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Roza Pestana
Osiris doesn't want her to leave zircon moon. why crash the van?
01/06/2021 15:56
Albertina Pelzer-Mcclain
I hate that she left Neron, but I understand. I don't want Kiya to end up like Osiris. Hopefully everything will work out with her and Neron and Kiya will heal from the love they have🥰
01/06/2021 15:37
Sherisa Weston
what chapter either kn this book or the previous one did Diana first make her appearance?
01/06/2021 15:08Sherisa Weston
what if Osiris entered Jonathan loke he did Odessa, like they made a deal together. Omg for the love of everything author don't kill off any of Kiya's friends and family. I can't handle her having any more pain
01/06/2021 15:05Sherisa Weston
Did Dianna first appear when Kiya arrived at Zircon Moon?
01/06/2021 14:39Sherisa Weston
what chapter did Neron give Kiya that necklace?
01/06/2021 14:33Kelly Rohrer
amazing chapters! I was bawling my eyes out this morning! Is it Jonathan or Osiris attacking them?!! hmmmmm
01/06/2021 14:31Cata Deveza-Yap
I think Osiris' mark prevents Kiya from figuring out her feelings for Neron. The spark of their mate bond fainted after she was bitten by Osiris, right? 🤔 Also, Is it possible that she's already in love but wasn't aware of it? 👀 She cried because she felt lonely, but didn't know why she was feeling that way. It's probably that "trauma won this round", indeed. 😭
01/06/2021 14:30
Spectral Beauty
OHHHH SNAP! What’s going to happen next?! Neron will know something is up when Kiya doesn’t call...
01/06/2021 14:21Jael Brown
Oh so Cerberus has made another appearance I see. We should have known that Osiris wasn't going to let Kiya go so easily, she is after all the key to his plan to destroy Zircon Moon. I am curious as to why he hates this pack more than Kiya does. I wonder if he was once a member of this pack and the disowned him because he was a hybrid. And because he hates the Prince family so much did Jonathan have something to do with it, for all we know he and Jonathan could be related. I am glad Raina, Valerian and Adonis came to say goodbye and wish her farewell and not the sperm and egg donor I have a feeling that if Ashley and Steven showed up there would be another mutilation. Neron really has grown the most out of anyone at Zircon Moon, that he realizes Kiya can't stay here if she is going to heal and that he needs to let her go means that he truly loves her. Just when you think this story is great, you realize it's only getting better.
01/06/2021 13:26
ShyShy
Bravo 👏🏾 This chapter had me all in my feelings blowing snot bubbles 😩😢😭
01/06/2021 13:19Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
I feel bad for Neron. 😢 That cliffhanger though.
01/06/2021 12:55
Tahiti_650
oh gosh these updates turned me into a big cry baby
01/06/2021 12:30
Justmee
***sigh 😪! I'm not going to tell y'all I had a lump in my throat the size of Texas when Kiya hugged Neron 🥴. I have no idea when Neron made his way into my heart 🥺? I feel so bad for him too. If his father would have raised him better who knows where his and Kiya's relationship could be. Truly sad for them both. Now let's talk about this crash 👀! I know with everything in me that Jonathan is behind this. He's such a horrible person. He's starting to give me rapist vibes. Like if Neron won't forcefully mate with Kiya he damn sure would. Please kill him 🙄! He has lived long enough and caused so much pain. Off with his head, literally 🤬
01/06/2021 11:56Gwendolyn D. Pough
I bet it is that damn Jonathan! If any of her friends and family dies I will come through my phone and kill Jonathan myself. Ughh, hate him!
01/06/2021 09:00Glemmett Maylor
What the hell?! I'm already here bawling my eyes out, now this? I am so loving this book
01/06/2021 08:53
Meaghan Prue
please don’t let her family die and Abby she is a human what if she dies poor Jackie
01/06/2021 08:50Yolanda Padrnos
This book is really good. I look for updates constantly. The suspense is killing me. I am sure Osiris is responsible for this accident. It’s terrible. Poor Kiya can’t catch a break. She can’t even be happy going home to her safety net. Now that is being jeopardized. It almost makes you wish Kiya could have stayed with Selene when she originally died. I feel so sad for her.
01/06/2021 08:36Lois Withers
GOD DAMNIT!!!!! you got my eyes to water Lol but omg I'm dying here come on you can't write a chapter like that and then make us wait lol this story is freaking amazing and someone needs to make connections to make it into series or movies
01/06/2021 07:51Cata Deveza-Yap
Was it Jonathan or Osiris? 👀
01/06/2021 07:25Chala
marii, I love these books and cannot wait for more chapters!!! you put everything into these characters!!
01/06/2021 06:06Jamee Moore
I won't lie. I shed some tears and then yelled at the last chapter. Leave it to Osiris to ruin the mood. Like at least let a girl cry her moment out, geez!
01/06/2021 05:36
Brittney Allen
so Jonathan is already at it again. I hope Anthony and Neron take turns beating his a$$ to a pulp. pumping him with so much wolf's bane and silver he is begging for death
01/06/2021 05:35Cata Deveza-Yap
Went to him and? And? 🤔
01/06/2021 04:41Teala Bossqueen Mills
Will Kyia ever take Neron as her mate please write off Johnthan
01/06/2021 03:08
Alyssa
The part when Kiya’s mom was beating Darren with the shoe 👠 😂😂😂😂😂 I got a visual of when my mom used to hit us with a slipper😂😂😂😂😂😂!!! I love it!!
01/05/2021 22:33Malinda Hoffman
when are chapters added?
01/05/2021 19:21Jessie Rose
eughhh read 40ch in a day, plus the last dozen from untouchable 😩 the suspense is killing me! so much goodness and turmoil! I’m soo hooked ♥️
01/05/2021 18:11Reader-008277
Marii Solaria Is Diana Selena, in owl form? She shows up when they both (Kiya& Neron) need comfort and encouragement plus it’s one of the most unlikely beings to love up on werewolves being they’re cuisine in the norm. Both have taken to her and look forward to her appearances. Also she told Kiya yes, she would see/visit her before sending her back to earth. when will Kiya learn the potential of the gift she has been given and begin to walk in it on a greater level?
01/05/2021 17:56Jessie Rose
wowwwwwwww I’m up to the ch father vs father... mannn you’re an incredible writer and an incredible character creator. I legit would have left the conversation twice already and I’m only up to the part where dude realised D*face doesn’t have any empathy.
01/05/2021 17:25
Pupu
it is sad to see how dark the place is where Kiya is falling into. it is understandable why she is sucked into darkness. however I am still hoping .. she gets pulled out from that place and Neron and Kiya gets a chance together
01/05/2021 11:09
Lara Croft
how octem do you update? love your books!
01/05/2021 08:59
spazz 31
omg I'm addicted. need more chapters!
01/05/2021 04:40Reader-008277
Marii Solari will more of the packs ancestral history be revealed? Jonathon is bent on his family becoming most powerful and eludes to Neron not knowing his family history. Also, who is Osiris to this pack? He has zoned specifically on this pack to destroy.
01/05/2021 00:57Tahiti_650
i hope odessa lives. she deserves to be tortured as kiya was for all her wrong doings
01/04/2021 23:11Roza Pestana
Marii Solaria will Diana make another appearance again? I feel like she plays an important role
01/04/2021 20:33Roza Pestana
That Odessa just got the beating of a lifetime. I don't think she will make it. Ariel did good by abandoning that bitch, she deserves a better human. I hope Darien gets a second chance mate, he deserves it too.
01/04/2021 20:17Meaghan Prue
one more thing if the skank does die can we please see a chapter of selenes judgement on tristan and odessa that would be probably the best chapter ever
01/04/2021 16:05Meaghan Prue
Finally glad to see that the pig got what she deserves she is dirty and foul. selene did give her a chance and she has the gall to say that selene hated her if that were true she wouldnt have given her darien. i hope her wolf is with selene now resting ariel deserves it after having a scumbag bitch for a human. but please dont let kiyah go down thag dark hole she crawled so hard to get out of let her be with either darien or neron
01/04/2021 15:54Reader-008277
WOW!! 😳😢. while her anger and hatred is valid for ovious reasons I want Odessa to live. Her confession and every hearing it will help turn the tidal wave of ill will towards her and hopefully the people will see how they have erred and been a pawn in Jonathon and Odessa’s hands, carrying on like mindless puppets without a will to think and act honorably. By living Odessa would have to deal with the punishment deemed for her actions at the very hands she is fighting to get, Neron, what an absolute slap in her face and see the hurt, anger, disappointment and hatred in his eyes for her, a person he once loved and had hopes for good things with her mate, in turn take her life. Kiya’s stability will be challenged wherever she goes. her ultimate fight is with the growing darkness within trying to completely extinguish her light. Leaving the environment is not going to help because she is being influenced more by Osiris, he is a demon and will follow her. she must fight the greatest fight of her life and release her pain to allow her light to take over,
01/04/2021 15:41Jael Brown
I am glad Odessa got her just desserts, you can't play with people's hearts and think that only good things will happen for you. To say that I feel bad for Odessa would be a lie, you reap what you sow. I am scared that Kiya is heading down the path we all knew she would be going down. Hopefully she can get out here before something else goes down. I wish someone else was around to hear Odessa confess that way Kiya wouldn't have to be the one to handle her, but Kiya has had enough. A person can gain nothing when they are always selfish.
01/04/2021 13:52Reader-003394
I know Odessa brought on all that is coming to her but a part of me feels pity for this lost soul. something in her past made her this way, I wonder what it is. poor Darien his heart must be breaking . I do hope their Selena gives him a second chance mate and a good one. Also I wonder when it will come out that a part of Osiris is inside Kiya. Her sadness is turning into darkness, please let Neron save her.
01/04/2021 13:25Justmee
***chills down my spine 🥴! I have no words to describe just how I'm feeling at this moment. I love the fact that she has released two of her tormentors. Yet, I'm torn because I know with each kill she's closer to that dark place 🧐😤! I'm happy and sad 🥴🥳🥴! I love this book your writing that me through so many emotions. Another fabulous update 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
01/04/2021 12:00Cassandra
wasn’t she talking to Darien when she got stabbed by Odessa? y didn’t he stop kiya from beating her so extreme and I hope someone witness Odessa confession I’m glad kiya recognize it’s time to roll home to get healed with people who love her before she destroy that pack.
01/04/2021 05:34Cata Deveza-Yap
I think Darien was once in love with Kiya... Is he? And I am sorry Neron but I suddenly want Darien and Kiya together.
01/04/2021 03:10
Yahaida Perez-Lemon
I hope the bitch is DEAD! If not, someone finish HER! Poor Darien! I hope he gets a second chance mate ❤ Also: GET KIYA HOME RIGHT MEOW!
01/04/2021 02:55Taina Iosefo
Finally Darian rejected Odessa... She deserved it all from the rejection and to Kiya stabbing her. I hope there were people that heard Odessa’s confession of everything she did. They need to take her home and away from that pack. It’s only making things worse for her.
01/04/2021 02:46Cata Deveza-Yap
Did anyone witness Odessa's confessions? Darrien, my sister is still single. I can arrange a date once you're ready again. 😉
01/04/2021 02:00Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
My goodness! Kiya is loosing it. I know Odessa has it coming but damn! Get Kiya out of that pack ASAP. It's no longer good for her.
01/04/2021 00:16Glemmett Maylor
Yesssssssss!!!!!! Can I say love this a million times?!
01/03/2021 23:48Glemmett Maylor
Finally! I love me some Darken, really happy he finally rejected her. Better the pain now than a broken heart every time she betrays him. I hope he gets a second chance mate. He deserves it. But watch out now for Odessa. She is a woman with nothing more to lose. That makes her even more dangerous.
01/03/2021 23:39Geraldine Ferraren
Odessa has it coming to her. I feel she would survive this though however Neron would be the one to end her life. I really want Neron and Kiya to be together still. . . Even if it means for Neron to step down from Alpha for Zircon Moon. I also want Kiya to use all this rage and end Osiris as I do not like the path Kiya is going on.
01/03/2021 23:17Brittney Allen
I'm getting a vibe that Kiya and Darien were an item at one time by what he said to Odessa and why Kiya was so hurt when he was under Odessa's control. Am I reaching or nah? 🤔
01/03/2021 21:52Lois Withers
I did love it not gonna lie especially the ending .... right now in my life I'm pretty much in the middle of a nervous breakdown .... so that rage Kiya just showed I felt it but I really thought odessa really would have thought of something more like Kiya said with the silver because I could so see her kicking odessa's ass even with a silver knife sticking in her and I mean a beat down and have her cave her face in
01/03/2021 21:08Kelly Rohrer
Justice is served to that bitch Odessa! 2 more to go! I hope Neron rectifies Jonathan and hopefully Mom and dad can get rid of Osiris!
01/03/2021 19:46Christy G
Dammmmnnnnn!
01/03/2021 19:45Sherisa Weston
oh my goodness Kiya's parents and friends needs to hurry and get Kiya as far away th away from that pack. Oh my gosh someone come save Kiya before she loses anymore of herself. Odessa deserved it but damn
01/03/2021 19:36Rebecca Provan
luv luv luv luv luv
01/03/2021 19:28
Mawusi Ford
well damn! I hope everyone heard her confession. Odessa got what she deserves
01/03/2021 19:11Sherisa Weston
Odessa now you know how Kiya felt when Nerkn rejected her. heheh welcome BACK Darien, it took you long enough to return. I want to feel a little bit of sympathy for Odessa but i don't want to lie to myself. J am super happy she finally got what she deserved and there is more in store for her and I can't wait and all the other monsters kn this book 😌😌😏
01/03/2021 18:59Spectral Beauty
Poor Darien. He’s one of my favorite secondary characters and I’m sad he got such a ho for a mate. Odessa got her just desserts in his rejection. I’m not even sure Odessa deserves a redemption arc at this point 🤷♀️
01/03/2021 18:52Roza Pestana
Neron needs to go with Kiya. She needs him and I hope Darien tells Neron that Odessa is the traitor. That skank needs to be dealt with ASAP.
01/03/2021 18:36June Chase
haha Odessa
01/03/2021 18:27Kelly Rohrer
I feel ZERO pity for that bitch! WELCOME BACK DARIEN 💜💜💜
01/03/2021 17:55Reader-008277
Reflecting on the love Neron has for Kiya aside from the bond, I think of these very true and powerful words...love endures long and is kind and patient, love isn’t arrogant, does not envy, isn’t rude and doesn’t insist on its own way, it’s not self seeking, fretful or resentful, it pays attention to a suffered wrong. It does not rejoice at injustice, but rejoices when right and truth prevails. Love bears up under anything and everything that comes without weakening, LOVE NEVER FAILS! Neron actions prove daily his unadulterated love for Kiya. He is flowing in it while seeing the error of his past behavior. Either way the relationship flows he is operating in a pure love for the person he once hated and I hope as Kiya heals the place he resides in her space will continue to grow
01/03/2021 17:30Jael Brown
I am so glad that Neron is becoming his own man and not the one his father wants him to be. He truly does care about Kiya, and hopefully they will get together. I am so glad Osiris dropped Odessa like a hot potato, she definitely got what she deserved. More misery will find it's way into her life. I can not wait for the next update.
01/03/2021 16:01Kimberly Bills
when is the next update please I’m loving this book
01/03/2021 14:21Yolanda Padrnos
This is such a good series. Didn’t think I would say it but I am sad for Neron. It appears his mentally unstable father ruined his chances for a happy life from the beginning. Kiya will heal hopefully with her real parents. Adoptive or not they are the ones who truly love her. Hopefully Odessa’s betrayal gets put on display. She’s got to go. It doesn’t look likely because of so much pain caused on her home territory but I route for Neron and Kiya to find a happy balance of a relationship.
01/03/2021 09:51Rebecca Carlson
@Marii Solaria I have to say that out of all the books that have been written on various apps across the board (and it has been a lot on my end), your writing is phenomenal. Looking forward to the coming chapters and seeing what happens next. ☺️
01/03/2021 06:57Brittney Allen
@marii solaria is there going to be a 3rd book? will you write about each avatar?
01/03/2021 04:09Cheryl P Westmoreland
😓
01/03/2021 03:47Yolanda Padrnos
I really like this story. I am very sad to see how it’s shaping out though. Despite what she went through becoming dark, cold, and heartless won’t serve Kiya well. I feel bad for the direction she is headed. The evil can easily take hold of her now.😢
01/02/2021 23:26Reader-008277
This story ignites my heart on so many levels. from the abuse of both Halima(Kiya) and Neron by Jonathon and how it has shaped their lives to this point, however the light in both them still shines through. I hope as things unfold the pure love Neron has for Kiya opens her up to him and with the support of her parents and friends plus Rania she realizes she’s not worthless and has the will and power to defeat her enemy(Osiris). Why does Osiris hate the zircon pack specifically? Is he an offspring in the Prince family cast away because he’s hybrid? What of the family history is Jonathon not saying and Neron needs to get busy studying for answers. The greatest punishment for Odessa is a lesson in humility. To help Neron and Kiya destroy Osiris which in turn would destroy her. Darien would be free to love another.
01/02/2021 22:54Reader-003394
Osiris just sealed his own fate. His own words should show him what is to come. “ Those who sacrifice others for their own gain will only lose in the end”
01/02/2021 17:30Justmee
***oh my 🥺! I'm so upset for Neron. I'm happy that he recognizes Kiya needs to leave his territory to heal again but my heart still aches for him. Odessa is slowing getting everything she deserves. Hopefully she loses her mate as well. I can't wait to see what the next update brings. You amaze me every chapter.
01/02/2021 16:41Meryam Ahsan
I think Neron understands a lot more than he gives himself credit for. and I’m horrified that before they get a chance to explore their feelings for each other, they will be apart. I am also wondering whether Neron will give up being Alpha of Zircon moon or the Zircon moon pack will also cease to be. I know they deserve it, but there are still people like Raina and Kwame, Children from the pack that hold no blame. Plus it’s Jonathan’s twisted mind doing this- so .. I just hope that there’s an alternative that doesn’t mean Kia or Neron breaking up or Neron not being Alpha to be with her. Even though, they’re not a great pack- Neron doesn’t deserve not to be a leader - because he does care about his pack. I’m rooting for him reforming a new pack with Kia
01/02/2021 16:23Nasteeha Hussein
😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔💔
01/02/2021 16:05Reader-003394
Did I read that Neron at one time did not want to hurt Kiya, that he had asked his father not to hurt her. I believe Neron was abused by his father and it was smacked into him that he should either beat her or he is saying his mother and sister deserved to die. I get it does not excuse fully what he did but it could explain some of it. Neron was a child to and between his pain at losing his mother and sister , to his fathers insanity and abuse i can see how it turned his heart to stone
01/02/2021 15:10Reader-003394
my heart is breaking for Neron and Kiya. The past is not something that will be forgotten easily but I believe that for Liya to truly heal she needs to forgive . Easy for me to say right but Neron has proven time and again that Kiya is his heart and he will stop at nothing to make her happy. I just hope letting her go is not forever. What Neron should do is create a new pack , a pack that lets the past go. He should separate from his father and anyone who is with his father, banish them from his lands so everyone can heal. oh and I’m so sad for Darian please let Selene give him another mate , one deserving of a good man.
01/02/2021 15:04Yahaida Perez-Lemon
I won't be happy until Odessa and Jonathan are DEAD. And Osiris! Ahhh Neron, you're learning SO MUCH! Unfortunately, it looks like you still have a lot to go thru still....
01/02/2021 14:58Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
awww... 💔😢
01/02/2021 14:29Cassandra
what happens to the wolf once they leave you? can you get it back? do you become weak r u just human now without the strength you had with the wolf? and now that Siris has taken his power back from Odessa does that mean Darien will return to normal? and I thought you could not leave your mate once you’ve claimed them wouldn’t that make Darien weak and sad maybe die because he not with his mate? I can c y kiya can leave bcuz he rejected her first she excepted and than she died and came back alive as someone different I still don’t get why he could change his mind about his previous rejection and try and mate with her again he should be out of luck lol
01/02/2021 14:22
Nurse_Nikka
i seriously hope he gives Kiya the drawing as a parting gift 💜
01/02/2021 13:36Kelly Rohrer
Neron 💜
01/02/2021 13:04
HanaBana
I enjoyed seeing Odessa realise she was a pawn all along! She'll get what she deserves! Neron has matured so much, I really hope this isn't the end of the line for Kiya and Neron. I feel like Neron is really redeeming himself.
01/02/2021 09:02
Nicola Jones
I am loving these books can’t wait for the following chapter fantastic 😘
01/02/2021 08:36Shannon Reed
Wow!!! I have read both books (up to ch 38 in book 2} in less than 3 days and am in love!!! Anxiously waiting for what's to come. 🥰 Great job!!!
01/02/2021 07:28Taina Iosefo
I hope Kiya realizes how much Neron has grown and truly wants the best for her. letting go is always hard. I hope he finishes his drawing and able to give it to Kiya as a reminder of their happy times together. she remembered him being awesome as an artist. That’s such a great thing for her to bring up. Can’t wait for the next update.
01/02/2021 07:22Spectral Beauty
Poor Neron, but his decision shows that he’s matured a lot since Kiya came back
01/02/2021 06:15
Legend of Gru
I am soo proud of Neron!
01/02/2021 05:12Mawusi Ford
Good Odessa about to see old lady Karma. Poor Neron he continues to redeem himself. he isn’t being selfish he is strong enough to let her go. I hope they see each other again soon and form a bond maybe slow but a bond at least
01/02/2021 04:03Alyssa
awww Nerón!! Wow so old girl Odessa got what was coming to her!
01/02/2021 03:45
G.A Coppola
Ohh no!! I’m happy Neron isn’t being selfish but I don’t want them to be separated.
01/02/2021 03:39
Heather Shay
Absolutely bawling 😭😭😭😭 Beautiful chapter. It's great to see the character growth in Neron that the possessive Alpha loves her enough to let her go.
01/02/2021 03:34Brittney Allen
beautiful chapter...I would love to see the drawing neon is doing of Kiya with her parents...I'm still up in the air about Kiya and Neron. I'm going to wait and go with what ever Kiya decides. 😆 🤣 😂 great update🥰😍🥰😍🥰
01/02/2021 03:17Dollsenz Oui
@Maria Solaris, so we should have the updates now?....btw great read. I absolutely love it!...im in Australia.
01/02/2021 00:34Geraldine Ferraren
@Marii Solaria, how often are you planning to update and how many chapters at a time?
01/02/2021 00:15Justmee
*sheesh 😪! If I know Jonathan as well as I think I do. Kiya's real father better sleep in her room on the floor with the door locked. That old SOB will not let her go without a nasty fight. I know the next update will be epic. Ready set FIGHT 👊🏽👊🏽👊🏽👊🏽👊🏽
01/01/2021 23:43Wini Wilson
Heard this before!! We're not hearing anything new, keeps going around in circles, scrathed record
01/01/2021 23:32Taina Iosefo
OMG... I love that even though Kiya didn’t want her real parents there, she felt comforted and loved. I loved her real parents going against her egg and a perm donors and Neron’s dad. Awesome chapter!
01/01/2021 22:55
