Unhinged Comments

Jael Brown

Oooooo Marii these chapters were too good. I really thought she was going to kill Jonathan darn I have to wait and see. With all things that Jonathan has done in this pack he still has people loyal to him. What does he hope to gain by sacrificing his self? I know he doesn't truly believe that he saved the pack, if he truly wanted to save them then he should have come forward before all the chaos and destruction.

Debra Conklin

I love her bks Can you Buy her Bks

MP14

Does anyone know when the next update will be? Only asking for my sanity 🤣

Sherisa Weston

I wonder what was up with Phoebe

I hope Darien gets a second chance mate, and that somehow Sirius gets Ariel! Darien is lucky to have a friend like Galen though 😊

Oh Neron. 😭😭😭 I still wish you didn't do it. In the deepest part of my heart (and wishful thinking), I really hope this was all a dream. A baaaad baaaad dream. The last part, by the way, was similar to what happened during his Alpha Ceremony. He also stabbed Halima at the back to mark her as a traitor, and he also sentenced her to death. 😭😭😭

Trish Hoehn

awesome book definitely a+++

Fight, Kiya! Fight!

Mari Barba

@Marii Solarios, I absolutely love your books.I would love to read about with Kiya and Neron finally getting together and about their life togerther dealing with new adventures. Thank you for writing!

Begs the question: why did Kiya allow herself to be seen by her mom and then disappear? Is it a game she or Osiris are playing to rile up people? Mislead them? Gah! 🤔

Mrs.Hyde

I'm curious if Diana is supposed to be the Moon Goddess in disguise.

Mia

I totally love that lil owl Diana!! I wonder who she is - like a reincarnation of someone perhaps?

Riana's Pregnant?

Meaghan Prue

pity she didnt put an end to his miserable life right there it would have put a different twist on it

Mrs.Hyde

I really like the last chapter I liked the explanation Kiya gives for Lady Sanguine appearance and how she and Halima subdue her. I don't think Kiya is a monster I just hated to see her go down such a destructive path although I do still believe that the people that hurt her should be punished. At yet and still I do like and can see that Neron is trying to right his wrong and be a better person. Not just for Kiya but for himself.

Sherisa Weston

whoaaa the latest chapter was so intense. I loved it so much

Justmee

C'mon Neron... YOU GOT THIS 💪🏾! It'll be interesting to learn more about Osiris from others in the supernatural scene. That's if anyone is willing to speak up. I can't wait for the next update 😁👏🏾

Jennifer Hull Shanklin

I hope she ends up with Darien

I loved the chapter of Artemis and onyx. I thought he would tell of neron and she would talk about kiyas problem but I’m glad you kept it about them.

Topeka Roche' Williams

Quick question did Niron and Kiya mate and if so which chapter?

Meaghan Prue

never mind got them and whoa is all i can say

yessss finally creating a much needed TRUSTED friendship 💜 I will still hold out hope for them to be truly together- it will be a long and hard road but, Neron is truly going to put in the effort required to EARN Kiya’s love 💜 So what if the mate bond is weak - they can build it back up by choice 💜

Jamee Moore

I do hope that Ariel gets a second chance mate as well if she has to return.

Saki J. Gibson

we need more!!!

Taina Iosefo

@Marii Solaria get feeling better. Take care of yourself. No need to rush on getting chapters updated. We can wait, your true fans can wait. You’re health is what’s more important. Have a good day!! Safe and speedy recovery!!❤️

Reader-041674

I loved that interlude with Osiris speaking to us directly! I could feel the hatred and darkness within him. nicely done!

kittyXO

I wish you could update more regularly it becomes difficult to stay engrossed in the story and I love it!! xx

Ugh! This was absolutely heartbreaking. I could actually feel Lyra's pain and longing for her child.

such an amazing book! someone comment when 3 is released!

Sherisa Weston

I hope Neron isn't the kne who ends up killing Osiris. After everything he put Kiya and her family through he deserves to meet his end by Kiya's hands

Susan H

I'm getting annoyed with all her secrets.

Nina072

great job as always marri, and I hope it's ok but your illustration of kiya and Artemis is now my lock screen. 💙💙

please get better to continue writing I love the characters Kiya Neron and the gang please let someone kick Otis butt and soon so kiya and Neron can be together maybe Diana and Darain can't become mated? just thinking

I saw the ranking of stories and Unhinged is on the 3rd place. Do they base it on the number of purchased chapters or readers?

Nina072

OMG I DIANA IS LITERALLY GOING "HEY DUM DUM, THIS IS ME! IM DIANA!" AND GOING ALL LASSIE TALKING ABOUT "WHAT IS IT GIRL?" URGH!!!!!!!!!!😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫 MY DUDE!!! COME ON!

Thanks for a great update! I hope you feel better soon.

Meaghan Prue

it can't be that easy to get rid of sanguine there s a catch

Lee

I'm having trouble with opening this book.. oops try again

Meowdel Em

oh Kiya!!! nooo!!! you won’t feel happy when you destroy others. even when they deserve it. May you be led (😉 by your maker @MariiSolaria) into light & love very soon.

Rae Evans

amazing book. can’t wait to see book 3 on here

Reader-857386

What about Odessa’s wolf. Since her wolf spirit, my thought is that she finds a great host like Abi. Abi is human, but the wolf spirit can find a better host suited to her. Just a thought. Anthony has people out, maybe Nadia can find a way to meet one of them. Also, maybe Nadia can be Darians second chance at happiness. Again, just a thought.

After reading chapter 56, I felt compelled to reread the first chapters of Untouchable until the adoption. I feel like Lyra might be the only one that could actually reach Kiya and her inner child, the love between them could help extract her from the darkness. She has trusted her new mother from the moment she met her and loves everything about her -her smell, her touch, her voice. I wonder is Diana is not Niria’s spirit, or her messenger because of the love she is showing to both Kiya and Neron, two people Niria was fond of and who loved her dearly as well.

Meaghan Prue

Hey marii as selenes representative can artemis speak directly with her

Great Book!!

I hope the alpha, beta and gamma and their loved ones are spared. minus anthony and her birth parents. it would be terrible is any harm came to kwame and his family as they were the only ones to fight for her.

Sniderin

Oooooh!!!! Things are haaaappening!!! Eeee!!!! I am so excited to see what happens. #TeamKiyron!!!!

Tori L

I'm itching to read this sooooo badly but I can't start it until Marii has completed it 😫 how many more chapters are you going to add Marii? I'm not very good at piecemeal reading.... that's why 😅 I must BINGE READ THIS!!! 📚🥰❤🐺🦉

Kish Kush

This story has a way of drawing you into each characters life. You want to know where life will take them next and you will wait EAGERLY for the next update because each chapter opens up a new part of lives for you. Not many books can make you feel like that. Marii thank so much for writing this.

Jael Brown

I threw up in my mouth a little there when Osiris kissed Kiya. Man this dark energy taking over Kiya is really powerful to get her to turn to the dark side so fast. "Step into the light Kiya, step into the light!" I hope Nadia and Lucien are on their way to see the Garnet Moon members and help them to get Kiya back. I really hope Kiya doesn't fall to far into the darkness and loses herself in the process. Keep up the good work Marii this was a good update

I’m so happy to know that our girl is still in there💜 I just hope hope hope that she’s strong enough to hold on. I really feel the key players in saving Kiya and healing Helima are : Artemis (she’s always been her light) Diana (she’s very very special I can’t wait to see if my hunch is right about her being Amber) Neron and Raina. These 2 are living up to repentance of their maltreatment of Kiya and it’s important that she can see whole heartedly that they truly are remorseful and love her with all their hearts. I feel it’s crucial that Neron ends his father’s life as well. Neron understands what change is necessary - he just needs to find the courage to end his father’s life. Even though that’s his only family member left. That would be a truly very hard act for him to do. Sorry my thoughts got carried away

Meaghan Prue

so beyond disgusted osiris u evil piece of garbage

AstarteLor

Love love love! You are fabulous!

Jael Brown

Damn for a minute there I thought Asim killed Osiris, but I guess I thought wrong. Valerian had better pull his head out of his but. I get that the Lanes are Raina's parents but he better be glad Lady Seguine didn't kill them, him or Raina. When you sit back and watch someone suffer knowing you could have stopped their suffering at anytime put you were to much of a coward, then you can not be upset when that person retaliates against you. I think if Valerian and Kiya got into a fight Kiya would kill him. Valerian better back down before he gets smacked down he better chill. Great update Marii

Taina Iosefo

I was Finally able to get caught up on reading... love the updates and I missed so much. I’m so wanting to know who Diana is after her coming out and her voice being familiar to Kiya. Love how Neron stepped in to save Kiya and Diana. Kiya is still in there. They need to figure out how to get her wolf back together with Kiya. Awesome.. so excited for the next update whenever it comes.. yay!!

Reader-644933

aaah Marii!! splendid! i noticed you have health issues. you cannot be creative when you are not well (physical or mental). take your time. all of your fans will patiently wait for you to finish writing the book. in the meantime there are other stories to read and keep everybody happy! goodluck with your health and take your time!!!

Mia

I am not liking Osiris at all...I just want someone to find Kiya asap to end his madness.

Meaghan Prue

Hey marii will be getting a backstory of how asim knew where his brother was and why he never came back for him

Thanks for the new chapters, I cried like a baby smh. Really beautiful update.

Michelle Carr

why can’t I see previous chapters they don’t wanna show I’m I the only one having this issue?

kittyXO

Is it just me or do others think he is a hypocrite! he said his father doesn’t deserve a death of old age, then he says that Odessa deserved to die also for what she did to Kiya. But hang on his treatment of Kiya was just as bad! why does he deserve to live? just kind of annoys me how he sometimes becomes forgetful of his past cruelty xx

I still believe in Kiya. The difference between Osiris and Kiya is that... Kiya received the love she deserved from Garnet Pack. She had experienced love and acceptance long before all these happened. I still believe in her strength, with or without Neron or Onyx to save her.

Saki J. Gibson

oh this is coming together great. Jonathan deserves his death. The parents should be spared... because they’re her parents, but they should be exiled. I’m rooting for the reunion of Kiya and Neron. Hopefully he can get to her.

Kathy Mac

how often are the updates?

I think Osiris is lonely for a looong time. No one knew his misery until Kiya appeared, which is why amongst other Avatars, he targeted her. I hope Lyra wouldn't get in danger. She might be able to help her daughter too, I think.

Hollstar

ahhhh! I can’t believe I’m at the end of the updates! I need more! lol how often does this usually get updated?

@Marri Solaria That was amazing! 🥺🥺🥺🥺No words is enough to describe your talents. Wow But I have to admit that im a little bit sad for Ashley and Steve. Because of one piece of shhtt of man they have lost their baby girl. It’s true they are weak but the way I see it is that they really never put the effort to work they apologize to Kira. What I mean is that they basically use the past before the accident to connect with Kiya which it’s quite vague in my opinion. So my questions are: are we gonna know if their relationship is over for good? Is Valerian and Rania And Valerian and Kiya gonna sort out what happened between them specifically the latter? and are the Lanes and Celeste gonna have THE discussion we all waiting for? I have more questions but imma humble myself 😅😅

Jennifer Bennett

I do love this book, despite how long it takes for updates. I am getting frustrated with it.

Meowdel Em

so the owl is Nuria!! I knew it!! I guessed from the garlic croutons she stole!

Trish Yocham

sigh....I love this book...I'm sad it's ending..

Saki J. Gibson

I’m so in love with these last chapters! You are on a roll girl!

Nyasi Joshi

I believe, it will turn out beautifully, if Chevron and kiya end up together.

Lois Withers

oh you are so evil lol how can you just leave a cliff hanger like that to torture us lol amazing but I'm dying here for more lol

Meryam Ahsan

Okay, I’m all for keeping Ariel somehow and sending her to another human, Selene , help!!! also and I know this is an unpopular opinion : I am pro Team Neron+Kiya rather than Darien+Kiya . Sometimes the best are people who learn from their mistakes rather than those who haven’t been tested.

Mia

Im really really disliking Osiris...Please let her pack find a clue to her wherabouts!!!

Sarah

please update

Moonlight Muse

such a good story and chapter, not sure why some people are complaining, if u dont like it dont read it, the character growth of this story are incredible like everyone has a story and solid personality and if we want to see nerons redemption its not guna b a quick thing, the writer has done an incredible job on it, keep up the amazing work marii, im constantly checking insta for updates and was so happy there was two this morning whem i woke up

LuciannLara DonWelch

oh my goodness love love love how you showed the caring, love and concern of her family it's so accurate and wonderful, I was in tears awesome keep up the great work

Justmee

----> 😳 Osiris was triggered from being compared to Titian? It's almost as if he doesn't see their similarities 🙄! He hasn't forced himself on Kiya, yet 🤔! However, everything else is still the same. He's a scary dude. Question, the cufflinks that he's placed on Kiya. Are they only used to keep Kiya weak? Or can he used them to summon her powers at his will? Lawdddd, I'm so nervous. Another fabulous update 🥳💥💞

Nina072

HA! I FORKING CALLED IT! I CALLED IT! I had a feeling zircon was going to be disbanded, now I wonder if I'm right about that merger. lol great update as always marii!! how awesome was Ariel coming back y'all? what a sweet chapter that was! And its Mara, such a sweet character, thank god our boy got a happy ending finally. I'm intrigued by mara and her reactions, I'm very curious to what shes keeping a secret; Maybe it's just anxiety. Darien will love her either way and will make sure shes always good, they'll be happy.

Dr Megha

it's very costly

Sherisa Weston

Marri is Kiya and Neron's relationship going to be permanently completed at the end of this book? Like whether they just stay as friends or become a couple and mates? Also, what is book 3 going to be about and is it going to be the final book about them and in total?

Sherisa Weston

I hope Osiris thinks on how Kiya compared him to Alpha Titan. That most likely won't change the way he is though because he is so hellbent on revenge and hating all werewolves when his beef should only be with Zircon Moon since they did him wrong, well not the current members but they are also corrupt. I hope Nadia and the man who helped Kiya and the other avatars are in fact alive

Jael Brown

I am glad Neron was able to reach Kiya, but interested in seeing what happens between Kiya and Osiris. To play with her mind and manipulate her the way that he did was dead wrong

Nicolina LaCentra

OMG! i hope she can escape! 😬

Amanda Rains

I think as hurtful as Neron was to Kiya, he is a major key to the healing and security she needs. I gather from all described of the mate bond, it changes the two beings perspective, feelings and emotions towards who their mate is. perhaps marking Kiya for the sole purpose to save her soul from darkness which she heald enormous morality against giving into due to a part of who she truely is naturally. She still has a choice. She needs a love and connection that helps heal that scar in her soul. It was just a thought. I am curious to see how the rest of this journey plays out. So much thinking and relatability to the abusive side of society and family. Amazing work Marii!

Keith Renner

so the way is sounds darkness wins even if hamila "comes" back sou ds like she fell & became a disgrace to the gift given her & another book where the Goddess just doesnt care at all

Nicole Pace

this is why I'm patiently waiting for this story to be completed

Roberta Polston Goodnough

mine won't update it keeps saying oops! try again??

wow great chapters Marii!!! hope your are feeling better 💐💐

Meryam Ahsan

Two wrongs don’t make a right, that being said I hope that the others ask for her forgiveness & Kiya also asks theirs. behaving like the people who have wronged us makes us no better than them. I still think they should all have escaped with their lives and then had Neron hold them accountable as alpha for their sins. Then it would have created some balance.

I know it’s sad, but I appreciated hearing more about Neron’s upbringing. Obviously he wasn’t as abused as Kiya, but he is still a victim of the violence of his dad. Now, it doesn’t absolve him of turning around and abusing Kiya in turn, because he had the choice not to and chose wrong. Neron’s self-realizations are coming out big time, perhaps 5 years delayed, but very much needed.

MzDiva1987

hope you feel better Marii Solaria

MirahLove

why my twisted mind falling for Osiris now 😩 it’s clearly a true fact that I love bad boys 😂

Jael Brown

Oh wow some people are just so rude. Marii you take your time I appreciate and respect that you chose not to give us crappy chapters but good quality ones. It can't not be easy doing what you do and people forget there is this thing called writers block and the have to figure out what direction to move the story in. Take your time your fans aren't going anywhere and we will still be here when the next chapter or chapters get updated.

love both books can’t wait for the next update

Alyssa

That conversation between Osirius and Jonathan was chilling when Osirius said that Jonathan would have kept Kiya for himself if she weren’t Neron’s mate. He is a sick individual!!! I want that Jonathan and Osirius to die at the hands of Kiya!!!

marina simeonoglou

The book is already written so please provide the rest of the chapters.

Hollstar

ooooh great chapter!

Gee Higgins

ok so she's just disclosed the rape..why does she have to stay there I'd be gone

when will the next update be? I’m dying here to know what happens next. please