Unhinged Comments

Carol Hatton

Great read! Hope it won’t be long for the release of book 3!!!

Kecina_Janice

ugh he keeps putting his nasty lips on her 🤮😂

Glemmett Maylor

I can't wait for the third book. I absolutely loved the first two! Awesome job!

A M Archibald

it's impossible to prop your knees onto your thighs.

Bonib2

I cannot wait for the third book Marii. Such a talented writer you are.

Mrs.Hyde

I waited for a while to have several chapters to read...I know that Kiya went through horrible abuse and while I agree that some people at Zircon Moon should be punished I just wish Kiya didn't have to be turned into a monster to make it happen. I loved her strength and resilience but really now what makes her any better than the people she's so determined to destroy?

Saki J. Gibson

This was awesome! I’m so excited. I can’t wait until Kiya and Neron have a heart to heart ❤️

Meaghan Prue

you know of all the villains I have ever read about and wanted destroyed I want Osiris to suffer the most horrendous death ripped apart put together and ripped apart again until the twisted evil bastard is no more. and that stupid snake dunked in a bowl of acid and then burned alive

Nina072

Not surprised at all with ashley and Steven, cowards will be cowards. thank you Marii for this update, it was a slam dunk, normally I'd be sad that a book is ending but I know that theres a whole 3rd book ahead so I'm excited. Amazing update as always, you never disappoint; Even at those times you've felt you've lacked you still outdid yourself. My FB jail sentence is almost over so soon I'll be back and I'll be ale to annoy the members with my daily posts. lol I cannot wait, 30 days of no interactions that I gotta catch up on. also Marii I hope you are doing well yourself, we obviously love this story and it's easy to get caught up in it but we shouldn't forget to check in the author who creates such high quality content for us to enjoy. 😊

Welcome back, Kiya ♥️

Meaghan Prue

this chapter was well written and much needed i want them together so badly but just out of curiosity Marii when Kiya was asking Selene to forgive her im just wondering why you didn't add like a part where selene tells her that its okay or was that what Diana was for

Hollstar

wow! that was intense! ❤️❤️❤️ good old edge of your seat stuff with some humour thrown in! 🤠 oh I really hope neron isn’t dead though! or at least if he is he gets sent back by Selene like Kiya did!

Nina072

so who's hoping for just a little glimpse of the encounter between Johnathan, essie, nuria and selene. I wanna see that go down, and I'd love to see where selene sends bad wolves.

sounds like multiple personality disorder

Serena Alvord

thinking about your posts for pride month for your characters, I can see why they would be hesitant at first with Darien. I love that Ariel chose her! 💚

A M Archibald

I wish you'd do a bulk upload. This 1 chapter a week or two is dragging. I might have to not read for a couple of months so that I've got a nice chunk to read.

Loved it!!! when will the 3rd book be released

Meaghan Prue

Marii when I reread that chapter where Osiris tells kiya he killed Set it did say that Set was too caring for others so who was Selene referring too

Hollstar

omg what a cliffhanger!!! 😲 love it!

yay!!! I hope she’s a worthy mate for Darien!! he deserves it

G.A Coppola

when is the next update?

Moonlight Muse

really enjoyed these chapters and LOVED how neron got her to agree to eat 😍 when no one else could. also the fact with thier mate bond literally gone that theyre still talking and have that bond is great

Moonlight Muse

both chapters were amazing!!

Amber Mitchell

Marii the anticipation is killing me😬

Brittney Allen

Great chapters!!! My favorite was Artemis. I just love it when its from the wolves point of view.❤❤❤

Meaghan Prue

marii i hope u didnt change your mind about Neron staying alive.

is that the end?

Nina072

AWESOME UPDATE!!! HOLY BALLS THAT WAS AWESOME!

Hazel Roseby

Regardless of how this story ends; it’s been a pleasure reading it... I’m so happy to bumped into book 1 and cannot wait to see whats comming next... THANK YOU Marii for all the emotions you’ve had us experienced throughout the chapters. (I come every day just in case the notification doesnt work hahahahaha) <3

Amber Mitchell

Y’all don’t forget that Kiya/Halima died too in the beginning and was sent back by Selene. Just sayin there is still hope for Neron to pull through 😉 plus we don’t know the rest of what Kiya’s avatar powers hold...Marii please update soon! I’m dying to see how it ends!

MP14

Nooooooooo 😭😫 I have thoroughly enjoyed reading these books, every time I think it’s going to go one way, you always throw in a surprise twist. I literally check this book everyday to see if there might be an update 🤣

heyyy Marii! Are we gonna see what happens to Ariel in the chapter of Selene casting her judgment ( wishing with my whole heart and being you’ll do) to Odessa and company?

dailyLimz

😳😳 lesss gooo Kiya! you got this!

Christy G

Marii, I have followed this story since the beginning and I am with you all the way. I hope Kiya comes back and puts Lady Sanguine in a place that can be put to rest. Kiya has a good heart in spite all she has been through. I love Kiya and want her to overcome all that she has been through.

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

love the 2 updates!!

Autumn Harvey

I absolutely adore your ability to capture people's emotions. this is my favorite story, hands down. when's the next update coming?

Neva Dat

y r u updating book two on book 1?

Meaghan Prue

Marii promised Neron wouldn’t die

Carrie Holley McKown

I am addicted to this series. I can't wait for updates and a book 3 🙀🙀🙀. I'm so in love with these characters.

This was a GREAT update!!! Neron’s dilemma was beautifully written. Gah! Neron survives...right? 😬😬😬

Christina Johnson

Omg this was awesome! Thank you so much! go artemis. cant wait until they reunite and kick ass! 😊😊 x

Meaghan Prue

okay why is there two books called untouchable with different covers in the top ten lineup one shows just Kiya in the front the other shows Artemis and Kiya

Alyssa

come on Neron 😢😢😢😢😢😢. I never thought I would shed a tear for Neron. Dang. He has shown so much character growth over these 2 books. Girl Marii you’re amazing!!!

Sherisa Weston

yasss Phoebe and Violet are badass. What colour was Phoebe's hair blonde like Sapphire?

Hollstar

aw that last chapter as sweet! so glad she made peace within herself! I’m so happy neron was revived! hopefully Kiya isn’t in a coma too long!

Kecina_Janice

oh my this chapter tugged on heart strings 😢

Brittney Allen

soooo I'm a little late in reading because I havent been able to see my phone close up. Purchased a pair reading glasses today at Walmart and I am back in business! 😭😭😭😭nooooooo😱 Please heal Onyx and Neron🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾 I am begging you! I need my dose of Onyx and him keeping Neron in line. Kiya and Artemis needs them to heal. 😭😭😭I am so distraught 😫😫😫

Kirsten Burmeister

oh things are getting even more intense 😱

Nina072

y'all let's be patient. I know it's good and were hooked but lets remember our girl needs her time. especially right now.

Saki J. Gibson

I am so hooked and satisfied with this book. I’m super excited about the relationship between the two now. I’m going back to reread book 1 for the third time 😂

Reader-742236

please update soon, I can’t get enough js

Meaghan Prue

marii i dont understand something in the chapter before was that happening before neron killed johnathan or after because it said Kiya tackled lady s to the ground were they fighting for control and lady s won or will that be in the next chapter

I can feel the conflict between Kiya and Sanguine so much... I remember you mentioned being a survivor of abuse yourself and your description of the fight to reclaim power after such abuse is both accurate and compelling. I commend you for being able to channel your experience, what you went through directly or indirectly, and turn it into such an incredible story, so skillfully written, where emotions are genuine in their fascinating complexity. I would hope that writing is cathartic to you and that the amount of readers, as well as their enthusiast comments, brings a form of healing and a sense of vindication to you. Thank you, Marii 💕💪

Sherisa Weston

Yay Kiya finally found peace

Reader-135828

can’t wait for the new book. I’m hooked

finally! Johnathan needed to die and Neron’s hand. it had to be done

Sherisa Weston

Could you remind the chapter when the ritual where Ariel was separated from Odessa happened please?

Meaghan Prue

I’m surprised at Odessas judgement not that she doesn’t deserve it but at the words, I remember when she called Selene daft and that Selene didn’t care at all for her. I’m surprised Selene didn’t say excuse me I never cared for you I gave you a mate that would love you and cherish you but you manipulated him and threw away the gift I gave you like it was garbage it is you that didn’t care for me. also why was set condemned I thought Osiris killed him because he said he was a goodie goodie or maybe I misread that. great chapters as always Marii

Saki J. Gibson

I’m so excited! Thank you for this 🥰 Love the victory of Artemis and Kiya reunited

Vicki Mayhue

AH-HA!! I KNEW IT!! Johnathan is totally in on it, huh?

Kish Kush

leaving me on the edge of my seat 😱

A M Archibald

I don't want osiris to die. I know he will because there isn't anyway coming back from this because his avatar is the main reason he is so destructive. But I don't know I can understand his actions. He hasnt lied. Also kiyas parents should have died. They're the real villains in this book. Same with Valerian he is so obtuse.

Oh my! I think Osiris would go ballistic seeing Asim again... And that he's alive all this time. Why did Arty change to human? I'm thought, Kiya is her human? 🤔 And lastly, could Lady Sangguine be in the present when somwhere in the other realm, she's wrestling with Kiya?

ah man 😭not Neron

Thank you for the updates they were AMAZING as always! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Reader-742236

waiting patiently for updates...... but it’s killing me lol

Lisa Essler

The author has written a great story, but there are some syntax and grammatical mistakes, ir using the wrong word e.g. 'rift raft ' when it is clear that 'riff-raff' is what was meant. Small mistakes I know, but they do make a difference.

Debbie Boston

ok I sure cant wait!!

Taina Iosefo

Sweet.. they are now talking and just being honest with each other. love it!! yay yay yay!!

Meaghan Prue

i wonder if she did feel him near and try but was blocked by a wall of darkness

Laur S

not asking for updates just want to know what the schedule has been like so I can pause for a little. Anyone know once a month or is this book on pause?

Hollstar

Just as the first, I loved this book, and the ending was lovely! I love how at peace (or heading towards) they all are finally, although I’m sure there are many more trials and much more healing to come in the next book! I can’t wait! ❤️❤️❤️

Sarah

please update

LuciannLara DonWelch

oh my gosh!!!! oh my gosh!!!! I love these chapters!!! oh Neron keep fighting and don't give up love wins love heals patience, understanding and love work wonders for abused children

Absolutely loved it!!! can't wait for the next one!!

Jael Brown

OMG AND WOW ALL ST THE SAME TIME!!! First Osiris's brother shows up out of the blue and he is certainly not dead. Then we have Artemis battling her way through the darkness to get to Kits. And then Kiya lays the smack down on Lady Seguine. And lastly Neron walks into a trap even Ray Charles and Stevie Wonder could see. You have truly out done yourself with this update Marii. You go girl!!! Oh I forgot to mention the Lanes and Jonathan giving up on Kits, like duh that's what got you all into this mess in the first place. I wonder if Neron has it in him to kill his father, we shall see.

Saki J. Gibson

Icsnt wait for more updates. I’m hooked! 😁

Shrut Keerti

this was a really nice book... m intrigued what happens in the third book. hope to be able to read it soon!

I LOVE the new packs name ❤️❤️Great finish - did I miss Darien though? or maybe they’ll be a part of Unbreakable 🤗

Taina Iosefo

OMG... that was the most intense few chapters... I was getting goosebumps just reading it and with Neron and Kiya closer than they’ve ever been but still being civil. The sacrifices and love everyone has for each other and the strength of each of the avatars was freakin amazing. Can’t wait for the next update(s)!! haha

Jessica Carr

OMG!!! come on Kiya!! Don’t let the darkness win👀👀👀

Justmee

Bravo 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Sherisa Weston

I was hoping Violetta would return and she will

Great Update 🥰

Meowdel Em

i miss Artemis !!!!

still hoping that they get back together and heal together.

Carrie McKown

I love your books. I cannot wait to see how book 2 ends and what happens in book 3. Kiya speaks to me on a deep level and her journey to healing is so special and touching to read about

Jemma

yesssss I was waiting for Pheobe to show up!!!💜 😍 I thought her being Hecate’s avatar could stop cerebus somehow. 🔥 show them Hecate Queen 💪🏻 her and Violetta 😍 that cliffhanger!! I actually love this book! come on Kiya show this coward snake who’s had the strength all along 🤍🤍🤍🤍🐺🌟🌝

Patsy Love

Did you say 3rd book?!? That is exciting. How many chapters are left in this book?

Sherisa Weston

omg I had a feeling Selene was planning something with Nuria and Celeste after she spoke with them ahhhhhh that was so exciting. This book is amazing

Brianna Jordynn Wright

you are such an amazing writer. I wanna see this series on bookshelves

update please 😂

Kayla Elliott

this was an amazing story!! I truly can’t wait for the next book!

i loved it Marii! Great 2nd book. when will you release the 3rd one? 🤗

Meaghan Prue

Marii as I was zoning out today I was wondering how come you didn't have Ariel confront Odessa at her judgement or was selene only saying that to spite her that arriel was with someone else

Jessica B

Absolutely brilliant! I am still holding on to hope that Neron and Kiya will find love together. I can’t wait for the third book!

Christy G

Absolutely loved it! Can't wait for book 3. ❤❤❤❤❤❤

Nyasi Joshi

I have been completely addicted to this series. You are really gud in captivating the reader's mind.They wont let me sleep at night making me completely restless and eager for the next chapter. Please continue with ur amazing work.I would love to see Neron and Kiya fight all odds and end up being together.He really is evolving into gud and they would be great together.

Megs Runge

aauuggh!! the suspense is killing me! such a great read and I love how you show all the inner emotions play out their own roles!!

Satui Maui'a Laufau

I’m so happy for Ariel! Odessa was a B!+cH. anyhow, thank you Marii for these awesome updates. gosh, I still got love for a Neron. btw, I absolutely love Diana.