Unhinged Comments
Moonlight Muse
these chapters were amazing, n the best part i loved the neron n kiya moments. neron really does have a connection to her 😍 im totally shipping for them !
03/26/2021 17:06Satui Maui'a Laufau
Oh I think Diana is her best friend. I was thinking that it was the Moon Goddess but it fits more if it’s her best friend which is Neron’s sister; plus the Moon Goddess doesn’t need a disguise. anyhow, thank you so much Marii for this badass update! loved every bit of it.
03/26/2021 14:27
Spectral Beauty
Who is Diana?! My money is on Nuria if that lil owl’s voice had such an effect on Kiya. Wasn’t Nuria called the pack’s “Angel”? Seems appropriate... Also, thank you, dear author, for the double chapter update! I am enjoying the new schedule immensely 😁
03/26/2021 13:32Jael Brown
So she didn't kill her parents, damn damn damn!!! And Jonathan finally decided to show him self, I know he is not trying to be admirable by "sacrificing" his self because we all know that she is going to take her time killing him regardless. I told everyone Raina was pregnant and it's a girl thus the orchid smell. Diana still remains a mystery but her reminded Kiya of someone's from long ago so it's either Nuria, her mother or Selene. Why didn't Osiris kill Jonathan himself since he face reminds him so much of Titan or is he saving that kill especially for Kiya. Either way Jonathan is definitely a dead man. Great chapters Marii I can't wait to see what is in store for the Lanes and Jonathan and whether Kits will come back to us.
03/26/2021 13:15Lois Withers
marii I'm dying here the book is getting soo good I'm about to pull my hair out lol
03/26/2021 13:13
Maryfhel
after taking a break from last chapter i read which was “amber” i cant open to read the next chapters..why is that?
03/26/2021 13:09
marina simeonoglou
The book is already written so please provide the rest of the chapters.
03/26/2021 12:06Cata Deveza-Yap
So... who is Diana, really? 🤔 who's that voice she heard? And yehey! Raina is pregnant!!!
03/26/2021 10:51Kelly Rohrer
Diana is so very important as is Neron. Great updates Marii 💜
03/26/2021 10:14Saki J. Gibson
Marii I am loving the turns the story is taking. Even though I hate Lady Sanguine, I understand her. I hate killing but I understand why (in the story). There are many complications to this journey for Kiya and you make them realistic. She experienced trauma and doesn’t have her mate to balance her. That’s why she’s going even deeper into “crazy land.” I think if her and Neron get together it will ease a lot of her pain.
03/26/2021 03:35Jael Brown
Oooooo Marii these chapters were too good. I really thought she was going to kill Jonathan darn I have to wait and see. With all things that Jonathan has done in this pack he still has people loyal to him. What does he hope to gain by sacrificing his self? I know he doesn't truly believe that he saved the pack, if he truly wanted to save them then he should have come forward before all the chaos and destruction.
03/26/2021 03:22
AstarteLor
Seriously, this is so amazing! Greedy for more!
03/26/2021 03:17
Meaghan Prue
wait Diana didn’t get hurt did she
03/26/2021 02:47Jessica Carr
Ohhhhh this is getting good!!!!!! I can’t wait
03/26/2021 02:46
Alyssa
Ooohhhj child I’m on the edge of my seat!!!!!
03/26/2021 02:32
Doris Lopez
I love this story can't wait for the next chapter.
03/26/2021 01:52Meaghan Prue
never mind got them and whoa is all i can say
03/26/2021 01:29Meaghan Prue
anyone else unable to get the updates
03/26/2021 01:14
Reader-670952
When will there be updates to unhinged ?
03/25/2021 04:49Angela, Eric Allen, McCray
I just hope an pray that she can forget an forgive she good over evil 🙈
03/25/2021 02:30
Michelle Cannaday
Hey, just want to say I absolutely love this series and I honestly hope there will be more books in the series!
03/24/2021 17:46Tracy Mauro
I'm curious if you have any Face claims to the characters in the book? is there anyone in particular you imagine as you write the characters?
03/24/2021 00:05Carrol Semmens
I can’t seem to download rest of story
03/23/2021 21:25Jesi
Ahh! just binged the first book and this one over the last couple days! SO GOOD! Now I’ll just be refreshing like crazy, till there’s an update! Amazing author!
03/23/2021 19:34
ALINE ALBUQUERQUE
I don't understand: what the orchid smell means?
03/23/2021 03:57
Justmee
Wow we've come so far together. Chapter 67 🤜🏽🤛🏽!!! Yeah baby 🥳🥳🥳 fist pound. I remember not so long ago we were only on chapter 20 😂! Now look 😊! Keep up the hard work Marii 👌🏽
03/23/2021 02:13Nyasi Joshi
I have been completely addicted to this series. You are really gud in captivating the reader's mind.They wont let me sleep at night making me completely restless and eager for the next chapter. Please continue with ur amazing work.I would love to see Neron and Kiya fight all odds and end up being together.He really is evolving into gud and they would be great together.
03/22/2021 19:43Nyasi Joshi
I believe, it will turn out beautifully, if Chevron and kiya end up together.
03/22/2021 19:38
Amanda Rains
I think as hurtful as Neron was to Kiya, he is a major key to the healing and security she needs. I gather from all described of the mate bond, it changes the two beings perspective, feelings and emotions towards who their mate is. perhaps marking Kiya for the sole purpose to save her soul from darkness which she heald enormous morality against giving into due to a part of who she truely is naturally. She still has a choice. She needs a love and connection that helps heal that scar in her soul. It was just a thought. I am curious to see how the rest of this journey plays out. So much thinking and relatability to the abusive side of society and family. Amazing work Marii!
03/22/2021 15:52
Yahaida Perez-Lemon
Oh man! That was precarious there for a moment! But that interaction told me all I needed to know. Kiyas inner child is driving all of this! Yikes. This is gonna be BAD.
03/22/2021 03:29Drea Harper
are you gonna publish these books? I would love to support!!!
03/21/2021 23:48Jael Brown
Is Kiya really in control of her body right or is it Halima at the helm. Kiya knows that all this chaos and bloodshed isn't right so why would she willing give herself over to the dark side. Now don't get me wrong everyone of her tormentors were wrong in what they did to her and all though a few of them are sorry for what they did to Kiya most of them are not and deserve to get what's coming to them. I wish it wasn't at Kiya's hands though. With that said damn Marii I really thought she was going to kill that asshole Jonathan next no one deserves to die more than him except for Osiris. She should have saved the Lanes for after she murdered Jonathan. And Raina's pregnant huh, good thing for her Lady Seguine doesn't want to harm children. If Neron, Valerian and Raina had any damn sense they would stop trying to reason with Kiya I mean Lady Seguine and run. Great chapters Marii I am really interested in seeing how Kiya is going to come back from this.
03/21/2021 20:18Reader-644933
Marii you are a very good writer!! I love how you have added so much detail to all of your characters. I have read a lot of books but these are the best! goodluck with your recovery and enjoy writing this story until it is finished
03/21/2021 20:16Essie Morgan
kiya has a plan to be free right now she has to find herself through the darkness.........and when is the rest coming been waiting too long and read 3 other books 😂😂😂😂
03/21/2021 11:30Cheryl Browning
what’s the update schedule? this way I can quit checking twice a day lol! you’ve made me obsessed reading this and untouchable!
03/21/2021 09:54yolanda peguero
I think Kiya has reach the point of of not return. I really like the story but she has become as much of a villain as the people who hurt her in the past. when she wakes up from her darkness it may be too late for regrets: even thought I understand her darkness still a lot to move on. I am team Kyron, but at this point their relationship which was none just hit the non return point. I had hopes for them but now. they are gone. too much pain, too much bloodshed. good story .
03/21/2021 08:45Tracy Mauro
I'm definitely going to have to stop binge reading...I get so disappointed when I reach the end...lol
03/21/2021 07:35Satui Maui'a Laufau
as much as I wanna give Riana an arse whoopin, I would never wish anyone to kill their sister(s) or brother(s) and I was so damn relieved that she didn’t kill her. I believe she’s pregnant 🤰🏻 and I hope it’s a girl. I hope she kills Neron’s dad though cause he’s an arsehole and I still wanna get back at him for what he did to Kiya’s wolf. But I hope she comes back to the light sooner than later. thanks for the awesome updates Marii! got me on the edge of my seat.
03/21/2021 03:05Cata Deveza-Yap
Riana's Pregnant?
03/21/2021 00:12Elle 🧿
Uhm... why Lady Sanguine? Can anyone help me? Also, here’s hoping to Darien and Mara 🤭😁 hehe.
03/20/2021 16:48Meaghan Prue
This needs to be a movie seriously
03/20/2021 14:27
Mez
Yooo, I’m betting five bucks that Raina is pregnant! It is the only logical thing that makes sense at why LS let her go! Maybe her unborn baby protected her? 🧐 I don’t know, but that was one hell of a twist! The Lanes are in deep shit! I don’t know if they’ll try to fight back, but I feel like their confrontation would be intense. Am I the only one hoping that whatever is going on between Osiris and Neron ends with Neron trying to rip his head off? He taunted him and Alphas don’t like to be challenged much, especially when it comes to their mates 🤭
03/20/2021 14:24Meaghan Prue
Marii please please for the love of your readers please that when osiris does get finished make his death so beyond painfu for him i couldnt care less about his past he needs to get a major dose of his deeds. this was so hard to read poor kiya she will be devastated when when she realizes what she is been used for
03/20/2021 13:09Kirsten Burmeister
oh soooo good!!! lucky for raina, maybe she will stay alive til the end when Kiya comes back to her senses (which she hopefully will )
03/20/2021 12:55Kelly Rohrer
is Raina pregnant??
03/20/2021 09:27Moonlight Muse
marri i was wondering if you have a rough idea to how many chapters are left for this book?
03/20/2021 08:10Moonlight Muse
its going so so good there two chapters were amazing!
03/20/2021 08:08
Berry Bear
ohh... looks like Adonis is going to be a big brother 😊 i love that two chapters Updates you are doing. keep your health first is the best you can do.
03/20/2021 07:31
reader2121
how is kiya ever going to recover from this once she snaps out of her darkness? that’s a lot of blood on her hands.
03/20/2021 05:12
k@tie
I just binged Untouchable and now Unhinged up until the latest chapter, a few days ago. I’m beside myself anxiously waiting to read more, and I keep checking! When/how frequent is this book updated?
03/19/2021 18:49Tracy Mauro
I can't wait to read more. I'm really hoping that she snaps out of her darkness before she hurts Neron or any of the other "good ones". I must say that I am disappointed in her for giving into the darkness so easily even knowing what Osiris is. Also just to add...I really thought that Ariel's Spirit was going to go into Mara for a minute, that would have been sweet.
03/19/2021 18:23Saki J. Gibson
I’m so conflicted. Kiya experienced hell because of Neron. Yes I know he was going through a lot when he was abusing her, he practically was being abused himself. I’m team Neron and I’m kind of ashamed to say it. The him now is amazing and trustworthy. Kiya has definitely made him into a man. I would really like to see them end up together but Kiya will have to heal a lot.
03/19/2021 05:41Saki J. Gibson
we need more!!!
03/19/2021 05:29Yahaida Perez-Lemon
I love that she finally killed Odessa but it was kinda....underwhelming...hmmm....🤔 idk what I was expecting...I guess maybe I was waiting for Kiya to play with her a little bit before killing her lol
03/18/2021 21:00Brenda Walker
love the book cant wait for the updates
03/18/2021 10:40
wana blain
WHEEEEWWWWW i binge 8 chapters back to back and I have to say.... FUCKING DELICIOUS MINDBLOWING CRAZY DELIRIOUS piece of story I ever read 🔥🔥🔥🔥 woooo you and other author I’m following ARE MAJESTICLY PHENOMENAL 😭😭😭😭🤧🤧🤧 Bless you ma’am bless you 😍😍😍😍
03/17/2021 21:52
blueraven1128
I am absolutely in love with these stories OMG
03/17/2021 20:58Satui Maui'a Laufau
I’m so happy for Ariel! Odessa was a B!+cH. anyhow, thank you Marii for these awesome updates. gosh, I still got love for a Neron. btw, I absolutely love Diana.
03/17/2021 11:47Meaghan Prue
marii i know this a very personal question and u dont have to answer obviously if u dont want fok i only wondered if the inspiration for this whole story was from personql experiences or something else
03/17/2021 03:52
Nina072
bruh.............BRUH!!!! whoa!!!!! more! more! more! woo that was fucking B-E-A-UTIFUL!!!!!! I cannot wait for more!!!! also, hope you're doing well author. I hope you are recuperating well and everything has been alright. were happy you're back.
03/17/2021 02:23Alyssa
😱 😱 😱
03/17/2021 01:50Doris Lopez
I am on the edge of my seat and I can't wait for the next chapter!😣
03/17/2021 00:57Reader-043727
Is anyone else on the edge of their seat reading this? I can’t seem to put this book down🤷🏽♀️ My feelings are sooo hurt that she fell into Osiris tricks though. 😭 .... hopefully a happy ending here lol ( I’m only on chapter 58) ...either way I love that this isn’t your typical romance. Full of plots twists, character development and DRAMA! Great job ❤️ ( although my fingers are still crossed for a happy ending lol 🤞🏽)
03/16/2021 22:34Meaghan Prue
I just would like to say if you are going to post comments that try to make Marii rush or feel bad for not posting, Don’t, it is so annoying to see someone try to rush her than pretend like oh well I didn’t mean it and blah blah I’m having a hard time and so on, yeah I get that but u don’t have to try and rush someone along just because u are anxious for the story to end. Marii is a good writer and doesn’t need anyone telling her to hurry up or berating her for not posting every single day so please if u are having a bad day and the story relates to you in a way talk to us about it by saying oh yeah I get where kiya is coming from or something but don’t rush the author along please, remember we pay money for her books too and want her best work and that takes time. keep up the good work Marii we appreciate it.
03/16/2021 22:14Baby Angel
I am truly sorry for everyone who took what I wrote wrong!! I just reread it and now that everyone was quick to assume that I’m rude or mean it hurt me a lot. I am the last person on the planet who ever wants to be rude to someone I really am. I also get that everyone has a life. my life is not the greatest. lived through abuse my whole childhood so when I read about Kiya I can relate to her so much and I use these books to help me fight my demons everyday too. I just lost my mom a couple of moths ago and I’m having a hard time so for everyone to jump on me hurt me. so I figured I would take the time to figure out why and I can see a little bit as to why others took it wrong. again I am really sorry I didn’t mean too. I just wanted to see a happy ending because I guess I’m looking to see her pain go way because I know how it feels to be in the darkness. I lived years as a self harmer and suicidal!!! so to say that no one would care if I disappeared actually hurt because that’s the story of my life no one would care. thank you for being an amazing writer and please don’t stop writing how you want to write because I don’t want that I’ll just have to reread other books until this one is done. again I’m so sorry!!
03/16/2021 21:33Meaghan Prue
omg marii just thought of someyhing please tell me nothing happens to diana too
03/16/2021 20:03Spectral Beauty
To all those naysayers out there complaining about this story dragging on: don’t. A good story, be it a novel or a multi-book story, has to have different speeds and multi-dimensional characters. This isn’t a generic, raunchy werewolf romance story where characters fall in love in two days and have sex everywhere, the end. So don’t treat it like one. Those of you who do insist on complaining, don’t ever try reading something like Wheel of Time, which is a 14 book monstrosity of a series. There are whole BOOKS where the storylines drag, but they are necessary for character development and plot advancement (see what I’m getting at?). Your poor, impatient brains couldn’t handle it!
03/16/2021 19:43Spectral Beauty
WHEW! Letting 4 chapters accumulate was totally worth it! Thank you, Marii, for the amazing story, per usual :) No redemption for Odessa, and she even tried to snivel and beg in the end. What about those guards Kiya killed? They probably had mates and kids, who just lost their fathers. Does Kiya not realize that? She wants to preserve children’s innocence, but she’s unknowingly destroying it 😬😬😬 Can’t wait for Neron and Kiya to face off. That’s gonna be TENSE!
03/16/2021 19:33Justmee
Whew these last two chapters babieeee 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥! I can not wait for the next update. I know Kiya's inner voice will be much stronger once she encounters Neron and her family that were there for the ritual. Oweee this is getting so good 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
03/16/2021 12:32
miasiacheyenne
I am absolutely OK with those who wronged her and do NOT seem to see anything wrong with it pay and die. her birth parents and Johnathen. but I would be devastated, cry, and be disappointed if Neron, the betas, and kwame and his family were killed. neron and the betas understood their wrongs and embraced and are trying to do better for themselves and for Kiah. Kwame and his family was always 100% behind kiah and tried to keep her safe and protected; they can’t die 😩😭but I’m here for it 😂
03/16/2021 02:22Tosha Scott
In the first book, when Kiya decided to end her life after being helped by Kwame and his parents, she encountered the moon goddess (Selene) who informed her she would have to return as her avatar and she would do great things. I want to know why Selen hasn't intervened. She was able to when she had Kiya return. Now Kiya even if justifiable with her hatred is dark because of Osiris and his success in changing her. She has suffered so much. How will she be at the end of this knowing she was a puppet and made to kill against her will. How will she ever face her family and friends and know love again when all the killing soon to follow will be figuratively costing her hands. She is an unwilling participant and any light she had or had built at garnet moon will be shattered. How will she find love. I know she told Selen she did not want a second chance mate, but she could had healed and had that chance. Now whether there was hope for her and Neron which I didnt fully accept or whether another will be something I see her rejecting forever as an adult. She was still a child when she wished to stay alone. Hope this can be written in benefit to all the darkness we have read and felt on this journey. 😭🤯☠
03/16/2021 02:17Baby Angel
are you done yet with this dragging on? this is soooo long and getting boring now. I know I’m probably the one everyone thinks is annoying about complaining but it’s not that. trust me it’s not. I just want her to come out of the darkness and be the moon goddess avatar and finally be free from the darkness and be truly happy with a mate and more on. please please please tell me your at that point now the Odessa is gone!!
03/15/2021 19:09Gwendolyn D. Pough
If I remember correctly, part of her power is to be the judge, jury and executioner in the Moon Goddess stead for werewolves right? Like part of her power is to make those decisions? If I am remembering that correctly, then she can certainly take out this trash ass pack and still be on the side of right in my opinion. kill them, kill them all! 😏
03/15/2021 19:06Raven Dark-fhang
I hope the alpha, beta and gamma and their loved ones are spared. minus anthony and her birth parents. it would be terrible is any harm came to kwame and his family as they were the only ones to fight for her.
03/15/2021 17:14
Dr Megha
this part is little hard to digest. being a moon goddess avatar, she was sent back by her to do something great and was promised to be watched but what is Kiya doing now is killing. 4 innocent guards killed by her.
03/15/2021 17:09Dr Megha
it's very costly
03/15/2021 12:39Githa Datadin
i want to keep reading. please dont kill neron.
03/15/2021 11:30
Meowdel Em
sorry @Marii there’s a small typo on the page where you describe Ariels dress being too thin. just wanted you to know.
03/15/2021 10:10Meaghan Prue
omg please dont kill neron at least he was willing to try unlike the souless bitch odessa. also when ahe sees darienand galen will she kill them too . Damn u osiris damn u to the lowest pits of hell
03/15/2021 08:49
Heather Shay
So happy to see that Ariel is free! And Glad Odessa is gone. It was also good to see the wolves from Garnet offering Zircon a hand.
03/15/2021 06:05
Noah Martinez
OMG
03/15/2021 04:30Jael Brown
Man did I wake up in an alternate universe or is this a nightmare. No I know what this is, I am being punked. I mean how is Kiya going to come back from all the hell she is about to unleash and even if she does come back from it she will not be the Kiya we know and love because she will have to walk around with the guilt of what she has done. Yes Odessa was a bitch, everyone agrees on this, but Kiya shouldn't have been the one to end her life. Two wrongs never made a right. Evil K is certainly very scary and I hope this is all a dream, but at the same time I hope she kills Jonathan before she wakes up. Raina, Neron, and the sperm and egg donor better watch their backs. I am really curious to see who will be able to reach her and help her snap out of it, if this is not a nightmare. For a minute there I really thought Ariel was going to join with Mara and her Darien were going to live happily ever after. I can't wait to see who he ends up with, fingers crossed that it's Mara. Great chapters and thanks for the double update.
03/15/2021 04:30Sniderin
Oooooooh. Things are heating up and getting dark!!! Very interested how things are resolved after this. Well, I'm hopeful for a resolution and reunion. Team Kiyron strong!!!
03/15/2021 04:08
Mawusi Ford
Whew I’m glad her friends are around maybe they will help her come out of it
03/15/2021 04:05Mawusi Ford
aww Mara l like her already
03/15/2021 03:26Kelly Rohrer
hmmmm not sure she’s going to make it back now 😞
03/15/2021 03:17Kelly Rohrer
yay!!! I’m so happy for Ariel 💜
03/15/2021 02:40Meaghan Prue
at last. there that conniving little worm is gonna get exactly what she deserves for all the people she has hurt
03/15/2021 02:03Bev Pearson
Holy crap! Just binge read the first book & this one & now I’m caught up! First I’m annoyed with Selene for not stepping in to help Kiya resist the darkness! She’s her avatar for moon’s sake! I’m hoping she turns to the light & kicks Osiris’ butt! I agree that Zircon Moon needs to go esp Johnathan but that would mean she’d have to kill the kids incl her nephew & if she comes back to herself, that will tear her apart! I think Neron has turned into a good man & both he & Kiya deserve love, even if it’s not each other. I think Diana is Neron’s sister & may play a big role in snapping Kiya back if she starts attacking Zircon. Hopefully her nightmare doesn’t come true! Sorry to hear the about the author’s surgery & as a new fan I’m waiting on the edge of my seat for the next update whenever she’s able!
03/14/2021 01:35Melinda Burton
does anyone know if she is still actively writing this story
03/13/2021 07:09
Laura Kanten
love this book! can't wait for more chapters 🤓
03/12/2021 14:43
Mrs.Hyde
I think Zircon Moon should pay. I just don't see how you could forgive a mother, father, sister & mate who betrayed you brutalize you & beat you. Kiya was raped because they decided to punish her for something that wasn't her fault. She got "exonerated" for something that wasn't her fault. A nine year old to go through that much torture and abuse spanning 8 years. I hope she burns it down to the ground. From the ashes maybe Neron can build a better place one that is worth the name given because Zircon Moon has not been golden. In that instance I agree with Osiris but not in how he went about because in truth he's no better than the Alpha who destroyed him and caused him to turn towards the darkness.
03/11/2021 14:05Meowdel Em
oh Kiya!!! nooo!!! you won’t feel happy when you destroy others. even when they deserve it. May you be led (😉 by your maker @MariiSolaria) into light & love very soon.
03/11/2021 02:36
Trish Yocham
Missing this book..ready for an update lol.
03/11/2021 02:10Tosha Scott
Hope that whatever magic was used to turn Kiya dark can be reversed. I am still not sure how I feel about her and Neron together after all the craziness is over. Ariel definitely needs a new host and maybe that host will be Darien's new mate while his wolf gets his original mate. I am interested in what Diana the owl truly is since she has been lurking around both Kiya and Neron. I hope Kiya can connect with her child version of herself to heal and her wolf isn't gone forever.
03/10/2021 21:48
Kat
Praying that Ariel gets to be with a human that truly cherished her and Darien gets the love he deserves ❤️
03/10/2021 06:36
melissa woodworth
I can't wait for the up date and will definitely be following the third book. I hope you get well soon. thank you for all your hard work. it really is excellent work I think. Also I love how you call people out on their bullshit in the comments 😂 you rock.
03/10/2021 04:39
Sherisa Weston
Neron is in denial about Kiya I see. I mean it is nice that he believes in Kiya's strength and her willpower but how he is doubting what her own mother saw and one of bestfriends, Phoebe when she has the power to see auras seem quite arrogant of him. He even had that vision and sensed something was wrong
03/10/2021 03:04Jessica Pye
Cant lie, I'm so sad for Kiya. Shes already been through soooo much now this jerk thinks she belongs to him.🙄 I will not lose hope! If Kiya BELONGS to anyone its Selene! I cant believe Selene would bring her avatar back to life just to have her destroy those she loves most including Neron and be used for darkness. Selene will not let this go down I know it but some shit is about to pop off, I can feel it comin!!!😍😁😍
03/10/2021 01:12Reader-695333
wow great chapters Marii!!! hope your are feeling better 💐💐
03/09/2021 23:26
