

this is so sad 😞. Kiya should leave that place, go back to pack that treated good. why hasn't anyone call her brother Alpha Anthony?

Pupu

oh my god! the chapter is more intense now. when are we getting the next update ? I hope Neron does something brutal to punish the gaurd. and something transpires between Neron and Kiya.

"I want the pain to stop. Please, don't leave me alone again." 😭😭😭😭😭 Dear Ms. Author, in the spirit of Holidays, can you kindly please hasten up the updates so that by Christmas, we'd all stop crying too.

Esessanee Wallace Moten

ok enough when am I go. a get the rest I want them to work please you cant leave us hangjng

MzDiva1987

I cried throughout this chapter. Raina should be a shamed of herself. All of them should be.

That was heartbreaking. Raina needs to feel every bit of that guilt. I couldn’t imagine treating any of my little sisters this way. and to know that she could have done something....yes... feel all the guilt. I swear I am almost with Osiris, that pack needs to be burned to the ground.

hummmm interesting Diana keeps coming around lol l like her 🤣🤣

Jael Brown

I just finished reading the first few chapters they were amazing. A few questions though, out of all the avatars he could have why does Osiris desire Kiya so much? Why can't Odessa just be happy with Darien? Speaking of Darien was he really that weak minded that he would be so easily influenced to throw away his friendship with Kiya? I also have to ask how often will you post updates, I am just curious but please don't rush chapters the story has an awesome flow that would be ruined if chapters were rushed.

Janet Bedford

I need more chapters so loving this book

Victoria Clarke

Hoping for new chapter soon, no pressure... 😂

Kira Galkina

Love it! and agree with a few comments below about Neron and Kiya hopefully will end up together. absolutely enjoying reading. When is new chapters will be out? :)

Ashley Fuller

Octavius...someone refresh my mom brain. I’m struggling to remember that name...

Jade Cross

cliffhanger like none other... I'm so glad that kiya has not got this huge secret off her chest! with it now out in the open people can really see why she is the way she is around them and will open up so much in nerons eyes to just how much she had and is suffering because of what his dad had allowed. manipulation and pain is a huge thing to hold over people and that is exactly what johnathen did. neron is not a bad man he had the worst person to guide him in his grieving. it is something he has to live with and he knows that and there's only 1 person who can make kiya truely happy and I feel like she has already starting trusting him more then she could have planned to feel she can shout out her past to them all. she's falling for him unbeknown to her shes falling and I hope they do admit and mate and be a power pair to get rid of the only terror left in her life oiris! mind is making up its own ending here i need these chapters 🤣 thank you for such an emotional truthfelt story line. I was on the edge of the chair now on the floor waiting dear I say patiently?... x

Man Osiris is a jolly creep!! As for Odessa well, I can't wait to see her get her rocks!! Love this book. Thank you for yet another awesome chapter 👌

Stacy Jefferson

I think the owl is the Moon Goddess watching over Kiya and trying to lead her to the Neron I think there bind is the only thing that can stop Osiris from taking over her completely. I hope she gives in to Neron soon it kills me to her fight their bond giving how much he is sorry for the he has done he clearly loves her.

Becky Strong

ok I'm at the part were shes helping with the rock wall, is Artimas a boy wolf? have I missed something here..

Daisylion

every time I come on and see a new update I get so excited😩 the story just keeps getting better and better😩😩

oouuhhhhhh girl 🥵🥵🥵 yes the b$tch is going down

Albertina Mcclain

I can't take it!!! The chapters are too short and when is she going to work everything out with Neron

Jenn McCoy

I am proud of what she did! he deserved it and then some. now they all know some more pain she went through! no one was there no one cared idk I am struggling staying on the good side because there is so much evil and unfortunately some can't be forgiven! Neron better go after her! I like them together but its hard because of how he treated her! I think they could be together if he just gave up alpha and moved his members that are not evil to her brothers pack! I think they would be great but I hate to say them staying there is a no that pack needs to burn to the ground and move on with those that want a brighter future!

yea Onyx!! loved that he showed up.

Taina Iosefo

Oooooo yes finally someone has something about Odessa.. a feeling or intuition I love it Phoebe... so excited for the next update!!

Justmee

My heart is pounding and I haven't read the update yet 🤭🤯😪

Rosemarie Carrillo

You better GO Phoebe!!!

Jael Brown

Is it me or does this story keep getting better. I really wish Neron didn't have to kill Odessa it would do much more if Kiya kicked her butt and then she was banished and rejected by Darien. I hate Jonathan and I really hope Neron is the one who kicks his butt for hurting Kiya that's if fate doesn't kill him first

Angie O'Flaherty Thomas

I think Diana is Neron's mother's spirit watching over them

ballen282004

Great update! I'm guessing Tristan is the guard who raped her while she was held in the cage? I wonder does anyone in the pack knows what he did to her? and is he going to be the straw that breaks the camels back for Kiya and she blows Zircon Moon up? Lots of questions and cannot wait to read more chapters!😍🥰😁

Bethan

Waaahhhh. I just love every update. 🤯❤️

now can Neron look into his family history like his dad said so we can understand more why his dad is so obsessed, it goes beyond just Kiya being an avatar...

Yey! More more more (Codes too!)

JamieHichew

love that they kissed!

Om my heart!!!!!

Elsa Rodarte

good but too short of a chapter

Reader143637

I hope Neron and Kiki make a deeper connection!!! and I have a feeling Diana is going to play a big role later down the road!!! love your book can’t wait to read more!!!!

Taina Iosefo

OMG... this is totally crazy... Kiya shouldn’t trust anyone but her pack. Well maybe not Darian due to Odessa... I can’t wait for the next update.

I love the way you write, your plots and style, and most especially, the way you put details in the perspective of your characters. I like it a lot!

AZM24

bahahaha (evil laugh) YES!! Odessa is going DOWN!!! oh yeah, I can’t wait for the next chapter!!...waiting impatiently for the next update, oh you and your cliffhangers

G.A Coppola

this was a great chapter. the jealousy, the flashbacks, the guilt, the panic attack...all explored beautifully. I love your writing!

June Chase

very nice chapter

HanaBana

Wow! I'm loving this already! It did not disappoint. I'm so ready for more moments between Kiya and Neron, and little Diana! I hope Neron triumphs over Osiris.

Lyss

I am so glad kiya and Neron are having some emotional moment and coming closer together. I am also glad that Neron is trying to do right by Kiya. Are we gonna see more between Artemis and onyx. I know that as kiya and Neron become closer so Will Artemis and onyx but it would be great to see their emotions from their point of view.

G.A Coppola

loved the hair washing between Kiya and Neron. so happy they were able to have some intimate moments.

Lois Withers

omg youre killin me smalls lol gettin good!!!

Nans Smith

please put them together I kn he dont deserve her forgiveness or her heart her love but I kn that's y the moon goddess gave her a second life and she didn't want a2nd mate so the1st mate is where she belongs her heart can forgive she always just wanted her family&pack to love her she is meant to b that packs true Luna please

AZM24

Great chapter, thank you for sharing more about Neron’s pain and suffering as well. He has come a long way and everyone deserves a second chance, if they are truly genuine about their guilt and doing everything to make amends. I hope they do talk and share another vulnerable moment with each other. I am pulling for Kiya and Neron...and Diana she is WONDERFUL 😉

I love cheese pizza too!

Reader-586470

The book is great!! I just have to say that I am on Neron team 🙌. The forgiveness has to happen...can’t wait for another chapter.

rita lora

Diana the owl is the moon goddess watching over Kita & Nerón right?

Jael Brown

I don't know about anyone else but I am waiting for the fight between Odessa and Kiya to go down and I hope Kiya slaps that heffs into oblivion. As for Neron I see him slowly making strides to win Kiya's heart and that the fact he told that evil she-devil to take a hike proves it. Hopefully in the end they will realize how much they truly love each other.

yay welcome back!! oh i hate Odessa more already 😑😑

Legend of Gru

Oooouuuuu, this Onx and Artemis relationship is beautiful ♥️ My single ass is squealing around like I’m the one in the relationship 😂😂😂😂😂

dee brack

Can’t wait til it’s finished!!!!🙃

G.A Coppola

so why doesn’t she feel the sparks anymore? is it bc of Osiris’ bite? is he her mate now since Neron never marked her? if so, I think this would be great bc she wanted to be loved without the bond so this may allow her to develop feelings without the sparks and see that her feelings towards Neron are genuine and not something she’s been made to feel.

Victoria Richard

I think neron will see his wrongs and fix them for her and she will be with neron and together with true love not mate bonding love but honest true love they will beat osiris.

G.A Coppola

ouuuu she was about to tell him! that dad and Odessa need to be put in their place and soon!

Nasteeha Hussein

I’m feeling sorry for him and as humans we need second chance and he Deserve it

Thank you sooooo much. Finally, it's here!

Lynora Crawford

I'm so glad to see this up now! I've been checking every other day since finishing the first one! I'm looking forward to what you bring to the story this time!

Alythrae

I'm so glad this story is up! I have to know what happens. Odessa I'm sorry will have a ride awakening. I can't decide if I'm on board with the Kiya/Neron team, but definitely don't like Kiya/Osiris. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Sherisa Weston

I am still not fully on board this KiyaxNeron ship. It seems like Osiris and Neron are going to be her main love interest so Neron would be better if that is the case. I just want Kiya to find love of her own will and not be tied down to this mate bond. I don't want her to feel compelled to Neron because of some mate bond. I can't wait until Odessa and Johnathan get everything they deserve for messing with Kiya. It is so upsetting reading about them.

Can't wait for Odessa to finally get what she deserves. Evil b... 🤐