Unhinged Comments
Cheryl Browning
I can’t wait to see her destroy Johnathan, tbh! But I do hope she fight Osiris’ power. Did he have the necklace enchanted? Or was it the darkness itself that prevented her from saying anything other than she trusts him?
02/16/2021 15:44Jael Brown
I threw up in my mouth a little there when Osiris kissed Kiya. Man this dark energy taking over Kiya is really powerful to get her to turn to the dark side so fast. "Step into the light Kiya, step into the light!" I hope Nadia and Lucien are on their way to see the Garnet Moon members and help them to get Kiya back. I really hope Kiya doesn't fall to far into the darkness and loses herself in the process. Keep up the good work Marii this was a good update
02/16/2021 14:01Kelly Rohrer
I’m so happy to know that our girl is still in there💜 I just hope hope hope that she’s strong enough to hold on. I really feel the key players in saving Kiya and healing Helima are : Artemis (she’s always been her light) Diana (she’s very very special I can’t wait to see if my hunch is right about her being Amber) Neron and Raina. These 2 are living up to repentance of their maltreatment of Kiya and it’s important that she can see whole heartedly that they truly are remorseful and love her with all their hearts. I feel it’s crucial that Neron ends his father’s life as well. Neron understands what change is necessary - he just needs to find the courage to end his father’s life. Even though that’s his only family member left. That would be a truly very hard act for him to do. Sorry my thoughts got carried away
02/16/2021 13:20
Mawusi Ford
I’m glad Kiya is still thinking of Artemis and wants her with her. She should hold on to that feeling. Oh l can’t wait till Artemis is out 🤣🤣 Orisis better watch out when she is free 😂
02/16/2021 12:23Cata Deveza-Yap
I am so relieved that they were alive. Maybe they can help Kiya again. I wonder why she hated Neron the most... Shouldn't it be Jonathan? Or am I just being biased? hahaha. I am glad that Kiya still has, although weak, her lucid moments. As long as it's there, I feel hopeful for her.
02/16/2021 11:16
Justmee
Nadia? Refresher please... what chapters?
02/16/2021 10:42Justmee
When the student out does the master! Osiris is in trouble 🤔! He has created a very powerful yet unstable being that is moving off the temperament of a child. Dangerous indeed 😬! Owee, I can not wait to see this all backfire on the him 💥!!!
02/16/2021 10:14Glemmett Maylor
One of the reason I'm enjoying this book is because its not the usual "see mate, fall instantly in love, mark mate, live happily ever after" unrealistic crap that is mostly written. Life is shitty and full of drama. Things happen, people split up and get back together, all kinda crap. Even if they Neron and Kiya do not end up being together, I'm enjoying his journey into becoming a true Alpha and waiting to see how Kiya will be pulled from the darkness within. This book is a journey into their past, their present and giving a possible glimpse of their future and I'm enjoying every second of it. It's my guilty pleasure! Lol!
02/16/2021 09:57
Meowdel Em
ohhh 😮 Nadia is alive!!!!!
02/16/2021 08:20
Mrs.Hyde
I'm glad for the updates I haven't read in a while just let them build up and then binge on them. Plus I'm reading so many books to get to my goal of 200 by December so it's nice to come here and find alot of chapters waiting after you've been away for a bit.
02/15/2021 23:49Mrs.Hyde
I had a feeling Osiris was going to be able to turn Kiya. For how long who knows. I hate she went through all that suffering at Zircon Moon hands. And they should be punished, but not at the expense of Kiya losing her humanity, her light and love. That really mad me sad that she had no control of being manipulated by a mad man. And now she's lost and so is Artemis.
02/15/2021 23:47Mrs.Hyde
I'm curious if Diana is supposed to be the Moon Goddess in disguise.
02/15/2021 21:46Madalina Baicu
Hi,I got caught into it ,I must admit.May I ask how often do you add chapters and if you have the series planned.Like do you plan to write more than 2 book?It is really not about money, I treated myself to a deal so I have funds I have a dislike for books and even movies(That's why I don't watch any serials anymore)that drag to much.The essence of the book gets lost.Other than that congratulations on the book.
02/15/2021 13:38
mehra ali
will kiya accept Neron
02/15/2021 00:12Justmee
Happy Valentine's Day Marii 🥰! Hope all is well and you're having fun ❤
02/14/2021 18:39
Reader-217547
I want to see them together but not so easily lol I’m loving the drama!
02/14/2021 18:23
Michelle Cox
Yess, it’s good to see Neron stepping up like the Alpha he is!!!
02/14/2021 13:31Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
I still think Neron can still save Kiya. Osiris will soon get his karma big time.
02/14/2021 06:52Rashelle Grace Aukema
when will he learn that the bird is the KEY!!!!
02/14/2021 04:42
AstarteLor
gah! so good
02/14/2021 03:00
Sherisa Weston
what is a BOLO?
02/14/2021 00:14Sherisa Weston
Man some people are very angry in the comments. If you are just going to read and insult the author because you don't like where the story is going, simply just stop reading. No is forcing you to read geez
02/13/2021 23:20Kirsten Burmeister
i was happy neron was able to reach her too. hopefully with him and the help of her family and friends she will be able to overcome the darkness, although that would mean forgiving people. I am still unsure how I feel about neron and kiya ending up together...neron definitely has grown.. he needs to re-evaluate and change his life (maybe kick the alpha bucket and just live his life)...i can see them being friends for a long time, no clue if a physical relationship is even possible with the past they have..maybe with the mate bond severed through Osiris they can live as friends and move on with other people romantically...i am happy i don't have to work out the details though and that this decision is up to our lovely author 😊
02/13/2021 22:33Jael Brown
I am glad Neron was able to reach Kiya, but interested in seeing what happens between Kiya and Osiris. To play with her mind and manipulate her the way that he did was dead wrong
02/13/2021 19:43
Mez
Does anyone else lowkey want a Diana? I do 🤣 She’s so lively and cute!
02/13/2021 18:33Meowdel Em
I knew it!!!!! I knew he could reach her at least partially if not completely!
02/13/2021 16:12Mia
I totally love that lil owl Diana!! I wonder who she is - like a reincarnation of someone perhaps?
02/13/2021 15:15Mia
um...yeah...Not a fan of this plot twist at all...I am trying very hard to continue but I am really turned off by Osiris!! Hopefully he gets his beans soon yeah??
02/13/2021 15:11Justmee
C'mon Neron... YOU GOT THIS 💪🏾! It'll be interesting to learn more about Osiris from others in the supernatural scene. That's if anyone is willing to speak up. I can't wait for the next update 😁👏🏾
02/13/2021 13:00Yolanda Peguero
I really love this story being a survivor and having many traumas, I can truly identify with Kiya. One of the parts of healing is forgiving and letting go. forgiving oneself and others, allowing onself to move on to live and love. Kiya deserves happiness, love. She deserves to accept her past as it is and move forward only then true happiness can come. love heals !
02/13/2021 12:29Omayra Seybert
💗💗💗
02/13/2021 07:51Elle 🧿
I’ve just finished reading chapter 56 ‘Surrendered’ and I loved having Orisi’s POV because for me, it really highlighted how much he is using Kiya for ‘his’ plan and nothing more. I don’t feel he cares about her happiness or loves her. He’s all about wanting her power and what it can do for him. My mind is spinning theories in how Kiya will get back from this, who will save her? or will she save herself? Where is Nadia in all of this? What will happen to the innocent ones at Zicron pack (like the children)? What will happen to her family and Neron when they find out? Too much to think about 😅... ABOVE ALL ... I really hope Artemis is ok 🙏.
02/13/2021 06:58Cata Deveza-Yap
Oh here goes my heart again... beating fast, wishing for another update soon. But of all people, why would Kiya reach out to Neron and not one of her friends or family? Does this mean, Neron has access to the realm where Kiya is? 🤔
02/13/2021 06:33
Spectral Beauty
Ah! Poor Neron, he’s being tested, big time. But he’ll emerge stronger because of it, and be a better leader 😊
02/13/2021 06:25Gwendolyn D. Pough
Am I the only greedy reader checking and rechecking for one of those double update days she gives us sometimes? LOL.oh... it’s just me... 😂😂😂
02/13/2021 06:24Reader-016812
After reading chapter 56, I felt compelled to reread the first chapters of Untouchable until the adoption. I feel like Lyra might be the only one that could actually reach Kiya and her inner child, the love between them could help extract her from the darkness. She has trusted her new mother from the moment she met her and loves everything about her -her smell, her touch, her voice. I wonder is Diana is not Niria’s spirit, or her messenger because of the love she is showing to both Kiya and Neron, two people Niria was fond of and who loved her dearly as well.
02/13/2021 06:24Reader-323329
I already bought all of the chapters and now they are all lock again and want me to pay again to reopen them??? what the heck?
02/13/2021 01:44
Meaghan Prue
so now does osiris and kiya make love in the next chapter and they mark each other hmm interesting
02/12/2021 22:30
Jennifer Bennett
I do love this book, despite how long it takes for updates. I am getting frustrated with it.
02/12/2021 01:04
wolfey619
Wow, this story is just keeping me hanging by my fingernails! I'm all feelings 😭 I know it is a werewolf themed story but I can relate to Kiya in many ways. I suffered from child and sexual abuse. My bio mother only cared about prestige. I was lucky enough to be adopted by a caring family who love me as their own. I was a 3.5+ gpa student, received a degree in Computer Science, joined the Air Force reserves and made rank and had high pay civillian job. BUT I felt empty and alone no matter what accomplishments I made. I was always in fear that my abusers would find me and do those horrible things to me. No matter what I did, I would feel like I would be judge by my family, friends and peers if they found out how weak and dirty I was. I was always forcing myself to feel happy and pretend I was well when deep down I felt like I had no control and lived in fear. I kept all of those dreadful feelings locked up and never spoke to anyone about it. I didn't want to burden my loved ones with what I called "stupid weak insecurities". I told myself to keep being strong no matter what. I even played the part of the perfect girlfriend despite my boyfriend (ex now) being a known cheat. Let's just say the phrase "Everyone has to lose sometime" is very true to me. I spiraled down a dark hole and lost myself... I began drinking daily to forget how emotionally numb I felt, I closed myself off from my loved ones, I no longer enjoyed my job, I gained weight and went into deep depression. Despite how horrible it sounds, I had to lose myself in the darkness to be able to find my light aka true self. I'm still not 100% but I can honestly say I am doing way better now mentally than I was 3 years ago. Getting over abuse and trauma is a long process. @Marii Solari, I'm here to stay for Kiya's journey. Things may seem grim but I still have hope foe her.
02/12/2021 00:11
Yahaida Perez-Lemon
I love how Osiris thinks he's in the clear. Unfotunately he made a very terrible mistake. He left Artemis ALIVE. Good Luck with that Osiris! q
02/11/2021 23:55Veronica Loya
this book has me 🤦♀️😫😭 my emotions are everywhere!! one minute I’m laughing the next I’m pist!! or I’m crying!! I really wish she snaps out of it and kicks his ass for making her turn to the dark side can’t wait to read how it ends!!
02/11/2021 22:46
Brittney Allen
@Marii Solaria so I saw a comment about your book being available on Amazon, and I do have a question about it. Will it just be a digital copy or paperback/hardcover book? l like to keep books to pick back up and read later on. I think it's awesome that you will be on Amazon. There is another author I follow by the name of Kavii who will be releasing her sequel book on Amazon soon and I can't wait. I found her first book Falling Hearts on Readict and googled until I found the sequel unfinished on Wattpad. Even though I've purchased all chapters here I will still purchase your book on Amazon because they are just as good. Sorry for the rambling.
02/11/2021 21:47
Alyse Wilson
some of you guys need to chill out with the judgment! shes doing the best she can writing this story and its a TREMENDOUS one at that. Alot of details go into books im sure and its not always going to be cookies and rainbows. Keep up the good work Marii Solaria 👏
02/11/2021 20:35Michelle Cox
I loved the book at first, but lately I feel I’m struggling to finish. Now this part of the story with this guy has gone on long enough I’m starting to feel over it. idk I hope it wraps up soon.
02/11/2021 17:01
Becky Treadway
I'm not liking where this is going. this makes me upset. Especially since she has friends and family she loves
02/11/2021 16:30Alyson Sharpe
dont known if I can carry on reading. I want her to forgive Neron and live happily ever after.
02/11/2021 13:59Glemmett Maylor
Well, I'm still holding faith in Kiya and her Garnet Moon family to find a way out of this. Love will prevail but I gotta say I'm loving Osiris's evil warped mind. dwl
02/11/2021 12:24Justmee
Definitely UNHINGED 🥴! I wonder does Osiris realize he just pushed an avatar more powerful than himself over the edge? This is merely temporary for Kiya. Unlike Osiris she has truly experienced love. It's about to GO DOWN 😫🤯! Awesome update 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
02/11/2021 12:17Meaghan Prue
so beyond disgusted osiris u evil piece of garbage
02/11/2021 11:15Renee Nykanen
marii solaria I posted a couple interesting things I'd like you to read they were on replies from a couple of days ago, but it's the one you were telling us about these books being released on Amazon. if you could please read and let me know what your thoughts are. I tried to copy it so I could post it separately up here on the recent days comments but it would not allow me to do so. I am greatly looking forward to your thoughts and answers. thank you
02/11/2021 09:30Mihaela Vardianu
I refuse to think that Kiya really torn to the bad side
02/11/2021 07:04Cata Deveza-Yap
I still believe in Kiya. The difference between Osiris and Kiya is that... Kiya received the love she deserved from Garnet Pack. She had experienced love and acceptance long before all these happened. I still believe in her strength, with or without Neron or Onyx to save her.
02/11/2021 06:54Jael Brown
Yikes, I refuse to believe that Kiya has stepped into the bad side. Sometimes in order to defeat one's enemies you have to embrace the dark hopefully that is what's happening here. I think Kiya will eventually snap out of it, I just hope it's sooner rather than later.
02/11/2021 06:32Meowdel Em
also , my newest theory, lol 😂... Neron and Kiya already love each other in some way. Kiya wouldn’t cry over his sketch otherwise.. she just isn’t aware of the fact that she does in fact feel something for the Neron she’s gotten to know and remembers before Nuria rather than the one who rejected her.
02/11/2021 06:20Taina Iosefo
Poor Artemis... she’s a fighter for sure. I hope she’ll be able to free herself and call for Onyx. I can’t believe she went through the whole ritual and Osiris and Kiya kissed. At some point I was hoping Kiya would wake up and start killing everyone around her. But I guess not. Can’t wait for the next update.
02/11/2021 05:32Cata Deveza-Yap
Ms. Marii when you write your stories, I am always lost at the emotions of your characters. Like just now, I also felt victorious– and it's for Osiris! OSIRIS?! I also felt his obsessive love for Kiya. After reading, I realized this chapter could have been one of the most romantic scene I've read (I just need to take out the 'dark' aspect)👀🤭 I like it, Ms. Marii. Super amazing! Although, something horrible is sure to happen in the next chapters, this one is remarkable because of the way it was written. It's haunting... and hard to forget.
02/11/2021 05:15Sniderin
W. T. F.
02/11/2021 04:19Gwendolyn D. Pough
As Avatar of the Moon Goddess can she access her full powers without her wolf?
02/11/2021 04:14Mawusi Ford
l can’t wait until he dies and l hope Artemis and Neron does it 😡😡
02/11/2021 04:05Ashley Fuller
No, no, no, no...NO!
02/11/2021 04:05
Jenn McCoy
🤯🤬☠
02/11/2021 03:35
Alyssa
I’m cursing that damn wicked ass Hybrid!!!! He is no better than the damn Jonathan and his Alpha ancestors. He raped Kiya!!!!! AGAIN!!!! I’m cursing bad words right now 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬!!!! He used his evil dark magic to make her HIS against her will!!!!
02/11/2021 03:32Spectral Beauty
HOLYYYYY MOLYYYYY. Things just got real 😳😳 ...and I’m disgusted that Osiris and Kiya kissed. No, just no!
02/11/2021 03:24
wana blain
holy cow I’m mute
02/11/2021 03:18Reader-217547
when will the next update be? I’m dying here to know what happens next. please
02/11/2021 01:45Jennifer Hull Shanklin
I hope she ends up with Darien
02/10/2021 22:45
Roza Pestana
No Kiya don't give up!
02/10/2021 19:37Taina Iosefo
Oh man... always into dee with the updates and trying to figure out what’s gonna happen next. I was wondering what or how Neron felt his bond with Kiya breaking. love that Halima her inner child has made it to the surface yet scared for what she has gone through and what will happen next. Feelings are true no matter how much you try to hide or bury it. Can’t wait for the next update!!
02/10/2021 13:23Alyssa
I read Ms Maari’s Instagram story today and I re-read the prologue and my mind is blown😩😩😩🧐🧐🧐🧐
02/10/2021 00:02Reader-807209
does anyone know the writing schedule for this? becaaaauuusseeee I’m dying lol I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON IN THIS BOOK
02/09/2021 21:42Meaghan Prue
guys dont forget this is part of osiris`s evil plan he probably is planting these images in kiyas mind to poison it even further and because of kiyas love for children her inned child is the perfect target easy to manipulate
02/09/2021 21:13Meowdel Em
so here’s an interesting thought 🧐... and I’d just like to throw this out there.... Halima as Halima is still mated with Neron is she not? Because the rapes and everything else occurred after she was nine, at which point she was still bonded to Neron .. so my mind is wandering around the fact that is it possible he’s the only one who may be able to reach her mind via that link? Halima’s not Kiya’s...
02/09/2021 19:23Kelly Rohrer
Please hang on Kiya 😞 Hopefully she can help heal Halima too... I truly have no idea what or who can help her now. She’s yet again left alone to deal with Hell. Maybe Neron needs to let Onyx save Artimas so they can work together to save Kiya/Halima.
02/09/2021 14:08
samsam jama
wow 😳 kiya please fight for your family, yourself. friends and family want you. you can do this.😢😢😢😭😭😭
02/09/2021 04:13Spectral Beauty
So is this where Neron felt the bond breaking? When Kiya felt the burning in her chest while in darkness? Or is there something else that is yet to happen?? Gah! Can’t wait for the next update!
02/08/2021 21:47Alyssa
Wow, I am crying real tears at this chapter right now. I have been abused as a kid, just like Kiya, and it literally hurts me that the abusers moved on with their lives and nothing ever happened to them 😢😢😢. My God this is so true.
02/08/2021 18:15Yahaida Perez-Lemon
Soooooooo......did she just die? Again? I feel like she did....which is going to add a whole new layer to this story! OMG!
02/08/2021 14:30Jael Brown
Kiya's pain is so great she had to force it to the deepest recesses of her mind and since it happened to her when she was younger her inner child only knows pain. In order to overcome this dark place in her mind she and her inner child will have to face her demons. She is truly going to have to forgive and let go of the hurt which is not going to be easy. I hope she makes peace with her inner child and comes back to the light. "Follow the light Kiya"
02/08/2021 12:57Justmee
I hate Osiris 😑! He's such a weakling. Unfortunately for Kiya in her quest to protect her inner child she will lose herself. Damn, damn, damn 😔! Snap out of it baby girl.... bring her to the light so she can once again play with her friend who died so many years ago. Another fabulous update 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
02/08/2021 12:19Perla G.
☹😭😭😭😭🤗🤗
02/08/2021 10:02Cata Deveza-Yap
Oh Halima... 😭 Poor baby! It's supposed to be frustrating that Kiya gave in because I expect her to get out of manipulation, and because she's an Avatar. BUT it felt right that she had embraced Halima... Embraced her inner child, her neglected feeling. Accepting that she may be an Avatar of the Light, but she has darkness in her, she's entitled to feel that way. Her feelings are valid. Maybe Kiya needs this too. Osiris may not see it now but I think healing Halima is the only way for Kiya to finally let go of her painful life.
02/08/2021 09:42Mia
im not liking this part at all..I am kind of frustrated that no one has found any trace/clues as to where Kiya is...Osiris...Just needs to go already
02/08/2021 05:57Alyssa
I am really glad that I found this app and this author. Marii your books are literally the only thing keeping me here and buying coins 😀😀😀😀. I promised myself that I’m not wasting my precious coins on any other book 🤪🤪🤪🤪. Keep it coming!!
02/08/2021 00:02Elainah May Jackson
absolutely love this story! can’t wait for new chapters when they come on! so enticing!
02/07/2021 23:59Rosemarie Carrillo
😬😬😬
02/07/2021 15:11Reader-759744
How often are new chapters posted?
02/06/2021 23:24
Rekha Martinez
I hope she can see the difference between her inner child and the person she now and not fall for evil trap. she need to make peace with it and forgive so she can move on. I want more chapters with her Neón. show them falling in love how he can be awesome to her
02/06/2021 17:50Mia
I am not liking Osiris at all...I just want someone to find Kiya asap to end his madness.
02/06/2021 01:07Raine Stoehr
Alright, I have finally caught up to the most recent chapter, and I just have e to say one thing. several moments throughout the entirety of this series, I have thought the entire situation surrounding Kiya and her trauma reflected well with a song I recently became obsessed with, the Hero n’ Villain duet by Natalie Chavez on YouTube. But no moment has reflected it quite so well as when Kiya came face to face with her inner child, and I am just.... I’m in awe and eager to see how this all ends. You’ve crafted a captivating story here.
02/05/2021 22:06Cata Deveza-Yap
I LOVE how Ms. Marii made sure that "romantic love" would not be the main plot of Unhinged. ❤️ At the start, I was hoping that Kiya and Neron's would end up together, fall in love with each other as the story unfolds. That was despite the number of times Ms. Marii said, that probably won't happen in this book. I still hoped, and I know I am not alone hoping for the same thing. 😅 Now, I know why it might not happen. Surprisingly, I think I'd be more happy to see Jonathan trembling in fear and Osiris' huge downfall rather than seeing Kiya and Neron getting together. ✌️ I am now more interested at the adventure of the characters as they dedeat their own demons and stay sane despite the insanities around them. Because really, it's kind of hard to be in their shoes right now. 😳😁
02/05/2021 20:07
Ana Murillo
How often do you update your book? BTW thank you its a great story 😊
02/05/2021 19:52Vickie Armitage
omg I need to finish it can't wait for next chapter so hooked
02/05/2021 15:55
Bella Jackson
does anyone know how to get free coins so I can finish the story
02/05/2021 14:45Jael Brown
Oh crap, the fact that Kiya's inner feels safe and comforted by Osiris scares me, but I can't help but ask why doesn't her inner child have a wolf like Artemis to guide her and serve as her voice of reason?
02/05/2021 14:18Yahaida Perez-Lemon
OH this is all kinds of BAD!
02/05/2021 13:31Kelly Rohrer
OMG!!!! That’s literally all I can say !!!
02/05/2021 10:29Justmee
How low can Osiris get?! Manipulating a child 😑! Even though Kiya never allowed her inner child to heal. Giving him all the opportunity to make his move on her most vulnerable inner self. Is the mark the reason he was able to connect with Kiya's younger side? Maybe this is nothing more than Osiris projecting images to her through the ritual? This chapter was deep 🤔😳
02/05/2021 10:21Cata Deveza-Yap
Oh wow 😳😳😳😳 He is doing what Odessa did to Darien... Osiris will resurface that inner child! But why does Neron feel something weird on their mating bond?
02/05/2021 08:46Rebeca G
Completely random note Marii, but have you ever heard the song House of Wolves by My Chemical Romance? The music and lyrics really remind me of this book.
02/05/2021 06:46
