Unhinged Comments

  • Jamee Moore

    You know this really makes the me think about the wolves of certain characters that don't even get to defend themselves. Like Ariel (Odessa's wolf) wanting to be with Darien, but can't do anything about it because Odessa is being selfish wanting Neron and Darien. Then we have Delilah (Ashley's wolf) who wanted to save Kiya and Artemis early on, but Ashley wouldn't let her. Now, I'm wondering what's going on with Johnathon's wolf and if he's just as evil as his human or if he wants something different.

    01/01/2021 21:10
  • MzDiva1987

    I was like oooohhhh sh*t! this was long over due. keep it up👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

    01/01/2021 20:54
  • Yahaida Perez-Lemon

    aaaaayyyyyyyeeeeeee really wanted to see a fight BUT I'll take it! lol

    01/01/2021 20:32
  • Reader-shepette

    please do not take my comments as a bad thing I love the store and am looking forward to the new updates I am just impatient as I am really into this story.

    01/01/2021 17:45
  • Reader-shepette

    why is it taking so long between chapters this is killing me it has been like two weeks since the last chapters.

    01/01/2021 17:40
  • lala lala

    waking up to two new chapters 🤩. does anyone think that Neron will give up he Alpha title to be with kiya?

    01/01/2021 17:11
  • Moonlight Muse

    love the story so far, and cant wait for more updates i do hope we can see more of neron and kiya moments as he has grown so much as a man and thinks selflessly for kiya.

    01/01/2021 16:55
  • Alyssa

    Ok, I have a new respect for Nerón!! He has shown the most growth over this whole situation. I believe that Nerón treated her badly because of Jonathan. Nerón knew that Kiya’s parents would take her home, but he called them because he knew it was best for her. I believe he delivered on his promise to Selene. He wants her happy even if it’s not with him ❤️❤️❤️

    01/01/2021 16:29
  • Spectral Beauty

    The best way to start the new year! Woke up to 2 new chapters! Thank you, author! 😁 I am so glad that Lyra and Nickolai came to kick some butt. They are my favorite. Ashley is pathetic and Jonathan is a nutcase. They needed to be put in their place. Glad Kiya will be leaving, but something tells me that Osiris will make a move before “tomorrow morning” 😬😬😬

    01/01/2021 16:02
  • Sherisa Weston

    Did Kiya tell her parents about Darien? I know she told them everything but just want to know if that was apart of it

    01/01/2021 15:27
  • Sherisa Weston

    I am so happy Kiya and her friends are finally leaving that horrible deplorable pack. Good riddance. Now it is time to deal with Osiris even though Odessa and Johnathan have not been properly dealt with

    01/01/2021 15:25
  • Jenn McCoy

    its time for the pack and neuron that want a better future to go with them let Johnathan have the pack back of those that want to stay. Kiya needs her home, family and friends. I just hope they can fix Daren before they go back so oddessa doesn't go with them.

    01/01/2021 15:03
  • Sherisa Weston

    Kiya really has changed because she is now saying bad words and swearing and the Kiya before hatred that :(

    01/01/2021 14:56
  • Monica Paz

    I wish Neron would leave the pack for her. Maybe then he can have a chance to earn Kiya’s forgiveness.

    01/01/2021 14:32
  • Kelly Rohrer

    Happy New Year 🎆 and Love the updates!!!

    01/01/2021 14:06
  • Sherisa Weston

    happy new year everyone!! 🥳🍾🥂🍻

    01/01/2021 13:53
  • Brittney Allen

    awesome update!!! Nikolai is a great father! He and Lyria are the parents I wish I had. They love and protect their children no matter what. side note: 🤔now you told me that Neron didn't snitch?😒 I see it was Jackie dry snitching and Neron provided the moisture 🤦🏾‍♀️... I aint even mad at them though cause Kiya needed her parents. They did the right thing, but I'm disappointed 😞 😔 😪 😕 😒. I though I was going to at least read Kiya choked out or scared Jonathan until he pissed his pants😈🤷🏾‍♀️😫😭😭😭🤣🤣🤣

    01/01/2021 10:54
  • Nnaa

    i think jonathan will do something more deadly to hold kiya back 🤔

    01/01/2021 10:13
  • Brittney Allen

    love the update...hate coming to the comments to read negative Nancy's complaining about one chapter updates...here's a thought🤔 wait until the book is finish then come back...save us all some frustrations. This is not the author's full time job and you are on an app that does not sale books but chapters to book with coins. Not a regular book store. Hopefully this author's books will be sold in stores soon but until then, STOP PRESURRING THE AUTHOR! I am on alot of these apps and she is one of the few authors that produces grade A work without all the typos and I love her work. I would like her to finish this book in peace so I'm not left hanging like I was regarding a previous story I was reading and got invested in because people were not patient.😒😭😭😭

    01/01/2021 10:03
  • Tahiti_650

    i love this book but im getting impatient. reading 1 update every other day is frustrating. as much as I love reading this book. I’m tempted to just stop reading it completely

    01/01/2021 09:32
  • Glemmett Maylor

    Is it bad that I so wanted him to kick Jonathan's ass? lol

    01/01/2021 08:57
  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Kiya is restless, overwhelmed by everything that has happened. I am more than happy that her real parents came and soothed her weariness away. She got Dad to fight for her honor and Mom to protect her vulnerability. For Neron... I am sorry that his dad is like that. But he got choices and it's up to him now.

    01/01/2021 08:36
  • Pearl Minchew Phillips

    one chapter at a time??... really???..im out

    01/01/2021 08:16
  • Reader-003394

    I am absolutely in love with this book. As a writer you have drawn me in . I love these characters, Kiya is a great character. I will say this I want Neron and kiya to find the love they with each other. kiya needs to finally see that neron has changed and he loves her. one thing she should realize is when she says the mate bond is not love she tears the love her friends share with their mates.

    01/01/2021 08:08
  • Lois Withers

    GO MOM AND DAD!!!! but I'm sad now for neron

    01/01/2021 08:08
  • Yolanda Moreofmetolove Benjamin

    I have been amazed through this book and I find it rewarding that her parents have come to let her heal in peace But what will become of her and Neron?????

    01/01/2021 07:43
  • Rebeca G

    That was an absolutely fantastic update! :) I'm scared for kiya, though! If theres one thing I've learned from horror movies, it's never give advance warning when trying to leave a Murder House. Dont wait til morning kiya- run now! zircon moon is a hot second from descending into crazy death cult territory.

    01/01/2021 07:25
  • Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

    That's how a parent should be. Ashley, Steven, and Jonathan are all despicable. Especially Jonathan. Not even a bit of remorse in him. Horrible man.

    01/01/2021 07:15
  • Meaghan Prue

    get her out of there and if Neron had any sense he forsake that damn pack and go to garnet moon with Kiya and let his father self destruct for all the wrong he has done.

    01/01/2021 07:11
  • Jael Brown

    Well Ashley and Steven take notes, this is how a parent is supposed to love their child. They put their daughter needs above their own and are willing to go to war for her. Although I was really hoping Lyra would kick Ashley's butt and Nikolai would beat the crap out of Jonathan but I know they are better than that. I am glad the Kiya's parents will be taking her away from this awful pack. Lyra and Nikolai are wonderful parents who truly love Kiya and I like how they stood up for her even against Jonathan. My question is what kinda of stunt is Jonathan about to pull to keep in Zircon Moon territory?

    01/01/2021 06:24
  • Albertina Pelzer-Mcclain

    I'm glad Kiya parents showed up too take her home. sorry for Nero, but when the Goddess gives you should appreciate.

    01/01/2021 06:08
  • Gwendolyn D. Pough

    These two chapters were so good! Now that is how you parent!

    01/01/2021 05:40
  • Gwendolyn D. Pough

    Yes, take your baby home!

    01/01/2021 05:28
  • Paige Copeland

    I want Neron and Kiya to be together, but I hate Zircon Moon. ugh

    01/01/2021 05:22
  • Kristy Anderson

    I really hope you up date this book soon, I gotta find out what happens and if Kyia and Neron can be together

    12/31/2020 23:36
  • Fiona Oxford

    love the book so much.. Libya should start a new life but the goddess has plans for them.. is there more still waiting..?

    12/31/2020 22:23
  • Geraldine Ferraren

    ok I just finished Untouchable and I am touting for Kiya to forgive and even give Neron a chance so they can be together and I am routing they both fully mate with Kiyas full consent. I got anxiety ready the first book and disappointed at the end however I am hopeful Neron and Kiya lead the pack together as Alpha and Luna

    12/31/2020 16:41
  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Hey Ms. Marii! It's already New Year in my country. I just like to let you know that having read your stories is still one of my favorite (unexpected) things that happened despite the misfortunes of 2020. Keep safe everyone! Happy New Year!!!! 🥂🍾🍸

    12/31/2020 16:07
  • Satui Maui'a Laufau

    She’s losing it! Forgiving her biological parents doesn’t mean they win, it means she was/is the better person and her healing will start fully! BUT... it’s understandable why she’s not able to do it just yet. she needs her own answers of why’s.. like why NO ONE believed her that she did not kill the Luna and the Angel or stood up for her or just basically help her escape the clutches of Jonathan, etc. I truly believe her healing will truly start when she finally open her heart to forgive! also, she was able to get rid of the vamp by using her avatar light.. why not do it again and cleanse herself of the darkness in the process.. just a theory.

    12/31/2020 08:19
  • Taniqua Ewers

    while I absolutely love your style of writing, I cannot stomach this style of reading 😔😒 it repulses me. I can't het enough of your books!! so I am still here. Once this book is over I will bid this platform adieu. You're so talented!! I'll be looking out to see if you've written anything I can purchase and let my mind ravage lol, such a juicy book!!!!

    12/30/2020 21:55
  • Spectral Beauty

    Oh boy...now all of the emotions are going to come out with Kiya’s parents showing up and Ashley and Steven in the room. It’s unbelievable that Ashley gets mad about Lyra. She was a real mom to Kiya! Ashley should be thanking her for saving Kiya’s life....

    12/30/2020 21:52
  • JustMee

    ***sigh 🤧! Things just got real. Now we will see how badly Kiya was truly affected. That embrace from her parents will allow all the real emotions to flow. Neron made the right call. He needed backup to help save Kiya. Another great update 🥰

    12/30/2020 20:49
  • Janet Bedford

    I need more chapters so loving this book

    12/30/2020 19:20
  • Janet Bedford

    She shouldn't forgive them after everything that's done to her. Put Jonathan in cells as well as her mum and dad give them a taste of what happens to her

    12/30/2020 19:19
  • Janet Bedford

    Kiya needs help with her anger and that parasite that's feeding off her moods.

    12/30/2020 19:17
  • Sherisa Weston

    I sort of feel bad for Ashley and Steven when Kiya said she will only feel happy when they die. They deserve it but I think Kiya should forgive everyone eventually not for them but for her to properly completely heal. She doesn't have to associate with them after though. All this anger and hatred is just going to eat her up from the inside and she will never fully heal and move on with her life

    12/30/2020 18:48
  • Cheryl P Westmoreland

    This kind of rage and anger is so very dangerous. She is destroying all the good inside. I hope her adoptive parents are able to get her to see what is happening, address her past, and move forward; whatever that looks like.

    12/30/2020 18:05
  • Taina Iosefo

    OMG.... why are they wanting forgiveness from Kiya so badly... they are the ones that chose her fate once they turned their backs on her multiple times. BUT wait did Neron call her parents to come?? I’m so excited that her “real” parents are there.. YAY!! I hope they get into it with Kiya’s egg and sperm donors... lol show them how real parents should be. Can’t wait for the next update..😃

    12/30/2020 16:25
  • Kelly Rohrer

    omgggg just reread and I totally missed it! I think I’m really quite fond of Neron! Is he the one who called Kiya’s mom and dad?!!! 💜God if he did it will be an official I LOVE HIM!

    12/30/2020 14:38
  • Jael Brown

    Mari don't kill me but I have to ask why was Jonathan present at Kiya's birth, did he know from the get that Kiya was an avatar since she was born with blue eyes or was he there because Steven was his best friend. There is alot that Jonathan is not telling and I really hope in one of the next chapters we found out what he knows and why he hates Kiya.

    12/30/2020 14:06
  • Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

    They want Kiya's forgiveness and yet they did nothing when everything went to chaos during Tristan's execution. Raina and Neron at least did something to earn her forgiveness.

    12/30/2020 13:49
  • Sondra Calmes

    To me, the only possible way they can redeem themselves is to die saving her life. Then and only then can they maybe get her forgiveness. Love these books. You are a very talented story teller.

    12/30/2020 12:57
  • Meaghan Prue

    Give it up weasel lane you are never going amount to lyria and her husband they loved and wanted her when she had nothing now she has her life back on track and u want to crawl back like the worms u are. stuff your apologies with silver and wolfsbane disgusting mutts

    12/30/2020 12:37
  • Mawusi Ford

    love it!! nope no redemption for the parents and l agree they only want her forgiveness to get rid of their guilt not because they are sorry. Aww did Neron call her parents? She does need them right now.

    12/30/2020 12:29
  • jess03

    NO NO NO I CANNOT STAND THE SUSPENSE!!!

    12/30/2020 12:27
  • Kelly Rohrer

    omggg though is that Kiya’s mom and dad from Garnet?!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜

    12/30/2020 09:41
  • Kelly Rohrer

    That’s right! they DEFINITELY do not deserve forgiveness! I still cannot stand those 2!

    12/30/2020 09:40
  • Gernari De Villiers

    I am so conflicted... I want her to destroy the pack, burn them to the ground(all the human parts anyway, Odessa and Ashleys wolfs are actually nice, and I love Onyx). However Kiya and Artemis is actually loving, I just don't know how you will ever be able to find a way for Kiya to move on from that horrors... Its irredeemable... Luckily you are amazing and I can't wait for the conclusion... How many chapters are you planning???

    12/30/2020 09:11
  • Glemmett Maylor

    Stop doing this to me woman! I swear I need the whole book! This is such good writing ....I feel all the emotions on these pages. sigh. Happy her real mom and dad have arrived. I agree with kiya, her birth parents are unworthy of her.

    12/30/2020 08:27
  • Nati romero

    ok you left it on a cliff hanger girl when will you write more? lol love the books by the way

    12/30/2020 07:58
  • Wini Wilson

    Yay finally!! This keeps.going.on and on!!

    12/30/2020 07:44
  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Yey!!! Mommy and daddy are here now, baby girl!

    12/30/2020 07:03
  • Gwendolyn D. Pough

    awwww man!!! I was getting into it and boom chapter over. I need more, more, give me more!! 😂

    12/30/2020 06:49
  • Lois Withers

    WILL YOU PLEASE STOP MAKING THIS STORY SO FREAKING AMAZING??? YOURE KILLING ME WITH THE CLIFF HANGERS LOL

    12/30/2020 06:20
  • Lois Withers

    I really want kiya's mom to kick the shit out of egg donor lol I think that would be hilarious

    12/30/2020 06:17
  • Alyssa

    I want Lyra to beat this egg donors ass! How could these people turn a blind eye to her pain for so many years!!! OMG they are disgusting

    12/30/2020 05:17
  • wolfey619

    Kinda ironic how Ashley was shedding crocodile tears throughout the whole chapter but her feelings shifter suddenly to anger when she smelled Kiya's REAL mom and dad. If anything, she should be thanking them for stepping in as legit parent's where Steven and her failed. I hope they get some "humbling" from Kiya's adopted parent's 🤭

    12/30/2020 04:50
  • Jael Brown

    First off let me congratulate you on having both of your books as the top two books on this app, it is definitely well deserved. I really like this update and how we are allowed to see things from Ashley's point of view. She truly did fail Kiya when she turned her back on her and treated her like she didn't exist. How does a parent turn their back on their child and for what prestige and status in a pack on slow decent to hell. I cannot blame Kiya for wanting nothing to do with these people and Raina it had to hurt more than anything to know her family didn't love her enough to stand up for her and protect her. I am glad Neron called her parents she needs them now more than ever. If Lyra and Nikolai hated Ashley and Steven before they probably can't stand them after they found out about Kiya being raped. I really hope Lyra whoops Ashley's ass and Nikolai beats the crap out of Steven. I can't wait to see what happens in the next update.

    12/30/2020 04:14
  • Nikki-1701

    YES! mom and dad are here.... I can’t wait for the next update

    12/30/2020 03:55
  • Brittney Allen

    Neron better not be bout to do what I think he bout to do. I know damn well be aint call her folks on her....snitches get stitches Neron!!! Let Kiya have her fun dammit! great update!!!

    12/30/2020 03:55
  • Junita Braithwaite

    I tried to post this before but I didn't see it pop up.... congratulations on having the top 2 selling books!!! 👏🏾

    12/30/2020 02:20
  • Rebeca G

    Love this most recent update! I think you've do a wonderful job with portraying abuse and trauma, and the lengths people will go to avoid their own guilt. Question- do you think you'll ever go back and write the direct aftermath of when everyone (esp neron and raina) found out shes innocent.(even in flashback) It could be interesting..

    12/29/2020 06:27
  • Jael Brown

    One question is plauging my mind, why is Kiya still in the Zircon Moon territory when all these people do is cause her pain. She has reached her breaking point and I feel that if she continues to stay here it's only going to get worse. The crap Jonathan tried to pull was messed up and Kiya really should have kicked his ass but there really is no reason for her and her friends to continue to stay. They have done the best they could with this turd of a pack, so no one can say that they didn't. Now this pack realizes that Kiya is no longer a scared little slave she is now a grown woman and a force to be reckoned with. I hope she leaves before she burns this pack to the ground.

    12/29/2020 01:25
  • Kimberley Wood

    The only Zircon Moon members that I have a soft spot for are Kwame and his parents. They helped Kiya/Halima when everyone else abused and abandoned her for those nine years. I do wish that they had the courage to stand up to Jonathan and Neron earlier in the piece. But I am glad that Neron saw how wrong he was when Halima/Kiya was proven to be innocent and that now he's working to right his wrongs and prove to Kiya that he's not the bad person he once was. But having said that, I do understand where Kiya's coming from and why she doesn't trust Neron and why she hates her biological parents and is wary of her biological sister. He abused her and marked her for death! Her parents did nothing to stop the abuse on their own daughter and they let Raina get away with adding to the abuse! Ashley and Steven forfeited their rights as Kiya's parents the day they allowed her to be thrown in that dungeon and be sentenced to a life of slavery and torture. If I were Kiya I'd disown my biological parents too and I wouldn't trust Neron either. But when it comes to Odessa, I'd be coming down so much harder. Instead of letting her actions slide and warning her, I'd actually belt the shit out of Odessa and give her a taste of her own medicine.

    12/28/2020 21:56
  • Junita Braithwaite

    Congratulations!!!! 👏🏾👏🏾 On having the top 2 books read on this app. It is so well-deserved. As usual this chapter was amazing.

    12/28/2020 18:15
  • Tracy Lattin Fournier

    I really love these two books!! I have laughed and cried with both and my emotions have been all over the place!! thank you for being such a great writer that you can draw in your readers like this is really happening right there in front of you!!

    12/28/2020 16:23
  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    I feel like she is now on the verge of losing herself and she's in a lot of stress too. I don't think she ever wanted to be feared, she just wanted justice and acknowledgement of this pack's negligence on her. I only hope Kiya would not misinterpret Neron's reactions and good intentions. I also think she's vulnerable at this point and prone to wrong comprehensions. The changes in her, as Neron observed, make me think that she also didn't know she was not okay. She was overwhelmed, I think. Osiris might use this to fill her with grudge and pull her eventually into insanity. 😞

    12/28/2020 05:27
  • JustMee

    *** tears 😭! I’m relieved that Neron is standing by her side. I have hope that Neron and Onyx love will be enough to bring her back from that cliff she’s standing on. Not going to lie though. It feels good to have all the ones that hurt her living their lives in fear for a change 😒🤦🏽‍♀️🤷🏽‍♀️! Thank you for another great update.

    12/28/2020 02:56
  • Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

    Onyx!! I'm falling in love with you! ❤

    12/28/2020 02:27
  • Meryam Ahsan

    I so wish he’d have kissed her!!! damn !!

    12/28/2020 01:48
  • Berry Bear

    Onyx is the best :D I would like to read a little conversation between Kita and Arty after all this happening. just Saying :) love Arty ♡ congrats ao first and second at the Ranking :)

    12/27/2020 23:36
  • Taina Iosefo

    I love how close, honest and open Garnet Moon Pack is with this situation with Kiya. They will forever have her back no matter what. I also love that Neron is wanting to make sure Kiya doesn’t change and she doesn’t lose herself. I hope Kiya finds it in her heart to finally give Raina a chance. Not so much forgiving her but a chance to earn her trust and forgiveness.

    12/27/2020 22:38
  • Legend of Gru

    I read chapter 33 and remembered that you drew inspiration from one of the comments a reader posted, it was honestly quite lovely to read through and well executed. Kiya and the Garnet Moon Pack (I hope I’m correct, tend to get it confused sometimes) along with Neron and Raina should just leave. Neron’s pack is just plain toxic and it needs to be cleansed from the inside out. The people have been brainwashed and can barely think for themselves! Am I the only one who thinks that Osiris is a necessary evil to a certain extent????? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 He’s a bit on the 🦇💩 crazy side of life however, by helping Kiya release her inner darkness and anger and rage, it’s helping her as long as she doesn’t lose sight of who she is.

    12/27/2020 22:30
  • Brittney Allen

    I love onyx lol...he gives me so much life lol...if it wasn't for him I would be happy with Neron dying with the rest of the pack

    12/27/2020 21:40
  • Sherisa Weston

    I like this new Kiya because now she is more open with what she feels, no sugar coating. I just don't want her to lose herself

    12/27/2020 21:34
  • Kelly Rohrer

    ok Neron is becoming a favorite to win Kiyas heart ❤️ He’s owning up to his past and Showing her he’s right there for her and he’s beside her for everything she does. I do agree with him… I truly hope she does not lose her self. God I hope alpha Anthony comes! I know this is something that she needs to go through however, she does need help.

    12/27/2020 18:44
  • Courtney Marie Schoeberl

    okay so this is just a thought and it's been bugging me. What if Osiris knew how much Johnthon hated Kiya and he was using him. He didn't have to corrupt him or anything he just let him do his thing. Then have him plant an idea of bringing in this elder to piss off Kyia into giving into the darkness. Like I said it's just a thought and I wanted the POS dead. All in All it's a wonderful book wish it was on paperback. Keep up the good work

    12/26/2020 23:04
  • Jamee Moore

    I'm really confused on how Raina can punch Odessa in the face but Ashley and Steven just stand there like they don't see or hear what Johnathon is doing. In front of the ENTIRE pack, might I add. Kiya really shouldn't forgive anyone at this point. I'm not saying she should forgive Raina at this point though. Raina is just one of the few who truly is sorry for what she did, and wants to make up for it.

    12/26/2020 22:10
  • Kelly Rohrer

    Also, side note - why the entire hell didn’t Kiyas parents go after Jonathan?! They continue to beg for forgiveness from Kiya and BOOM they’ve done nothing to stand up for her to Jonathan! They are horrible!

    12/26/2020 18:53
  • Rebeca G

    Loved this update! Loved Kiya standing up for herself! :) I must admit, though, that I'm a bit confused by Johnathans motivations. I thought he wanted kiya to mate with Neron- how exactly is this helping that cause, exactly? And did he really think he would be able to drag the avatar of a goddess to the dungeons without a fight, or that kiya herself wouldn't fight back?

    12/26/2020 04:24
  • Yahaida Perez-Lemon

    👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

    12/25/2020 21:18
  • Justmee

    Wow! Just wow. Everything in me loves what she did to that horrible SOB! I only feel bad that it was Osiris pushing her to do it. Either way the scum is dead. I really hope Kiya can still find the light at the end of this long tunnel. She deserves her happy ending. MERRY CHRISTMAS 🥳☃️🎄🎁🎀

    12/25/2020 18:17
  • Jamee Moore

    Geez, does Johnathon really think his wife and daughter dont see what he's doing? That's gonna be a awkward reunion if he's ever given one.

    12/25/2020 02:49
  • Nathalie Iliana Van Kerckhoven

    Gosh, I felt every emotion from Kiya. I would do the same if I was her, even more. Done with playing the good person if no one truly regret there actions against her. I would burn the place to the ground, unbelieveble that She can hold her powers under Control in this situation. Otherwise, I have compassion with Alfa Neron who's trying so hard for making up to Kiya and takes every chanse to proof her that he regret everything, only that stupid pack of his screw every action up for him. I hope that Kiya take her stuff and go to her own pack, leaving Zircon to die in there own shit.

    12/25/2020 00:35
  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Okay, I am sobber now. I hope Jonathan and that Elder are trembling with fear now. If in case, Kiya gets into trouble by killing Tristan, I don't think the Garnet Moon Pack would just stay on the side and watch. And definitely, Zircon couldn't win against Garnet, if they choose to wage war against them. On the other hand, Tristan and Odessa did attack Kiya recently. So execution is still valid on the grounds of: Hurting Kiya, being the Alpha's mate, and on the agreement thar Neron will protect the Garnet's Deltas. In short, Odessa should be executed too. Or be punished in the dungeon. And I HOPE Neron steps down from the Alpha Position... as this will create HUGE vexation to Jonathan.

    12/24/2020 21:33
  • Jael Brown

    Woah, what in the hell just happened. I can not believe this really just occurred tell me it's all in her head and she has not gone down that dark road. What Jonathan is trying to do is wrong and who in the hell is this damn elder and where was he when this pack tormented Kiya. Kiya is not this person I know she has every right to snap on these people for what they did to her but how will she be able to come back from this. What does this mean for her and her relationship with her friends, her pack, this pack, and Neron. How will people see her now, in trying to erase her demons and move on will she her self become a monster.

    12/24/2020 18:27
  • Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

    Woah! An Elder suddenly came out of nowhere. Where in the world was he during Kiya's enslavement? And obviously he's a prick like Jonathan. Kiya will never get justice she deserves with this two. I hope Elder Sage and Jonathan gets btheir karma soon. I am glad Tristan is dead. Although I want Neron or Raina to do it.

    12/24/2020 17:13
  • MzDiva1987

    home girl snapped retribution is coming

    12/24/2020 15:24
  • Mia

    please finish Johnathon off now...& that “elder” too

    12/24/2020 15:17
  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Is this the alcohol talking 'cause, "Hell yeah! Just the way I'd like it to happen." That's what I am thinking right now. Happy Holidays, everyone! 🥂🍾🍸🧀🥩

    12/24/2020 14:45