Unhinged Comments
Taina Iosefo
I was hoping she wouldn’t fall into Osiris’s plan to kill but zircon pack didn’t help with her feeling the way she did especially with Jonathan and the elder coming and saying she’s a liar and whore. He needs to go back to Selene. I’m finally glad Raina is there for her sister and fights Odessa and her big mouth. I love that Neron is backing up and supporting Kiya. I love love her garnet moon pack always wanting to fight for her and are there for her no matter what. I’m seriously surprised Alpha Anthony and Kiya’s parents aren’t told or there for her. But I can’t wait for another update!!
12/24/2020 13:46
Sherisa Weston
I am furious!!!!!! Not really about Kiya but everyone else ughghhhhhh
12/24/2020 12:21Codex Winchester
oh kiya. I knew something like this would happen! Garnet moon did their job....go home! Get away from Zircon!
12/24/2020 12:05
Alyssa
I hate this pack. If Nerón wants to be with her, he can’t be alpha of this wack ass pack!!
12/24/2020 11:43Kelly Rohrer
I will say that I hate that she was driven to the point that she was the one that had to do that. However, as a writer you did a great job and making me support her doing that! I love the fact that Reina is whipping the shit out of Odessa and the Neron is standing up for Kiya to his father! but his father is truly a disgusting person! And I really want Alpha Anthony here at this point to put him in his place! Along with that fucking elder! Truth needs to ring down on this pack! And I truly believe that the fact that Kiya is the avatar to Selene, there will be help for her. I am curious to see if the other avatars had to go through a similar situation with Osirius.I wonder if they can come back and help her beat the Darkside and help get rid of that mark!
12/24/2020 11:36
spazz 31
luv this book. very well written. just hate waiting for updates
12/24/2020 08:10Songsearrae Cummings
YESSS!!!
12/24/2020 07:50Thandiswa Toyi
Hi. I bought coins but it keeps prompting me to buy more without opening the page. when I try to make another purchase, the transaction fails. what can I do?
12/24/2020 07:14Gwendolyn D. Pough
Now that is what we call “snapped!” She brought wreck, pain and havoc to that ass and I loved it! Jonathan better watch out because it looks like our girl is handing out total destruction and hugs today and she is fresh outta hugs...
12/24/2020 06:33Lois Withers
okay part oh me says YA GO KIYA!!!!! but the other part of me is stab that fucking prick of a dad in the dick too lol
12/24/2020 06:15
Spectral Beauty
Man, what is Neron going to think of that display?? 😬😬
12/24/2020 05:41Spectral Beauty
HOLY. CRAP. Is it possible to hate Odessa and Jonathan even more? ‘Cuz I do...
12/24/2020 05:39
miasiacheyenne
damn this book is SO good. waiting for the updates is killing me, but it’s SO worth it
12/24/2020 05:20
Lips
that was magnificent
12/24/2020 05:16
Mawusi Ford
Well Damn 👀👀👀 l hate Johnathan and Odessa. Well They brought this on themselves she was trying to be nice but saying she was an object took the cake. Such a disgusting pack! l hope Neron leaves them. No one has changed really but him and her sister. So sad 😞
12/24/2020 05:13
ballen282004
I started crying and was so passed but when she got her revenge I felt that evil cackle to my core baby. (snap snap) yesss baby get them ki👏🏾ya👏🏾!!! Blow that whole pack off the map. give them that Carrie prom night scene they begging for baby!!!
12/24/2020 04:55ballen282004
yessss Kiya!!!! now get Jonathan and Odessa!!!!
12/24/2020 04:49
Marii Solaria
Hi everyone! I’ve posted chapters 32 and 33 today and should be available to read! I will not be updating for the next few days because of the holidays, so I left something for y’all to think about. The only thing I can say to you all is that this book is titled “Unhinged” for a reason... Happy holidays! ❤️ 🎄
12/24/2020 04:16Meryam Ahsan
I knew she was better than that! I think Steven should kill Tristan. Or better yet, they should shoot him. Death squad by silver bullets
12/24/2020 04:06Spectral Beauty
Great update! I’m glad Kiya isn’t going to kill Tristan (though I imagine that that could change next update, especially if he starts taunting her under Osiris’ influence 😬). Thank you, dear author!
12/24/2020 03:41Lois Withers
do have a good holiday!!!!
12/24/2020 02:46Lois Withers
okay so awesome cuz I kinda feared that osiris would use this to get to her more but she has more strength than me if given the chance I would have mine suffer the Scaphism torture method and I would camp out on the river bank that or find a horse and have him raped to death lol sorry if that offends or upsets anyone at the age of 19 I was raped even at 34 ive managed to deal with a lot of it but some things are still more of a challenge at times
12/24/2020 02:46ballen282004
Great Update!!!
12/24/2020 02:38Kelly Rohrer
My girl is sooo smart 💜💜
12/24/2020 01:34
Reader-242451
when will you update?????
12/24/2020 00:50
Pupu
when will u give us next update ? 🥺 update a couple of chapters.
12/23/2020 18:11ballen282004
is Osiris the avatar of the Egyptian god Osiris Lord of the underworld?
12/23/2020 17:05Kelly Rohrer
I would love to see Alpha Anthony show up! He may be who I would love to see destroy Tristan! He is so solid for Kiya - just like the rest of her Garnet Moon family. On the other hand - Zircon Moon has soo much to rectify! I truly believe Kiya cannot or should not be the one to kill Tristan- it’s the path that Osiris wants her to take and giving in to him I feel will completely destroy my girl Kiya. Side note- Raina needs to kill Odessa like yesterday! That bitch is the one who keeps traumatizing Kiya relentlessly too.!
12/23/2020 11:33Victoria Clarke
Hoping for new chapter soon, no pressure... 😂
12/23/2020 08:13Rebecca Marie Squires
How much and often do you update please Marii Solaria? Many thanks
12/23/2020 06:58
Justmee
***sigh 😅! Just a friendly reminder I'm here waiting for your next update. My pressure is sky high from checking every hour to see if you have blessed me with another wonderful chapter. Don't judge me 😂😂😂😂
12/23/2020 05:59Sherisa Weston
uhmm who is Orion again? 😅
12/22/2020 15:31Sherisa Weston
Did i mentioned how much I love Jacqueline?! If she didn't already have a mate I wouldn't mind she and Kiya being mates. I just love how protective and caring she is of her
12/22/2020 13:50Sherisa Weston
Every time I start to think I might/would not mind if Kiya and Neron e end up as mates, I am reminded (not like I need reminding) of all the horrible things Neron and Jonathan allowed to happen to Kiya. Yes, Neron didn't know about the rape even though I feel like Johnathan did, I feel like Neron would not have cared to stop it but would have maybe stopped it not for Kiya but the pride of his disgusting pack. How could anyone even begin to want Kiya and Neron together and her the Luna of that pack when just being around them stirs up so much pain from the past. Kiya when through many terrible physical abuse with even more mental and sexual abuse. Kiya is so strong to even step on the same dirt has that pack and to associate with anyone from that pack because I bet many of us probably would have wanted or would have burn the entire pack down to nothing like it deserves. The only thing Kiya ooke there are the children and that is because they are innocent in everything that happened to her. If Neron wants Kiya to accept him as a mate he is going to need to work harder than what he is doing. Right now I can only tolerate them as being almost friends or friends in the future
12/22/2020 13:38Sherisa Weston
For the whole time Kiya was beating the crap out of Tristanin chapter 27 I was chanting kill him, kill him, kill him but then my rational mind came back and said this is what Osiris wants and if she killed him it would probably place her more on the dark side than the light. Someone else should kill me but maybe she should beat him up for as long as she wants to get her anger out more heheh. Also, I did not know Artemis never knew Kiya was raped?
12/22/2020 12:31Cata Deveza-Yap
Why do I feel that the next update would be on the Christmas eve? 🦉 Tristan should be punished today.✌️ Just kidding!
12/22/2020 09:14
Mrs.Hyde
You really do a great job of the inner dialogue of these characters. You also do a great job because this story has alot of emotional depth. And really makes you think about what it really means to forgive another person for hurting you.
12/22/2020 01:07Mrs.Hyde
It breaks my heart for all r the abuse she went through and to know not only was she brutally beaten up but raped on a regular basis as well. And for her Raina, Stephen, Ashley even Valerian to all say it's time to move on and leave the past in the past? Like wth are they sipping on. My heart goes out to Kiya so much. As a rape survivor, those horrific experiences never go away. They later festering like an open wound in your subconscious, never to fully heal. Yeah you get up everyday putting one foot in front of the other but it has a ripple effect and changes your life in every way. I don't blame her for being so hurt and mistrustful of them. Years of unspeakable mental, emotional & physical abuse can't even be healed in years let alone a few months. I'm glad to see that Neron is making an effort to change but it seems he got a long way to go and Kiya biological family I feel like their betrayal is even worse than Neron because if anyone is suppose to love and cherish you it's your parents the ones that brought you into this world. They and Raina are asking for the almost impossible way to quickly and all because now they feel "remorse". But it can't be to asusage their own guilt. She deserves all the time in the world even if it takes a decade for Kiya to forgive them they need to give her that time.
12/22/2020 00:55Reader-003394
I love these books but I’m getting tired of being ripped off for coins.
12/21/2020 14:46Extacy925
I don't think she should kill him. Neron should be the one who should do it. Also I think everyone that falsely accused her should be whipped with a sliver whip for what they did to her including Neron.(whipping post)
12/21/2020 14:23Pupu
I think Orisis will try to pollute Neron. that will be his biggest achievement but I am hoping he will fail in it
12/21/2020 13:22Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
I think Kiya executing Tristan is what Osiris wanted...for Kiya to give in to the darkness inside her...
12/21/2020 11:45
MzDiva1987
as much as I would love to see Kiya kill Tristan she shouldn’t. It willonly give into what Osiris wants
12/21/2020 10:32
Berry Bear
I don't think Kiya should kill him. But i would really like to read that he gets castrated, healed, castrated again, healed... i think you know what i mean. But not by her. Maybe Nero, Anthony an her Dad would like to have fun with him.
12/21/2020 09:20Cata Deveza-Yap
May I suggest on how she should do it in front of everyone? 1. Castrate him 2. then the fingers 3. then the hands 4. then his tongue- for the times she screamed 5. then the ears- for all those who refused to hear her cries 6. then the eyes- for those who turned blind eyes on her 7. then the feet, for having no one to run to So that everybody in the pack would feel more guilty.. and after just leave him like that in the dungeon.
12/21/2020 07:35Glemmett Maylor
I don't think Kiya should kill him. It will change her forever. She should find a way for him to suffer not die. Death is the easy way out. Lol I suppose now Neron will understand why she cleaves more to the innocent children and did not wnt him to touch her even during her heat.
12/21/2020 06:20Justmee
I had a feeling you were going to update today. Yayyyyy!!! I'm so happy Kiya's family stayed by her side during the night. I think she needed to wake up intertwined with loved ones and body heat. That body heat is everything when you feel alone and broken. Ugh, that bite is driving me crazy though 😑🥴! Hopefully Osiris is next on the chopping block. Sleep on it Kiya no matter your decision we have your back. Thank you for another awesome update 🤩
12/21/2020 05:18ballen282004
I can feel Kiya's emotions with every sentence. You had me crying from the beginning of Untouchable and cheering for Kiya by the end. Now you got me cheering for her from the beginning of Unhinged and crying my eyes out in what I'm guessing is the middle of this story. Patiently waiting for your next update...also if you are taking suggestions on how Tristan dies...dropping his private parts in a deep fryer while still attached to his body has a nice sound to it🤷🏾♀️. Also, what about Tristan's wolf? was he as corrupt as Tristan or was he like Odessa wolf?
12/21/2020 05:18Spectral Beauty
I think this also gives Neron a new perspective on why Kiya was terrified of him when she was in heat. He was only aware of the physical abuse back then 😞
12/20/2020 18:28Taina Iosefo
I am so glad Neron and Raina are trying to protect Kiya. I hope Tristan gets what he deserves along with Neron’s father. Can’t wait for the next update.
12/20/2020 17:44Sherisa Weston
what happened to the bartender in the first book that poisoned Kiya at the party?
12/20/2020 14:30
Yaritza Carrero
Hi!! I reaaaalllyyy love your books 💕 the writing is so emotional, the finish of chapter 28 made me cry but when you edited later oh my!! Thank you for telling us, that was an aaaawwwesome ending for the chapter. If i may, I would like to know Halima’s parents perspective like we saw with Raina. I really don’t want her to bond with them but it can bring peace to the readers (well for me jajajaja) to know they are truly sorry. Again I would prefer for them to not have a bond again but for her to have peace.
12/20/2020 13:23Meryam Ahsan
does anyone know how I can message the author? I had already read the full book (untouchable) after purchasing coins for all the chapters and I wanted to reread some of the chapters till unhinged was updated, but all the chapters are locked again!!!! help please!
12/20/2020 09:37Reader-728799
oh my god.. update soon 😖😖
12/20/2020 09:34
Tammy Lewis
how often do u post new ch? i usually wait until book complete to read.. but i just finished untouchable and want to know what happening next...
12/20/2020 07:06Spectral Beauty
UGH! I debated whether or not to get hooked onto another ongoing book, but I couldn’t help it after Untouchable!! Anxiously awaiting new updates!!!!
12/20/2020 04:33
StaciMikea25
omg does anybody know today code I really wanna finish
12/20/2020 04:03Mia
far out - this and previous chapters were so hard to read!!! poor Kiya...heart was breaking all over again reading it..
12/19/2020 23:21Lois Withers
don't have him killed I say rape for rape he did it for 3 years to her so he should get the same
12/19/2020 19:09Pupu
I am checking like every hour for an update. and re reading chapters from the first book ,😁😁😁
12/19/2020 17:02Justmee
Babyyyyy this update schedule is giving me life 🥳! I guess I should be happy that Raina is willing to avenge Kyia. It's a slippery slope for me and my emotions are all over the place 🙄🥺! Raina was old enough to understand what was happening to her sister even if she missed the clues of abuse she did hear the crys directly from Kiya for help ***sigh. I'm torn between Kiya executing the guard and Neron 💔! Im so protective over Kyia I wonder will she be able to take his life without a negative impact mentally 😪! Thank you again for another brilliant update 🤯👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
12/19/2020 13:03Raven Dark-fhang
your writing has me on the edge of my seat consuming every word as if I am starving. I can’t wait for your next chapter. The respect to the subject matter is well done and compassionate.
12/19/2020 12:56Cata Deveza-Yap
I wonder if Kiya would want to kill him in front of all the pack members. I mean... If she would want to be seen after her revelations...
12/19/2020 12:19Wini Wilson
This is soooo real. I have experienced first hand the affects of sexual abuse, I ask myself timw and time again could I have prevented the pain that was inflicted? If only I had...!! I should have..!!! However this was not the case, and forever will I regret not making the right decision at the time. I'm still looking for my fairytale ending, however I know it will not come anytime soon. Though some may see the events as fiction, Oh my... to live it for real is another thing.
12/19/2020 11:06Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu
No amount of apologies can erase the pain and suffering Kiya's been through. Jonathan should also take resposibility for what Tristan did. One thing though. All packs have Elders with them, right? The Zircon Moon Elder allow all of these to happen to Kiya and not report anything to the werewolf council? or maybe because the elder was on Jonathan's side too. Hmmm...
12/19/2020 05:42Ashley Fuller
I hope Jonathan doesn’t try to stick his nose in this and free Tristan...
12/19/2020 05:37
Reader143637
your so talented!!! love your work!
12/19/2020 05:27Kelly Rohrer
I LOVE that he is having Kiya do it 💜Neron is definitely impressing me!
12/19/2020 03:52rita lora
I believe that Nerón & Rayna are truly repented of how they treated &allowed Kira to be treated, I believe those 2 should be given a second chance, I don’t think Rayna’s parents should be forgiven @all. I still believe Diana is the moon goddess, I think Kira still has a lot of healing to go but all this is a step closer in aiding the process, Johnathon needs to be exposed & publicly held responsible for everything that has happened to Kira. @MariiSolaria this is an amazing story
12/19/2020 03:23Glemmett Maylor
Oh Gosh! This is so intense and I'm loving every second of it!
12/19/2020 02:59Jael Brown
Wow, I really love and hate Raina at the same time. Part of me wants to slap the shit out of her for turning her back on her sister when she needed her the most and for turning her over to that monster Tristan. But I digress because she didn't know even though she ignored her sister to keep her status in this God awful pack. Raina is starting to realize like Neron all of the hell that she helped subject Kiya to, but we they change the error of their ways before it's too late. I honestly don't blame Kiya if said forget this and went back home. I get that she has to heal from her past but everywhere she looks in the pack is riddled with painful memories and people who could care less about how much they hurt her. These chapters are really making me cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
12/19/2020 02:50Cata Deveza-Yap
"Rapists are scum. We'll be doing the world a favor" ****** This execution is too late to give justice to Kiya. They may think killing Tristan would avenge Kiya from his assaults. But part of me thinks, they just want their guilts away.
12/19/2020 02:04Justmee
Am I the only one that becomes sick to my stomach every time Raina touches Kiya 🤢🤮! I have developed a strong dislike for Raina 🙄. I can not with all the excuses from her. I know she's trying to make things right but it's just to late for me 🙅🏽♀️! Even in the first book when she did the spell to help find Kiya I felt nothing. Simply thought it was the least she could do. Oh how I wish that bottle would have fractured her skull. She needs to have a glimpse of the torture Kiya endured for years. Thanks for another brilliant update. Can't wait for the next chapter 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
12/19/2020 01:13Taina Iosefo
How can anyone be so full of themselves to not feel anything for anyone? Her own sister, she asked for help and nothing. I hope her brother and parents hear about this from her other pack members. They need to know what’s going on now. They have more right to know.
12/19/2020 01:00Albertina Mcclain
this is so sad 😞. Kiya should leave that place, go back to pack that treated good. why hasn't anyone call her brother Alpha Anthony?
12/19/2020 00:24Cata Deveza-Yap
"I want the pain to stop. Please, don't leave me alone again." 😭😭😭😭😭 Dear Ms. Author, in the spirit of Holidays, can you kindly please hasten up the updates so that by Christmas, we'd all stop crying too.
12/18/2020 23:35MzDiva1987
I cried throughout this chapter. Raina should be a shamed of herself. All of them should be.
12/18/2020 23:23Sherisa Weston
uhmm in chapter 13 when Galen mentioned something with Ximey,what does that mean? Who or what is Ximey?
12/18/2020 23:08Gwendolyn D. Pough
That was heartbreaking. Raina needs to feel every bit of that guilt. I couldn’t imagine treating any of my little sisters this way. and to know that she could have done something....yes... feel all the guilt. I swear I am almost with Osiris, that pack needs to be burned to the ground.
12/18/2020 23:05JamieHichew
another amazing chapter! soooo much emotion! 💗
12/18/2020 23:05
louisa van eysden
wow so many emotions, you've written this so beautifully! ♡ but I'm running out of tissues lol ♡
12/18/2020 22:15Candy Byers
I love this book but I will wait until you finish it.
12/18/2020 21:19Mawusi Ford
whew lord!! I need a rum and coke to read this. great job on portraying her emotions. This is heart breaking to read. Wonder how her parents will feel? Excellent excellent work
12/18/2020 21:03
wana blain
I can’t read the update 😭😭😭
12/18/2020 21:00Sherisa Weston
This is Neron's redemption story but remember his redemption doesn't only mean Kiya finally acknowledging him as her mate and finally being with him. Redemption means making up for all the wrongs you have done and finding your true self so one of his redemption could be just truly being there for Kiya and them just being close friends
12/18/2020 20:32Pupu
Many wants Neron to give up being Alpha. but I think he should not. he would be not taking responsibility of making a better regime in the pack if he gave up. He should give up only after he has made a better pack. leaving responsibility is running away.And being Alpha now Neron can better protect Kiya from other dangers
12/18/2020 17:56
HanaBana
I think this chapter has opened Neron's eyes to the true darkness of his pack, and could be what makes him give up his place as alpha? I think that will show his real support of Kiya. My heart ached for poor Kiya in this chapter.
12/18/2020 17:51Jael Brown
Why did Raina go back to the party, if it was me and someone did that to one of my sisters not even God could stop me from beating the crap out of whoever hurt them. All of these people are riddle with their guilt. Kiya is definitely the most courageous character in this story. When are all of these people going to apologize (and mean it) for what they have done to her. I hope it is soon before it really is to late. Why is it so hard for people to say I am sorry?
12/18/2020 16:37Cata Deveza-Yap
I also wonder, where Phoebe is? I think she is a great company against Osiris.
12/18/2020 08:18Pupu
Neron should show that he truely cares about Kiya. I think only Neron's love and care will be able to thrawt Orisi and his ugly darkness. The assualt is unforgivable. And Neron needs to prove that he is a worthy mate. Kiya deserves to be loved , cared and protected. I hope Neron proves to be worthy enough for her.
12/18/2020 06:12Jael Brown
Damn poor Kiya, these chapters really made me cry and I feel so bad for her to go through all that suffering and know that no one gave a damn. No one deserves that I can't say that I am mad that Kiya fought him and almost killed him what he did to her is unforgivable and she is still suffering through the pain. Time does in fact heal all wounds but five years isn't enough time. I really hope my girl bounces back from this and doesn't let this take her to a dark place and that she realizes she is stronger than this tragedy.I am glad Neron followed her to see how she was she needs someone there for her now, and since he wasn't there for her in the first place he can be there for her now. Great chapters and thank you for writing them.
12/18/2020 03:20
Tina Rodriguez
I want her to forgive him because being together will make them happy but he needs to show to his pack that what they all did was wrong to her and not showing pity to her but building a trust and leasing to forgiveness not just qith him but also the pack
12/17/2020 23:01Tina Rodriguez
is there another chapter or book coming ??
12/17/2020 22:54Senga Mai
😢😭😭oh my heart just broke
12/17/2020 21:16
Ben Knight
Hopefully next chapter drops soon. Am I the only one hoping she doesn't end up accepting him and she gets a 2nd mate? I hate when they get abused for years and accept the mate after a few months of being good to them. Forgiveness is ok but acting like their actions had no consequences in the end gets annoying. Neron can get anther mate or something but not Kiya. Give Darien to her after Odessa dies.
12/17/2020 20:25spazz 31
I am really enjoying this book and the other one that's I have read I just wish there was more chapters LOL
12/17/2020 19:54Kelly Rohrer
yes more chapters please! in fact I’d like to go ahead and purchase the remaining chapters now!
12/17/2020 18:33Miasia Holleman
I feel like I need hourly or daily updates..this one every few days is destroying my soul 😩😭
12/17/2020 18:29Reader143637
this chapter revealed so much to both packs and I truly hope Neuron is able to do right by Kiya now. The hard truth is they can’t change the past but they can help better the future. your such a talented writer and I’m absolutely loving your books!!! thank you for your amazing work!
12/17/2020 17:42
Elizabeth Edmondson
I'm ready for the interrogation to see how Neron reacts to learning his dad allowed people to do whatever they wanted to kiya. I suspect it will be the final nail in the proverbial coffin for neron tolerating his father anymore.
12/17/2020 16:41
