Unhinged Comments
Nina072
awesome as always marii, and thanks for tears during Artemis chapter; definitely needed that with my coffee.
04/26/2021 16:29laterseen
sounds like multiple personality disorder
04/26/2021 14:58Saki J. Gibson
I’m so excited! Thank you for this 🥰 Love the victory of Artemis and Kiya reunited
04/26/2021 13:08Cata Deveza-Yap
Oh my! I think Osiris would go ballistic seeing Asim again... And that he's alive all this time. Why did Arty change to human? I'm thought, Kiya is her human? 🤔 And lastly, could Lady Sangguine be in the present when somwhere in the other realm, she's wrestling with Kiya?
04/26/2021 11:11
Brandie
Thank you for the updates they were AMAZING as always! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
04/26/2021 11:10Lisa Essler
The author has written a great story, but there are some syntax and grammatical mistakes, ir using the wrong word e.g. 'rift raft ' when it is clear that 'riff-raff' is what was meant. Small mistakes I know, but they do make a difference.
04/26/2021 10:49
Hollstar
omg what a cliffhanger!!! 😲 love it!
04/26/2021 10:06
Sarah
I hope this has a happy ending such a great back but it a heart breaking to reading right now
04/26/2021 07:59
Moonlight Muse
her feelings towards neron make me so wishful to see them happy together 😍 i kno he messed up in past but he has grown n come along so so well,
04/26/2021 07:37LuciannLara DonWelch
Yes Artemis!!!! we missed you!! awesome chapters!!!! hope your recovery is going good your health comes first @Marii thank you for the awesome updates
04/26/2021 06:40
Doris Lopez
great chapters this week so exciting Can't wait for the next one!
04/26/2021 05:19
Sonia McLeod
wow well if he won't kill his father I will it deserves it 😘😘🇬🇧
04/26/2021 03:34Gwendolyn D. Pough
Me to Neron: Do it! Do it! Do it!!!!!!!
04/26/2021 03:05
Brittney Allen
Great chapters!!! My favorite was Artemis. I just love it when its from the wolves point of view.❤❤❤
04/26/2021 03:04Moonlight Muse
amazing chapters love it!
04/26/2021 02:24Jael Brown
OMG AND WOW ALL ST THE SAME TIME!!! First Osiris's brother shows up out of the blue and he is certainly not dead. Then we have Artemis battling her way through the darkness to get to Kits. And then Kiya lays the smack down on Lady Seguine. And lastly Neron walks into a trap even Ray Charles and Stevie Wonder could see. You have truly out done yourself with this update Marii. You go girl!!! Oh I forgot to mention the Lanes and Jonathan giving up on Kits, like duh that's what got you all into this mess in the first place. I wonder if Neron has it in him to kill his father, we shall see.
04/26/2021 02:15Jessica Carr
OMG!!! come on Kiya!! Don’t let the darkness win👀👀👀
04/26/2021 01:47
ShyShy
Thank you for the updates! Please continue to rest & take care of yourself 🥰
04/26/2021 01:35ShyShy
YES! Come on Kiya - fight!!!
04/26/2021 01:14ShyShy
Great Update 🥰
04/26/2021 00:58Hollstar
ahhhh! I can’t believe I’m at the end of the updates! I need more! lol how often does this usually get updated?
04/22/2021 09:17Sarah
please update
04/22/2021 07:26
AstarteLor
ha, love this story so much but I'm so tired of the word amalgamation or any variation of it.
04/22/2021 03:09
spazz 31
I love this book! can't wait for a new update! I bet it's going to be amazing just as every other has been. can't wait to see the specialist in Diana. we all have our thoughts..I'm going to have to re read this more than once! luv luv luv u as an author!
04/21/2021 22:31Sarah
please update
04/20/2021 17:55Cheryl P Westmoreland
OMGosh I’m so nervous with this chapter
04/19/2021 12:02rita lora
I think Nerón will kill his father so Kira can get back to her light status
04/19/2021 04:33Cata Deveza-Yap
Fight, Kiya! Fight!
04/18/2021 08:21
Sherisa Weston
whoaaa the latest chapter was so intense. I loved it so much
04/18/2021 02:41
Sarah Wolfe
So worth the wait! I’m buying the series when available.
04/17/2021 22:56Kelly Rohrer
in my opinion - I hope Lady S does whip and torture Neron and his dad - though not kill Neron. I hope that Onyx can find a way to release Artemis from her prison in time to save their humans. I think Diana is going to be a very important role as well.
04/17/2021 21:41Jael Brown
So my girl Kits is in the sunken place (love that line) it can't be easy being held hostage in your own body being tormented by the demons of your past. Kiya is truly burntout and I get it, to constantly have to do the right thing, even when people have done you wrong is very tiresome especially when those people have no regrets for wronging you in the first place. I hope Artemis resurfaces again, not only is she Kiya's best friend but she is her voice of reason and she helps her to be strong. Although I do think it's kinda of awesome that Kits has been kicking ass without having to transform into her wolf. I just love Lyra and Nikolai they are truly her parents and are worried and concerned about her, which is something I have yet to see from the Lanes. It's true you to have to birth a child into this world to love them and be there for them. I can not wait to see what Fate will be dealt out to Jonathan, Neron and the Lanes. Great update as always Marii.
04/17/2021 12:53
Meowdel Em
i miss Artemis !!!!
04/17/2021 08:02
Laur S
not asking for updates just want to know what the schedule has been like so I can pause for a little. Anyone know once a month or is this book on pause?
04/16/2021 18:42Laur S
Does anyone know since the author is out of commission for now if there are updates every two weeks, once a month or this book is on temporarily pause. I’m starting to forget things that happened and having to reread.
04/16/2021 18:39Nicole Pace
this is why I'm patiently waiting for this story to be completed
04/15/2021 09:05
Meaghan Prue
how many times do we need to tell you trolls to be Patient. the rest of us are paying good money for this book we want PERFECTION AND IF MARII HAS TOO TAKE A FEW DAYS TO DO THAT THAN SO FRIGGEN BE IT. ALSO SHE HAD SURGERY LAST MONTH AND SO HER HEALTH IS MORE IMPORTANT SO STOP BEING A BUNCH OF TWO YEAR OLDS WHEN THEY CANNOT HAVE A COOKIE BEFORE DINNER. GROW UP DO SOMETHING ELSE READ OTHER BOOKS AND ABOVE ALL SHUT UP!!!!
04/14/2021 20:03Debbie Carslake
update already plz
04/14/2021 13:20
Heather Shay
Thanks for the new chapters, I cried like a baby smh. Really beautiful update.
04/12/2021 12:14Nina072
great job as always marri, and I hope it's ok but your illustration of kiya and Artemis is now my lock screen. 💙💙
04/10/2021 22:07Nina072
OMG I DIANA IS LITERALLY GOING "HEY DUM DUM, THIS IS ME! IM DIANA!" AND GOING ALL LASSIE TALKING ABOUT "WHAT IS IT GIRL?" URGH!!!!!!!!!!😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫 MY DUDE!!! COME ON!
04/10/2021 22:02Meaghan Prue
Hey marii as selenes representative can artemis speak directly with her
04/10/2021 19:24Meaghan Prue
i wonder if she did feel him near and try but was blocked by a wall of darkness
04/10/2021 18:08Meaghan Prue
I dont know about anyone else but i am missing my girl artemis. How lonely she must feel trapped in darkness it would have been awesome if onyx could have reached her when they were close.
04/10/2021 18:00
Mez
Hey...does anyone else think we should or need to see a glimpse of Neron’s inner child? Because I think with Neron struggling to be his true self, combating his intense guilt, and how to deal with his father might stem from HIS unhealed trauma. Seeing his mom and Nuria is a good step in the right direction but I’m concerned with how he’s so content on dying and letting his guilt fester. He’s done shitty things and has definitely grown from them, but would he ever let go of his guilt because it looks like he doesn’t want to 😥
04/10/2021 17:51
kittyXO
Is it just me or do others think he is a hypocrite! he said his father doesn’t deserve a death of old age, then he says that Odessa deserved to die also for what she did to Kiya. But hang on his treatment of Kiya was just as bad! why does he deserve to live? just kind of annoys me how he sometimes becomes forgetful of his past cruelty xx
04/10/2021 17:18
Marii Solaria
Hello everyone! I created a Facebook group you all can join to talk to each other, discuss theories and recent events of the book, and so much more. You can either search up “Author Marii Solaria” in the Facebook search bar or follow this link: https://www.facebook.com/groups/944508619691424/
04/10/2021 15:41Tori L
I'm itching to read this sooooo badly but I can't start it until Marii has completed it 😫 how many more chapters are you going to add Marii? I'm not very good at piecemeal reading.... that's why 😅 I must BINGE READ THIS!!! 📚🥰❤🐺🦉
04/10/2021 05:28
S Andrews
the cliff hanger...REALLY?! so when is the next update? I love the book but I'm so cross with the lack of ending.
04/10/2021 02:35Jael Brown
Wowwwwww mind blown from these chapters. That dream had me in tears. Neron really need some reassurance from his mom and sister that they didn't hate his guys and that they weren't disappointed in him. Will Neron be able to save Kiya only time will tell, but I hope so. Where in any of these chapters did it say that Diana is Nuria, because I missed it. Diana was pointing at the picture but she could have been pointing to Neron's mom but who knows. Marii this update was awesome!!!!
04/10/2021 01:31Meowdel Em
so the owl is Nuria!! I knew it!! I guessed from the garlic croutons she stole!
04/09/2021 16:57LuciannLara DonWelch
oh my gosh!!!! oh my gosh!!!! I love these chapters!!! oh Neron keep fighting and don't give up love wins love heals patience, understanding and love work wonders for abused children
04/09/2021 16:12Saki J. Gibson
I’m so in love with these last chapters! You are on a roll girl!
04/09/2021 15:59
miasiacheyenne
damn those last 2 chapters were good! am I the only one who is anxiously waiting for Johnathon and her biological parents death? no just me? 😂
04/09/2021 13:14Christina Johnson
I love these books. Thank you for updating even though you are not 100%. Get well soon. I loved how he got to see his mum and sister. x
04/09/2021 10:54Kelly Rohrer
I love Onyx 🖤
04/09/2021 09:24Sherisa Weston
oh my goodness Nuria or the mom is the owl!!! I feel like that last chapter confirmed it but which one?
04/09/2021 04:47Sherisa Weston
Kiya, and her friends along with Neron are all in the 20s right? Including Raina and so forth?
04/09/2021 04:33Sherisa Weston
I hope Neron isn't the kne who ends up killing Osiris. After everything he put Kiya and her family through he deserves to meet his end by Kiya's hands
04/09/2021 04:30
Spectral Beauty
Ahh! Such a great chapter! Neron finally got to *see* his sister and mom again! 😭
04/09/2021 03:31Nina072
as always great job Marii, love the updates. it's getting so damn good!!!!!
04/06/2021 20:44Sherisa Weston
I wonder what was up with Phoebe
04/06/2021 12:46
Yahaida Perez-Lemon
This story is getting so gooooooood!!
04/06/2021 07:11Reader-644933
aaah Marii!! splendid! i noticed you have health issues. you cannot be creative when you are not well (physical or mental). take your time. all of your fans will patiently wait for you to finish writing the book. in the meantime there are other stories to read and keep everybody happy! goodluck with your health and take your time!!!
04/05/2021 18:19Saki J. Gibson
oh this is coming together great. Jonathan deserves his death. The parents should be spared... because they’re her parents, but they should be exiled. I’m rooting for the reunion of Kiya and Neron. Hopefully he can get to her.
04/05/2021 00:52Jael Brown
First of all great update Marii!!! Hmmm so Jonathan is being tortured, well good he definitely deserves it. He really needs to let it go, Kiya has nothing to with the death of his wife and daughter. The conversation that he had with Osiris really struck a nerve with him, he probably did want to keep Kiya all to himself. And the fact that he doesn't see anything wrong with what the Prince family has done over the years generation after generation is just crazy to me. Jonathan can't even see that him and Titan are so much alike not just in looks but in actions as well. He is so far gone he probably doesn't see anything wrong with what he did to Kiya, his pain has corrupted his heart and clouded his better judgement. I knew Nadia and Lucien would end up together. The two of them suffered alot by the hands of Osiris and they went through alot so it stands to reason they would turn toneach other now. The question is will Osiris allow them to be together and has he even rejected her? Lyra's bluntness is so funny because she reminds me alot of my mom!! Hopefully they will find Kiya, I just hope it's sooner rather than later. Thanks for the great update Marii and I can't wait for the next one!!! Happy Easter 🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰
04/04/2021 20:04Taina Iosefo
Man I’m glad the family’s getting closer and some answers to how they can find Kiya. So excited to see what happens next.
04/04/2021 19:49
Alyssa
That conversation between Osirius and Jonathan was chilling when Osirius said that Jonathan would have kept Kiya for himself if she weren’t Neron’s mate. He is a sick individual!!! I want that Jonathan and Osirius to die at the hands of Kiya!!!
04/04/2021 17:57Cata Deveza-Yap
Oh that scene with Nadia and Lucien! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 It's nice to laugh somehow!
04/04/2021 12:01kittyXO
I wish you could update more regularly it becomes difficult to stay engrossed in the story and I love it!! xx
04/03/2021 15:04Michelle Carr
why can’t I see previous chapters they don’t wanna show I’m I the only one having this issue?
04/03/2021 05:05
Kathy Mac
are you here manager or something that you answer foe her?
04/03/2021 00:57Kathy Mac
yeah there's nothing on her Instagram and it doesn't answer the question when and how often are the updates
04/03/2021 00:56Kathy Mac
when are the updates
04/02/2021 23:35Kathy Mac
how often are the updates?
04/02/2021 11:26Vicki Mayhue
AH-HA!! I KNEW IT!! Johnathan is totally in on it, huh?
04/02/2021 06:43Kerrie Lumsden
How many chapters to the end?
04/02/2021 04:55Reader-045991
I really bought this whole book and now all the chapters are locked again 😐 bruh
04/02/2021 03:06Meaghan Prue
because of Easter will there be an update this weekend or no
04/01/2021 21:13Lee
I'm having trouble with opening this book.. oops try again
04/01/2021 20:47Emily York
is any body els having issues reading the story? everything I try to click on it, it says oops
03/31/2021 20:57
Amanda Rains
Marii, how is your recovery from surgery going, if I may ask?
03/31/2021 14:38Debbie Boston
ok I sure cant wait!!
03/31/2021 00:18Kayla
hi Marii, do you happen to have a social media account I could follow for updates and such? love the stories! ❤️
03/30/2021 23:50Saki J. Gibson
Icsnt wait for more updates. I’m hooked! 😁
03/30/2021 00:19
ballen282004
is there an issue with logging in with Facebook account because I cant.
03/29/2021 18:58Taina Iosefo
I was Finally able to get caught up on reading... love the updates and I missed so much. I’m so wanting to know who Diana is after her coming out and her voice being familiar to Kiya. Love how Neron stepped in to save Kiya and Diana. Kiya is still in there. They need to figure out how to get her wolf back together with Kiya. Awesome.. so excited for the next update whenever it comes.. yay!!
03/28/2021 23:44Sharon Jones Linder
as my anticipation increases I am on the edge of my seat can’t wait for the next chapters
03/28/2021 19:06LaLouna Jos
I'm trying to read but it says oops try again, what is going on please
03/28/2021 18:43Debbie Boston
wow what a cliffhanger!! impatiently waiting.....❤❤
03/28/2021 17:14Christina Johnson
I can't open the book, I keep getting oops! try again too. ☹
03/28/2021 12:50Roberta Polston Goodnough
mine won't update it keeps saying oops! try again??
03/28/2021 07:52
Tanya Johnson
is anyone else unable to read the updates? I've been trying all day and it keeps saying oops try again :(
03/28/2021 02:20
sawanee
Diana...... only sticking with Neron and Kiya...... Marii, could Diana be Neron's sister and Kiya's childhood friend..? that's a genious story inside the bigger story.... !
03/27/2021 22:46Sherisa Weston
whew that was amazing! I really hope Kiya does not kill her biological parents. I don't care for Johnathan but no matter how much she hates her parents I think she will really regret it. Maybe she will bond with them a bit after she takes them to wherever. Maybe they could help bring her back even a little bit. At this point I am doubtful but who knows. I think all the killing she did, she will regret to some extent since this is not who Kiya truly is. I think so far she has killed one person, Odessa in her Lady Sanguine phase I don't think she will regret that at all like with Tristan.
03/27/2021 12:16
marina simeonoglou
have there been any more updates? 🤗🤗🤗🤗
03/27/2021 08:27
Miche❣️❣️
Did you update today? I went to it and all the chapters are gone
03/26/2021 23:39Arianna Espinoza
do you update weekly?
03/26/2021 22:27LaToya Grier
why did all my chapters lock back again? I went to go read the latest updated and I got an error and seen all my chapters relocked
03/26/2021 22:06marina simeonoglou
my apologies. seems someone else has the same story. it would be nice to have some more chapters as the tension is growing within the story 😁😉
03/26/2021 18:26
